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Description I recently solicited my watchers to ask me writing questions that I would then attempt to answer in a writing guide such as this. This article is my first response, and there will be many more to come.

I've been asked to give advice on ways a writer can begin to put words on a page. The bottom line is as simple as this: sit your butt down and write.

Duh, right? It's the only way I know to actually write.

Sure, sitting your butt in a chair is easy, but getting your fingers to move and stay moving is a challenge. Here are three things that have helped me.

1) Have a goal.

Your goal can be as simple as "describe the person in this picture" or as ambitious as "write 1,000 words of my novel." Having a goal will drive you forward and motivate you to keep writing. Whatever you do, don't move your butt from your chair until you accomplish your goal.

Other practical goals include setting a timer, writing to the end of a chapter or scene, and completing a particular section of an outline or number of pages. Goals vary from person to person. Find one that works for you and just do it.

2) Get in the mood.

I don't know about you, but it's hard for me to write if I don't "feel" like it. Having a goal helps motivate me, but it's still a drag if I'm not feeling it.

Some simple ways to get in the mood include listening to music, reading a book or manga, reading nonfiction on how to write, listing to writing podcasts, browsing image galleries, and watching TV shows and movies that are particularly good. A favorite pen and notebook can be a turn-on, too. I also get a lot of great ideas while taking a walk or showering. And right before I go to bed. Take the time to write down your ideas or even write the scene that just popped into your head if you don't have obligations the next morning.

If you're writing something you've already started, it can sometimes help to go back and read over your previous work. A word of caution: don't edit it! Trust me, I've done this enough to know that it can seriously ruin the mood of moving forward.

3) Know what you're going to write next.

No matter how badly you want to start writing something new and put words on a page, you can't if you don't know what to write next. Maybe you excel at seat-of-your-pants writing, but I can't write a sentence without having some sort of destination. I'm definitely a proponent of outlining, and I always develop an ending first because I have to have something to work toward.

If you have an outline--even if it's just a mental one--you will have a road map of where to go with your story and will always know what to write next. Even if you don't know the end, know the next scene. If you don't, you will get stuck and will not be able to form new words.

If you're starting a new story, the same thing applies. You'll have a hard time starting if you don't have at least some idea of where you're going and a mental outline at the bare minimum.

Maybe you do know what to write next, but you don't know how to write it. Maybe it's a court scene, and you have no idea how trials and lawyers work. Now what? Research. Google it, watch a documentary, ask someone who knows, visit your local library. Find out.

Not knowing something is not an excuse for not writing. We live in the age of information where the answer to anything is one click away. We as writers can no longer say, "Write what you know." It's time to start saying, "Write what you can know."

So maybe you've done all of this and still aren't feeling it. You've got the dreaded "writer's block." Now what?

First of all, if you've tried all of the above, you can be sure your writer's block is not due to laziness. It's mostly likely caused by a problem in your story that you need to identify and fix before you can move forward.

What in the plot doesn't make sense and is preventing story progression? Are you forcing a character to do something he or she really wouldn't do? Do the characters lack a third dimension, and are they stagnant instead of changing and working toward a goal? Does your story lack conflict and forward momentum?

If so, you've got a problem. Once you identify what it is, take the time to figure out what you need to do differently in order to make the story work again. You don't have to go back and fix what you've already written before you can move on with the story. Just figure it out and keep writing as if the story had been that way all along. Finish it first, then go back and fix everything. I've done it before, and it works. Remember, going back is the enemy of moving forward and putting new words on paper.

Now sit your butt down and write. Stop procrastinating, close your internet browser, turn off the TV, and just write. Have a goal, get in the mood, know what to write, and do it.

Simple as that.
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damaszener2 [2016-11-28 20:36:43 +0000 UTC]

If you want to write a book, don't try to write 20 pages for your chapter in one day. That's not possible.
If you have written one page on a day, it is as good as five pages a day.
Write in a time, when you are feeling good, that can be at the morning or in the night.

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illuminara In reply to damaszener2 [2016-12-02 17:52:29 +0000 UTC]

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OwletJessa555 [2016-11-28 18:59:07 +0000 UTC]

Yep! When I tried to write for 30 days, and I did make it to have my crappy novel. I agree that it's good way is keep writing until you finish your first draft. I noticed a lot of new writers are worried about prefect. Just don't! In my opinion, writing is about fun and learn from experience.

Thank you for great tips!

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illuminara In reply to OwletJessa555 [2016-11-30 00:04:35 +0000 UTC]

Exactly! Well said.

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aslemkidnapper In reply to ??? [2016-11-28 17:27:59 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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illuminara In reply to aslemkidnapper [2016-11-29 23:57:11 +0000 UTC]

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aslemkidnapper In reply to illuminara [2016-11-30 12:10:36 +0000 UTC]

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Nnaly [2016-11-28 16:36:14 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD, you deserved it!

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illuminara In reply to Nnaly [2016-11-29 23:57:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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luna-lostkid [2016-11-28 16:22:37 +0000 UTC]

Ey, this is awesome!, but I stil l have a few questions:
Have you realised about how difficult it is to have a pen on your hand and dont move it a lot covering all your hand in blue ink?, or just being there, with a pen/pencil and a paper, and control yourself not to draw? or simply not distracting with all the little things that- OH, LOOK! , A FLY!- surround you?

Anyway, appart from my obvius concentration problem, it usually gets hard to make the plot. You have a beggining (Nice!😃), you have characters who look tridimemsional (Brilliant!😌), and you have an awesome end (Well done!😊), but THEN, you realise you have no plot. And I simply don't know, how to make characters move from somewhere to someotherplace without using the magic map of plot covinions. And, in the end, the plot is just the character running from here to there while people tell him/her their lives.

Also, the fights, I don't know, but I think that a sword fight could he cool. This is easy in the cinema, characters fight for half an hour, *beep*, *kabaam* swaaaash* but, How do I write it?, I can't just put: "They, ummmmmm, fighted stuff".

Another point (I'm writting the Holy Bible) is the way I write. It's a bit desesperating, because, most of times, me speaking is a bunch of jokes joined together that have an actual meaning, and, quite similar while I'm thinking, but, when I'm writing (specially in Spanish, wich is my mother tongue [sorry if there's any grammar or spelling mistake and I'm stabbing the diccionary, I swear is not intend]) I start putting cultivated (not 100% sure about that word, hope Google Translator made a nice work) works, what is nice but then I have no way to write the other part, the jokes, the activity, the light of the thing. {I just made an incredibly long sentence, wow…}.

Well, I think that's all, thank you for the atention, and congratulations on your dayly deviation!
(⬆uoh, look, an accidental rhyme appeared!)

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illuminara In reply to luna-lostkid [2016-12-03 01:48:23 +0000 UTC]

To answer your first question, you just have to practice and train your brain to focus on the words you're trying to write. But seriously, doodling is normal! Writing is a lot of thinking, and it's perfectly natural for your hands to keep moving while your mind works. This is an actual page from the manuscript I'm working on:

 

In my experience, writing by hand actually helps improve your focus pretty fast because it removes all the distractions of the internet and whatever else might be just a click away on your computer or digital device. But focus isn't something that just happens by using a pen instead of a keyboard. Just like mastering any skill, you really have to work at it! But it's worth it.

So here's the thing about plot: it's merely a series of events that gets your character from one state of being to another. It does you no good if you don't know where you want your characters to start in the beginning of the story and then end up in the end. That's called character arc, and plot is the chain of events that makes this change possible. Here's a really thorough resource for you: 

Story Structure for Non-ConformistsI’m sure you’ve all heard someone bemoaning the importance of story structure, probably a die-hard outliner like me who obsessively plans out their story before they start writing a word of their first draft. If you’re new to the novel-writing scene or a seat-of-your-pants writer (often called a “pantser”), you may be wondering what story structure is, exactly, and why you should bother with it. After all, first drafts are about discovering you story for the first time, so why do you need to worry about planning it out ahead of time?
Well, here’s the thing: story structure is the skeleton of a story. If you don’t build the structure first, you may very well end up with a blubberous blob of goo, a deformed mutant creature, or a story that falls down the moment a reader steps inside. Not really the outcome you’re hoping for. Not to mention the danger of falling into the quicksand of writer’s block halfway into your story because you r

This tumblr is a great resource for learning about how to write different sorts of fight scenes: howtofightwrite.tumblr.com

David McCullough said something I really like: “Writing is thinking. To write well is to think clearly. That's why it's so hard." You can learn to think more clearly by practicing your critical thinking skills. Learning to give speeches and debate helped me a lot, so consider taking a class in one of those things if you're able or at least do some of your own research. Also, this article might help: 

How to Improve Your Writing Style
While I’ve written articles about writing style in the past, they were designed mostly to define what style is and didn’t provide much help for improvement. This article contains some practical tips I’ve discovered that will actually help you improve your style and hopefully provide a foundation for why good style matters. I believe good style is important for many reasons, but mostly because I want my readers to feel like the time they spent with my story was worthwhile, pleasant, and maybe even a little enlightening.
“All readers come to fiction as willing accomplices to your lies. Such is the basic goodwill contract made the moment we pick up a work of fiction.” – Steve Almond 
“Use the time of a total stranger in such a way that he or she will not feel the time was wasted.” – Kurt Vonnegut 
1) Be clear. 
“To be clear is the first duty of a writer; to charm and to please are graces to be acquired later

I hope at least some of that helps. Good luck!

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duskyfur In reply to ??? [2016-11-28 15:57:43 +0000 UTC]

So much inspiration! I'm just going to go write something now...   

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illuminara In reply to duskyfur [2016-11-29 23:48:08 +0000 UTC]

Excellent!   

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DanksForTheMemeries [2016-11-28 11:26:59 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD

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illuminara In reply to DanksForTheMemeries [2016-11-29 23:47:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Lintu47 [2016-11-28 10:12:19 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!
Have a nice day!

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illuminara In reply to Lintu47 [2016-11-29 23:47:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I hope you have a great day, too!

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Lintu47 In reply to illuminara [2016-12-12 19:27:12 +0000 UTC]

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illuminara In reply to Lintu47 [2016-12-13 01:08:48 +0000 UTC]

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LeviaDraconia In reply to ??? [2016-11-28 08:47:01 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!

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illuminara In reply to LeviaDraconia [2016-11-29 23:47:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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AbigailBC In reply to ??? [2016-10-01 18:01:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh, aren't you one of motivational speakers, having your own lectures? I'd really like to going for one like this and you made me really motivated. Especially with the last sentences. Thank you!

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illuminara In reply to AbigailBC [2016-10-02 00:48:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm not a motivation speaker, but I'd love to be someday. I'm glad it helped motivate you, and good luck with your writing!

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AbigailBC In reply to illuminara [2016-10-02 14:48:54 +0000 UTC]

I hope your wish come true one day!

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illuminara In reply to AbigailBC [2016-10-02 21:29:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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tmpst24myst In reply to ??? [2016-08-14 18:57:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again for all of the tutorials you've shared!

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illuminara In reply to tmpst24myst [2016-08-15 19:43:04 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! I hope you can get some good use out of them.

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tmpst24myst In reply to illuminara [2016-10-09 17:39:27 +0000 UTC]

Yes, they have been very useful for myself and I've even been able to teach my son a thing or two by referring to your tutorials. He's 11, smart as I'm not sure yet, but very intelligent. I'm not the creator in this family, he will be or my younger boy will be. Their minds are so creative! I can hardly wait until they can legally have an account here. Anyhow, thanks again! I'll be sure to mention you in the description of anything I can write well enough to share. You're tutorials are very good and helpful for me. 
Dae

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RainingStars13 [2011-05-02 03:55:58 +0000 UTC]

this is very true, this is what I needed. Thanks for article

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ClockworkLogic In reply to ??? [2011-03-21 19:29:52 +0000 UTC]

I've gotta say, I read this last night and it's completely true, this guide really helped come up with ideas to patch up those annoying little plot holes that riddled the story I'm working on right now, your advice is really helpful. I'm glad I found your articles ( if only by complete randomness)

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illuminara In reply to ClockworkLogic [2011-03-28 02:42:39 +0000 UTC]

Glad it helped! I'm only drawing from my own personal experience, so I don't always know how well my advice will work for anyone else.

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ClockworkLogic In reply to illuminara [2011-03-28 19:42:47 +0000 UTC]

Well advice that comes from experience is usually better than advice you pull out of ...thin air.
anyways, thank you for your advice, again.

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sladekyon [2010-08-31 23:14:42 +0000 UTC]

I have a question, how do you get that image for preview of your deviation? When I'm going to upload a preview, the window says it has to be 150x150 only, and when its uploaded, the thumbnail is still the text preview, and not the image. I'm confused.

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illuminara In reply to sladekyon [2010-09-15 15:54:55 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm . . . I'm not really sure. This is in the tutorial category, so that's probably why it let me use a bigger image. I think you can only use 150x150 for regular lit deviations.

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xXWolfChildXx In reply to ??? [2010-08-10 03:45:30 +0000 UTC]

0.0 Thank for writing this!!

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illuminara In reply to xXWolfChildXx [2010-08-10 16:52:00 +0000 UTC]

Glad you liked it!

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Dawn5 In reply to ??? [2010-07-18 14:00:24 +0000 UTC]

Wow O_O...this will so help me and yeah, I really need to get into the mood to make my story...I am sooo busy that I can't even continue it :< sigh...but man, I will never ever edit a chapter again.

Yesh! I have an outline but I don't know how to make the words and what not...it's like a lost my way of writing somehow...Gosh, I get too worried if I don't have the right info so that's why I do a lot of research O_O and dang, it takes way too long for me to understand...hahahahhaha!

My feel or way of writing a story in a computer is a lot different than writing in paper. :\ Huhuhuhu... Thanks for the help! *whispering to herself*A goal! Goal, goal, goal...

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ShankSilenzikilu [2010-06-30 20:50:12 +0000 UTC]

Why didn't I ever even consider writing an outline?! I need to go do that NOW!!

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illuminara In reply to ShankSilenzikilu [2010-07-01 15:45:23 +0000 UTC]

lol Outlines help a lot of people, but they hinder others. Try it and see if it works for you. If not, just do what works.

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ShankSilenzikilu In reply to illuminara [2010-07-01 17:09:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure it'll work for me! Now that I think about it, I usually need a well-outlined plan before I do anything.

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ZeroRinas In reply to ??? [2010-06-14 22:10:36 +0000 UTC]

...Turn-on? I didn't know a pen and a notebook could turn someone on...lol

I like this article. Good work!

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ArtStudio101 In reply to ZeroRinas [2016-11-29 00:49:51 +0000 UTC]

Lol! Best dirty joke ever! At least that's how I read it. 😛

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All-These-Kiwis In reply to ??? [2010-05-25 03:49:06 +0000 UTC]

This is a very helpful guide. Thank you for writing it<3

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illuminara In reply to All-These-Kiwis [2010-05-25 04:45:28 +0000 UTC]

Glad you liked it!

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Charanty In reply to ??? [2010-03-18 12:52:58 +0000 UTC]

Great advice!

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Aracely [2010-03-08 04:18:20 +0000 UTC]

What also helps is just writing parts of the novel. I use to start a story and never finish it because my interest would die because it was so boring and tiring to go in order. Sometimes I write one paragraph scenes. It helps make an outline of a scene or conflict and it gets it out of my system.

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illuminara In reply to Aracely [2010-03-10 02:56:40 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that can definitely work. I outline almost all of my scenes because I just can't get going in the right direction if I don't.

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Wolvenmoon In reply to ??? [2010-03-05 04:40:56 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I'm so slow to read these guides as I only read when I'm receptive to new information..

My biggest issue with writing is that I have very vivid scenes in my head, and they occur at very specific points in the story. Right now I'm stuck leading up to them. I.E. With Garuvian Origins: "The Core", the most vivid images were the ship going down the maelstrom, Dacia getting his hand blown off, and Belen first seeing one of the uh...zombie..things...that I will not say what they are specifically yet.

But my vivid imagery in "The Core" doesn't come until much further on in the storyline. In "The Surface", it's actually quite far in.

In the meantime I'm trying to figure out how to get the characters from their starting positions to where I want them to be in an interesting way without it being completely and utterly dull.

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goRillA-iNK [2010-03-03 20:25:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I needed that.

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illuminara In reply to goRillA-iNK [2010-03-04 01:51:34 +0000 UTC]

Glad it helped!

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