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ilolamai โ Commission:For vampyou.com 02
Published: 2011-10-12 14:42:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 28599; Favourites: 1288; Downloads: 1059
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Second commission for vampyou.com [link]Vampire character.
Program: SAI Paint Tool
Any critique is welcome.
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Commission closed.Open again 15 october 2011.
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Comments: 291
loool for some reason my eyes were focused to the landscape because it was so beautiful it beat the girl in bikini
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Hahaha,you're the first person who was not interested in my vampire.
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The detail of her body is amazing, and the shading isn't any less impressive, good work!
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Thanks.I'm glad that you love it^^
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เธเธญเธเธเธธเธเธเธฃเธฑเธ
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ohh again.....VERY NICE!!!!!!!!preetty
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this piece is lovely
The colours are wonderful and i really like how you done the shading on the skin
Great job
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Thank you very much.I'm glad that you like it^^
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May I have your permission to use this commission on YouTube?
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I don't know.You have to ask my commissioner.
www.vampyou.com is his website.You can contact him.
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Thank you. I will, and see what he thinks.
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Who's him specifically? Cause I can't just ask every artist there. I need a name not just a websites address.
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I'm glad that you love it^^
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I gotta say that this has to be one of your better pictures that you've uploaded. What struck me the most is the way the picture is framed. You have a very beautiful vista from the window, and the coloring and lighting flair really makes it pop.
Second is the girl's anatomy. This is probably best I've seen you come to getting an accurate model of how the female form looks. What caught my eye the most with her is the way you drew her hips. That is EXACTLY how they should look when drawing a female, and you nailed it 100%. This is also hands down one of your most sensual pictures you've done. I love the way she looks, and I wish you'd make more of your females with a sensual flair. Very well done!
However, there are two things feel the need to point out. The first one is the biggest one (which isn't really all the big, but should be worth noting), which is her hand that's she's resting on. The way you have them drawn doesn't look right. The hand looks too rubbery, which is something you need to work on correcting in your future pictures. Sometimes the way you draw hands turns out fine, but other times they turn out like this one.
The second thing I'd like to mention is that the shading around her boobs could be more pronounced. The area where her cleavage is showing needs more shading, as it looks a little flat around that area.
And one last thing are her fangs. I don't know if it's just her mouth, or just them, but they need to be more pronounced.
Other than these few things I mentioned, this picture looks really, really good! I hope that you continue to work on the way you draw female anatomy, as you really got it right this time. I really hope you keep drawing hips the same as they are 100% perfect in this one. The only other thing to work on is to keep your hands from looking like rubber.
I really like this picture ilolami. I hope that you continue to set new standards for yourself with each one you draw.
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Thank you very much for your compliment and critique.
Yes,my hand drawing is still my problem.I'm trying to practice but the result doesn't go well.But i will practice more.
About shading and fangs,i will remember that.This commission set has six pictures,you will see my improvement,i hope.
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Nice! I'm glad you have so many to work on.
If you don't mind me asking, is drawing commissions your full-time job?
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Yes,that's right.I only do commission work.
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You seemed to have quite a lot of request for that person.Anyway,hope your friend will like it as you have done a great job with this sexy piece.
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Yeah,you will see more.Thanks for your compliment^^
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Great as all the other images you make
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Thank you very much Roddy^^
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the ultimate sexy vampire @w@
love it!!! >W<
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Thank you.I'm glad that you love it^^
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You're welcome *3*
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Beautiful! LOVED the sun reflect. You have nice fold in the bed and the sheet, and the underwear design is amazing. Her body is astonishing too~ Trully amazing!
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Thank you very much for your compliment^^
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Not a vampire fan but I love this. I like the necklace and everything. Very awesome.
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