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inckydraughts — Rear View Mirror
Published: 2004-04-01 17:40:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 125; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 9
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Description When I was younger you looked at me face to face
But I never saw the truth until you left this place

Now that I'm older you never look me in the eyes
Too busy worrying about your own love's demise

Now that you're older you leave me every day
I'm to the rear of her taking pictures of you driving along the way

Her eyes on you, your eyes look at me
Only through your rear view mirror, when no one else can see
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Comments: 5

flowingcurtians [2004-04-01 20:03:52 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't say lovley for it was a bit sad but it was good Lina. I love you and I miss hearing your voice.


-dinika

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inckydraughts [2004-04-01 18:37:03 +0000 UTC]

yes, it is a bit short, but the feeling is short, so i guess that's ok. you know, when you want to say something before it goes away? hmm.

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johnhawks [2004-04-01 18:16:55 +0000 UTC]

*smiles* Sounds familiar...*le sigh*

-JH

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awesomesauce [2004-04-01 17:58:57 +0000 UTC]

wow, thats good

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thenakedlunch [2004-04-01 17:50:43 +0000 UTC]

good poem, a bit short...no message really has time to develop, but still very good.

check me out sometime,
~thenakedlunch

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