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InvaderIka — CP OC REFERENCE: Dollface (Still in Development)
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Published: 2015-02-27 02:03:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 10846; Favourites: 181; Downloads: 7
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I adopted her design from the lovely strawberryfluffies strawberryfluffies.deviantart.…
I wasn't sure what to do with her design until week or so ago so..here's Doll-face!
She's a work in progress still sadly..so some parts are unfinished.
Verse: Creepypasta
Name: Dollface
Alias: Keeper of the Dolls, Killer Lolita, Bloody Dolly
Real Name: Dalia Willowson
Current Age: 18
Gender: Female
Ethical Origin: American
Place of Origin: North Royalton, Ohio
Species: Human- Possessed Human
Personality: Quiet, Soft-spoken, Troubled, Emotionally detached, Skittish, Sociably awkward, Unfeeling towards others
Birthdate: April 8, 1996
Astrological Sign: Aries
Birthplace: Columbus, OH
Blood Type: AB+
Sexual Preference: Straight
Relationship: Single
Alignment: Unknown
Affiliation: Unknown
Occupation: Unknown
Height: 5' 5"
Weight: 145 LBs
Skin Tone: Ivory
Hair: Medium Brown
Eyes: Reddish-Brown
Left Handed/ Right handed
Place/Type of Residence: Nomadic
Languages Spoken: English (Fluent); Demon Tongue (Fluent- her host demon speaks this)
Favorite color: Pink
Fears: Spiders
Interests: Doll collecting, Sewing, Dressing up
Good, Neutral or Bad?: Unknown
Distinguishing Features: Eyes are different from each other due to possession; scratches across the face and all over body due to the demon inside her.
Official Backstory: WIP
Official Theme Song: None
Special items:
- Possesses a doll that is a replica of herself- its belongs to the demon that possesses Dalia and is the secondary containment to give its "host" a break for a while. Also speaks through the doll to terrorize it's victims and Dalia.
- Blessed blindfold to keep the demon at bay
Proficiencies:
- Very stealthy
- Uses her "innocent" looks to lure victims in to feed the demon
- Doesn't get attached to people easily so she has no problem killing strangers
- Basic demonic abilities though they are weakened due to the demon being in a human host.
How They kills/wounds in Combats:
- Demon either uses its abilities through the girl to mess with victim or kill them; Dalia uses the crowbar as a melee weapon.
Strengths:
- Stealthy
- Has access to inhuman senses/strength when the demon is in full control
- Has her appearance as a "lure" to attract victims
Weaknesses:
- Religious items/symbols
- Exorcism
- Hates crowds
- Has to keep her eyes covered so she isn't taken over by the demon (Thats why there is crosses on her blindfold.)
Quirks:
- Twitches when she is near churches, holy figures, holy objects and particularly people.
Quotes:
- W.I.P
Notes:
- W.I.P
Design (c) strawberryfluffies
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Comments: 94
Hmm...without getting too technical, I always find that what can character memorable (in temrs of quirks) is when they have one detail about them that is the exact opposite of what you'd expect. Although she's already got a bit of this going with the whole "really cute but will murder you" thing going XD Seeing as she dresses nicely, she could be very concerned about her clothes or hair (ex. Will get really angry if you mess up her hair or rip her dress)
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Woah she's so pretty!~ I hope to see more from her ^
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Ahhhhh you're welcome ^^
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Nice, nice design and stuff, but I think the bloody area around the eyes could do touching up, since it's quite the cliche in characters (that I almost always see). But overall, I like the design except for that one area, in which I honestly think you could revise a bit to fit it. That could be a start to update her, maybe make the blood a bit thinner or somewhat less prevalent, or even make the scar go a bit under her eye, at the top of the cheek, so that it gives the illusion she's bleeding from the eye.
But the rest of the design is quite good, and I see no bad things with it as of yet. Hopefully this character gets a lot of fruition.
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Do you like Bravely Default?
But nice critique for not only Ika, but maybe I should learn from that and be better at making ocs.
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Yes I do.
But take the critique with a grain of salt; I will make a proper critique when Ika makes the finished character. I was pointing out one thing in design that was overused in Creepypasta in general.
I will love to see her final revision of this character made by HER own decisions.
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hey i like her design why you hating on doll face
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I wasn't complaining about design, I was pointing out one thing about the eyes being a bit cliche in the whole Creeptpasta thing (bloody eyes is VERY prevalent in Creepypasta). I don't want to sound mean, I like where she's going with this and I hope she makes all the right decisions, all of which are for her to do.
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oh ok then srry i am i very very light criticizer and i dont like it when i see comments like that i am so srry i taught you were being rude
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I'll properly respect Ika's stuff and give a good critique when it's all finished.
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and srry again i usually dont freak out like that
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Well as I said, its still in development sir...
Goodness, critiques are usually requested for my finished characters and I don't think its fair to put one on one that still in development and one that I need to finalize....
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Well, it's not a bad thing at all, your character is overall great, and I love her development so far. I'm not wanting to be rude or anything, just wanting to say that there was one thing that may need alteration during development; however, I will say that it is your choice and your choice alone as to what you do with her, and please take my critique with a grain of salt.
I do look forward to your finished character, and hopefully I will give her a full and PROPER critique when she's finished, how about that?
I don't want to sound mean or anything, Ika. I really do like where you're going with the character so far.
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I might consider your offer when she is doe..and that is a definite maybe.
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Okay then.
I don't want to sound mean at all.
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Alright..
Oh! Whats your thoughts on the whole Sally x LJ/EJ/Slenderman/Puppeteer/Jeff etc.
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I'm making a journal of that, actually, so if you ever have the time, do read it so.
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Maybe.
Poor Sally. She went from being Sally the Ghost to Sally the Slut.
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That I won't deny.
(It's like me shipping my child characters with SCP-106, the Old Man, which will NEVER HAPPEN.)
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You're very welcome, oh I haven't seen a picture of Psyche in a while.
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I'm liking the way this character is turning out to be!
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Aww thanks ;w;
Imstuckhelpmecece
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Skype or note me.
I'm sure we can figure something out for ya
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Hnnng>w<
She's so fab*w* So bootyful<3
You always come up with the best OCsXDD
I'm jealoussssXDD
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Aww thank you uvu
I have to thank strawberryfluffies for her original design- I happen to put it to use.
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Dear Sweet merry mother of the Lord, that's a shit ton of scars she's got there 0-0
But in any case, she looks creepy enough, even though the colors of her clothes are a little bright, but I guess that's alright 
I really look forward to reading her backstory when it comes out as well
So...... single, huh?~
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Umm...... for what? 0-0 but you're welcome, anyways?! XDDD
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Me and my friend also have CP's named Dollface XD
I can't decide which one is cuter (not mine, it's an ugly bitch)
Don't be mad /)u(\ This is my definition of cute though
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