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IshimaruK21 In reply to ??? [2007-02-23 20:26:02 +0000 UTC]

TT__TT... your comments are always something to look forward to now~It's not only great to know Im doing things right with the pages, but that Im inspiring you to keep on with your own manga so I have to say..please keep it up! It's always difficult at the beginning..and sometimes during random times after that , but you get your own style and become comfortable with it and it definately gets easier!

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zero-metallix In reply to ??? [2007-02-23 15:45:05 +0000 UTC]

heh in other words he made himself look foolish so hes gonna try tia-jutsu to fix his ego.

cool comic as allways, the sense of movement is well done

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IshimaruK21 In reply to zero-metallix [2007-02-23 20:13:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much! glad you think so! XDD

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zero-metallix In reply to IshimaruK21 [2007-02-24 12:40:30 +0000 UTC]

np

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H0shii In reply to ??? [2007-02-23 15:39:25 +0000 UTC]

Taijutsu~ <3 Wheee~ You've got me all again!

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uchiha-kumiko In reply to H0shii [2007-02-24 17:27:12 +0000 UTC]

stay tuned for more,,,it will become a stronger wheeee-- inducer XD

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H0shii In reply to uchiha-kumiko [2007-02-24 22:30:33 +0000 UTC]

*can't wait* ^^

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buddhistmonkey In reply to ??? [2007-02-23 15:28:43 +0000 UTC]

Cool action, really dynamic posing and sequencing- I can tell what's going on, which means you've handled this fight scene really well. But, something's kinda bugging me- why does the girl have solid black hair and pants, but the guy has unclean, sketchy inking? If there's context for that, please let me know, but if not, I suggest solid black for both characters. It looks cleaner.
Keep drawing, and Cheers!

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IshimaruK21 In reply to buddhistmonkey [2007-02-23 15:32:00 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like the page! The reason the guy's clothes were sketchy because he was the only one in motion there, while the girl was still in her place doing her best to defend herself with her arms since he was too fast for her ^__^

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buddhistmonkey In reply to IshimaruK21 [2007-02-23 16:22:46 +0000 UTC]

Ohh, okay! If that's the case, then his entire outline should be relatively blurred so the motion reads easier. : D I hope I don't sound arrogant XD

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IshimaruK21 In reply to buddhistmonkey [2007-02-23 20:13:10 +0000 UTC]

lol! no! don't worry about it!

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