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For Comm exclusive, Download & Read full description Please. Blue lineart is most important elements in correct position & placement.

Important - Her central strap, while well finalized and shape of its movement is Pitch Perfect, at deeper glance its bit tighter around the parts at the ends (slightly moved inward) And also... it's Not transparent! (theres No tee wrinkles inside or between strap's linework)

As seen from previous photo the strap is transparent yet movable plastic with a glossy surface. I decided to instead shape, put correct placement for it to "breathe space & move more free" And also have tee-shirt wrinkles seen through it to give this entire strap transparent nature.

It would be really grateful if you could just use the correction I need for this part Exactly as given in this Ref sheet onto the main art.

Important - The chrome rectangle is realized well, with even a slight curving bend adding a malleable nature to it which I unexpected but adds more to the clothes' movement-heavy energetic feel! Awesome!

However, there was reason I decided to place it where it could be all seen visibly in front. This along with the strap are The elements that are powerful focal points. Her Left sleeve's (& overall tee's entire material actually) firm solidness, alongside its points of thick wrinkle and movement already make for forced turn of angle towards frontal section instead of default sideway angle so this change of placement is not illogical at all either.

I hope you could move this rectangle to the central point of her sleeve as given in this Ref sheet.

- Her thick shoes are already all okay with no need for further alteration; however, the lack of socks (bare feet within heavy boots) does not feel right. Still at same time I want most of her legs visible.

So I decided to add small length socks instead of knee-highs, simply its ridged tips visible just above boots' top sections. That way we could have her feet comfortable (& less damp) while have her legs all seen at the same time.

Description
For Comm exclusive, Download & Read full description Please. Blue lineart is most important elements in correct position & placement.

Important - Her central strap, while well finalized and shape of its movement is Pitch Perfect, at deeper glance its bit tighter around the parts at the ends (slightly moved inward) And also... it's Not transparent! (theres No tee wrinkles inside or between strap's linework)

As seen from previous photo the strap is transparent yet movable plastic with a glossy surface. I decided to instead shape, put correct placement for it to "breathe space & move more free" And also have tee-shirt wrinkles seen through it to give this entire strap transparent nature.

It would be really grateful if you could just use the correction I need for this part Exactly as given in this Ref sheet onto the main art.

Important - The chrome rectangle is realized well, with even a slight curving bend adding a malleable nature to it which I unexpected but adds more to the clothes' movement-heavy energetic feel! Awesome!

However, there was reason I decided to place it where it could be all seen visibly in front. This along with the strap are The elements that are powerful focal points. Her Left sleeve's (& overall tee's entire material actually) firm solidness, alongside its points of thick wrinkle and movement already make for forced turn of angle towards frontal section instead of default sideway angle so this change of placement is not illogical at all either.

I hope you could move this rectangle to the central point of her sleeve as given in this Ref sheet.

- Her thick shoes are already all okay with no need for further alteration; however, the lack of socks (bare feet within heavy boots) does not feel right. Still at same time I want most of her legs visible.

So I decided to add small length socks instead of knee-highs, simply its ridged tips visible just above boots' top sections. That way we could have her feet comfortable (& less damp) while have her legs all seen at the same time.