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- Her hair for most part is all right but there are simplifications which make it look bland or artificial. I decided to slightly make deeper the crimson gradations AND also add some "extra random" strands of red hair as given here. That way her hair will have more natural feel of distribution & colour blends, also a sense of volume.

This will be significant likely for the final version as any thin details will be made clear & concrete there so don't worry too much here.

- Her eyes... oh dear. While I like the colour choice you made (I preferred the amber style as in FelveliaL's photos but still the purple blue feels more fitting here fsr) the sizing gives her eyes Lower Scleral Show & turns her into a crafty, even treacherous condensed evil character, which she is definitely NOT!

Its just altering the size of the eyes' Irises slightly larger to fill in the white space of lower eye sections, as if she is wearing circular lenses (Given the bluish colour I'm liking this is definitely what I'm going for since her normal eye colour is brown). That way we could keep her expression & at same time, the main eye shape & its makeup structure intact while giving her eyes a more balanced symmetry without any feel of scleral excessive evil.

Basically fixing Eye Iris size as given in the Ref.

Description
For Comm, Download & Read full descriptions please.

- Her hair for most part is all right but there are simplifications which make it look bland or artificial. I decided to slightly make deeper the crimson gradations AND also add some "extra random" strands of red hair as given here. That way her hair will have more natural feel of distribution & colour blends, also a sense of volume.

This will be significant likely for the final version as any thin details will be made clear & concrete there so don't worry too much here.

- Her eyes... oh dear. While I like the colour choice you made (I preferred the amber style as in FelveliaL's photos but still the purple blue feels more fitting here fsr) the sizing gives her eyes Lower Scleral Show & turns her into a crafty, even treacherous condensed evil character, which she is definitely NOT!

Its just altering the size of the eyes' Irises slightly larger to fill in the white space of lower eye sections, as if she is wearing circular lenses (Given the bluish colour I'm liking this is definitely what I'm going for since her normal eye colour is brown). That way we could keep her expression & at same time, the main eye shape & its makeup structure intact while giving her eyes a more balanced symmetry without any feel of scleral excessive evil.

Basically fixing Eye Iris size as given in the Ref.