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Published: 2007-11-13 17:41:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 9001; Favourites: 216; Downloads: 199
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Description Another Velveteen Rabbit illustration for my Vis Dev class. I was struggling with this one, since it is a style I haven't worked with a lot until now.
My teacher felt that the rabbit in the picture didn't look like it was being neglected as that is a major story point that I am trying to convey, and so far I haven't been able to come up with a clear solution as to how to make that work. I don't want it just to be a cute picture, I want it to make some impact on the viewer. So anyone!! PLEASE give me suggestions.
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Comments: 55

AkuleArt In reply to ??? [2007-11-14 11:35:17 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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Kellisanth [2007-11-13 17:47:25 +0000 UTC]

Very nice picture!

The only thing I can think of, perhaps, is to have the poor rabbit buried under the paper wrappings, or hidden by the box top cover.

Other than that, it looks very excellent to me. Especially with the child focused on what's in the box.

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Jandruff In reply to Kellisanth [2007-11-14 08:08:43 +0000 UTC]

That sounds good. Thanks!

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TylaDirt [2007-11-13 17:43:48 +0000 UTC]

This is sooo cute. Like it.

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