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Jedi ReloadedChapter 1, Time Shift
It has been twelve years; twelve years since the incident that transported us clear across the universe as we were flying back to America in the Viper Mk II to visit my parents. It was during that flight we were transported to a galaxy similar to our own but teaming with all sorts of alien races, some of which looked like various creatures from Earth. We crashed on a remote planet and in trying to find shelter stumbled upon an immense cave, it was in this cave that we were exposed to an energy stream that granted us abilities that were pure science fiction to us growing up. Those that pulled us out told us we had been called across time and space to this galaxy to help preserve a group known as the Jedi Order and that we were now part of that order; Anna, Miriam, Moishe, and myself. My name is Eli, and aiding us in our tasks, are two refugees from a parallel Earth, that though younger than us are just as capable, and though not Jedi, they are still fierce warriors, named Sheeta and Pazu.
We were eventually put under the command of a Jedi Master, who like us was brought from Earth to aide the order, but had arrived 8 years before us in the same manner. He taught us everything there was to know, and after two years under his command the purge began and we had to flee. However, during our escape, our master was slain by agents of the new “Galactic Empire” as he held them off so we could flee and begin our most dangerous mission yet. Using the same methods that brought the six of us to this galaxy we laid in a course for earth, and after a sixth month journey, spent in hibernation, then we came face to face with the crew of the Federation Starship USS Enterprise D. Though the journey had taken sixth months, we were told that when they found us we had remained in hibernation for a year.
They eventually dropped us off at a Starfleet R&D facility in orbit around Jupiter where we were charged with the task of helping Starfleet analyze and learn about the ship we came in as well as our “altered” human biology.
We thought we had escaped, and though the Federation refused to help us take back our adopted home from the Empire, we knew we would not be able to stay hidden forever, nor would the Federation be able to sit out the conflict that would come.
It all started one morning, when we woke up feeling unusually well rested.
“Hey, honey, why do I feel like I have been asleep for a millennia?” said Anna.
“I don’t know, but I feel it to. What about you Moishe?” asked Eli.
“How does the phrase ‘I feel like I just woke up from a 11000 year cat-nap’ sound?” replied Moishe.
“I take it that is a no. Something is not right. Computer, what is the date and time, and none of that Stardate mumbo-jumbo, Gregorian if you please?”
“Today’s date is October 18th, 13490, time 0730 hours.”
The three of us looked at each other with expressions of utter shock.”
“Computer, what is the date of the last log entry made by Lieutenant Moshie Rosen?”
“October 17th, 2373”
A look of disbelief and shock appeared on Moishe’s feline face. His eyes went from Anna, to Eli, and back to Anna, who by now had a concerned look on her face. Anna got out of bed, still in her gown, and looked at her husband. “I sense that this change may have be a sign of a shift in the Force, I am going to check what has happened while we were ‘asleep’”
“Why do I have a bad feeling about this?” muttered Moishe.
Eli responded saying, “You always have a “bad feeling” about everything. The Federation could defeat the Borg before we complete Project Hornet's Nest and you would have a bad feeling about it,” as he got out of bed and put on a robe.
Just then Anna came running back into the room, with a look of horror on her face and a data tablet in her hand. She shoved the tablet at Eli and said, “Look at this, this image of Earth was taken two minutes ago.”
Eli looked down at the image on the tablet, what he saw was not the Earth he had visited just two days ago to give a status report on Project Hornet’s Nest to Starfleet command, it was an earth that according to the image on the tablet was dotted with masses of living biological land masses that rose kilometers above the Earths surface. It was then he felt cold all-of-the sudden, and shivered, he turned to his wife and Moishe, who had by now gotten off the bed and was stretching on the floor, and asked, “Is it cold in here or is it just me?” The nodded in agreement, to which Eli responded by asking, “Computer what is the temperature in the room?”
“The current ambient temperature in this room is 25℃.”
“Has the temperature changed in this room in the last 5 minutes?” questioned Anna.
“Negative.”
“Well, if it is not that Eli, then what just happened?” asked Anna.
Before Eli could answer the doorbell rang.
“It must be Miriam,” said Moishe, “you may enter Miriam.”
The door opened in walked Eli’s younger sister Miriam. After the door closed behind her she looked at her brother and sister-in-law and tried to hold back a laugh, but the expression was quickly replaced with that of concern as Eli thrust the tablet at his sister, saying, “What do you make of this? Did you feel a chill just a moment ago?”
“Yes, and I think what has happened is the doing of the Empire.”
“Oh come on sis, like manipulating time is going to help them find us. Starfleet has intercepted and disabled all of the probes that the Imperial Navy has sent thus far.”
“Actually, only the ones they have caught entering the galaxy through the Alpha, Beta, and Gamma quadrants,” Moishe said chiming in.
“He has a point Eli,” affirmed Anna, “recent events with this time shift and this stuff called ‘scub’ appearing on earth seem rather out-of-the-ordinary.”
“Scub? Did you say scub?” asked Moishe with a look of bewilderment on his face, “I had a dream last night, in which I felt like I was back in that temple we crashed near and I kept hearing that word, as well as ‘gekko’, ‘find’, ‘scar’, ‘ally’ and ‘coralian’, what is a coralian, a type of fish?”
Then without prompting, the computer replied, “Coralian: a manifestation of Scub Coral, that comes in three-forms; Kute-Class, Antibody, and Human.”
They all look at each other with expressions of confusion and puzzlement. Miriam broke the silence, saying, “I think we ought to try again to commune through meditation, maybe we will find the answers as-to-what-is going on in the Force.”
“Lets meet in Holodeck 6 in three hours then,” said Eli.
“Very well, at 1130 hours,” replied Miriam.
As Miriam walked out the door, Moishe looked at Eli and Anna and said, “I have a very bad feeling about this.”
“Oh will you give it a rest for once! You are so high-strung!” Anna said yelling at Moishe.
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Comments: 17
itako-hikaru [2008-04-07 00:37:00 +0000 UTC]
Omg! this really looks interesting, I will read the others chapters for sure, and check the elements from Eureka seven. I like Star wars, all thanks to my older brother
anyway, to the chapter two!
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Kuzunari [2008-03-31 15:03:14 +0000 UTC]
the explanatory first sentence in the second paragraph threw off my rhythm too long i think. (yes i know i'm on chapter one i'm evil!
) it does sound a lot like unrefined ramblings. i do think that the part with the master leading himself as a sacrifice should be rewritten. it was said so blandly as if the narrator was helle jaded by death
but then i squealed when they woke up and everything was all sinister and they took a picture of the earth
oooh! will you ever explain what the 'chill' was?
And this: [As Miriam walked out the door, Moishe looked at Eli and Anna and said, “I have a very bad feeling about this.”
“Oh will you give it a rest for once! You are so high-strung!” Anna said yelling at Moishe. ]
totally killed the whole vibe, it doesn't fit although if it were an anime maybe it would, but i don't have voices for them yet so it seems odd.
eh...never did watch star wars i anticipate a very disproportionate E7:jedi ration
yes. i have no shame in saying it!
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Jedi-Master-Yoda In reply to Kuzunari [2008-03-31 22:04:37 +0000 UTC]
Everything in this chapter is written as it is for a reason. Starting is always the hardest, they chapters get better as you get further along.
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Kuzunari In reply to Jedi-Master-Yoda [2008-04-01 16:05:45 +0000 UTC]
i'm quite sure of it . i don't expect you to change anything ^_^....but the your comment box.....it really did annoy me those ...ah well i plan to see what goodness you have for meeeeeeeeeee!
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DJ-Hikari [2008-03-19 02:43:59 +0000 UTC]
wow, from what I've read so far, it looks like you have big plans for this--I'll have to keep reading, but good job with it so far ^_^
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Julian-AFF [2007-12-12 03:47:31 +0000 UTC]
Starwartrekeureka frenzy. Ive noticed youve got your characters from On the wings of hope. BTW This is going insanely fast, remember to tie every loose end once youre done.
How long do you intend to make this?
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Jedi-Master-Yoda In reply to Julian-AFF [2007-12-12 22:46:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the tips, as for length I am not sure.
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Jedi-Master-Yoda In reply to PaoO1 [2007-12-12 01:19:12 +0000 UTC]
I believe in using suspense as a double edge sword. Those who know the necessary backstories might have an idea of what will happen; however, like those new to the backstories, they will still be surprised, because of the sheer number of possible turns the story could take.
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PaoO1 In reply to Jedi-Master-Yoda [2007-12-13 01:24:09 +0000 UTC]
wow! i can see that you are a professional! i admire you, i'm willing to be surprised by your story, keep uploading it please!
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PaoO1 In reply to Jedi-Master-Yoda [2007-12-13 03:11:57 +0000 UTC]
your welcome! goes to fav!!! :fav:
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saurio [2007-12-09 02:54:51 +0000 UTC]
can bother to read all of it now...so I'll fav it and read it later. I'm very very tired but I do want to check it out
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JHTriune [2007-12-09 00:20:19 +0000 UTC]
Dude, I'm all for nerding out, but Jesus...This is just...too weird...
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