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This is why I haven't started the comic series yet. Because the original story was too complicated. I mean, time travel? I know that's cool but that's confusing to some people that I know. So here's what I did. I connected both the story with Joyce and the one with Liz.

It's about Maku Oli (Big bad wolf) who has escaped from prison from a different planet and stole a ship to get away from there. Basically, all it is it's just Maku on the run. Kim... I honestly don't want her to be the villain, but maybe I have to. Pam, Kim's sister who is not controlling but rebellious, helps Maku escape. And also Liz (Might change his name soon) joins in because he want's to see how Earth is. Maku, Pam, and Liz all travel to Earth of 1987, not 1985 anymore. Now both Amy Dolores and Joyce Pred are in the same year instead of two years apart. So Amy first meets the robots, and Joyce meets Maku. I don't how yet but it happens. So somehow they all come together, and then Kim tracks them down and recaptures Maku and sends him back to the prison planet (Well actually, it's more like a space prison in a far away star or galaxy).

That's all I know so far, so leave me suggestions on how to improve the story.

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This is why I haven't started the comic series yet. Because the original story was too complicated. I mean, time travel? I know that's cool but that's confusing to some people that I know. So here's what I did. I connected both the story with Joyce and the one with Liz.

It's about Maku Oli (Big bad wolf) who has escaped from prison from a different planet and stole a ship to get away from there. Basically, all it is it's just Maku on the run. Kim... I honestly don't want her to be the villain, but maybe I have to. Pam, Kim's sister who is not controlling but rebellious, helps Maku escape. And also Liz (Might change his name soon) joins in because he want's to see how Earth is. Maku, Pam, and Liz all travel to Earth of 1987, not 1985 anymore. Now both Amy Dolores and Joyce Pred are in the same year instead of two years apart. So Amy first meets the robots, and Joyce meets Maku. I don't how yet but it happens. So somehow they all come together, and then Kim tracks them down and recaptures Maku and sends him back to the prison planet (Well actually, it's more like a space prison in a far away star or galaxy).

That's all I know so far, so leave me suggestions on how to improve the story.