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I am sososososooooo sorry for being so slow on this. OTL not only did I have some MLP block, BUT when I was finished inking everything, a little sib (I'm looking at you, >_>) Spilled iced tea all over my papers. Thankfully they were in my closed clipboard, so only one side of the commissions were tea stained. I spent a nice chunk of time editing and erasing tea in PS. |DAnd another side note, I wasn't sure what kind of Circus the elephant training filly was in, so I went with clasic red/yellow/red costumes. You can change them however you like.
NOW TO THE RULES AND SUCH-
This is an adoption sheet commissioned by ~little-bash That means that they recieve first pick of any, or all of the adoptables! However, if you follow the rules below, you may be able to have any of the ones they don't pick.
1: All applicants MUST fill out an application. The application is more detailed than the previous one. You must comment describing the pony you want, and with this application. A star means that the information is optional.
NAME:
AGE:
GENDER:
SEXUAL ORIENTATION:
SHORT HISTORY:
LIKES:
DISLIKES:
*FAMILY:
*HOBBIES:
*FRIENDS:
*WHERE THEY LIVE:
2: These ponies are not a "first come first serve" Like my previous ones. These ponies will be handed out to the people who gave the clearest, most detailed, most well thought out applications. So it doesn't matter who gets there first. So fill out your application carefully for a better chance of winning the pony.
3: This sheet of adoptables will have applications open for one week. (7 days) then I will close the adoption, and review the applications. I'll pick the best app, and message the user that they were picked.
4: Once a user has been picked, they have three (3) days to write a short story, or draw a picture of the pony to "claim" it. If they fail to do so, I will pick the next best application, and repeat the process.
5: I will IGNORE any comments that just say "I want # 4 please." Fill. Out. The. Form. If you want a pony, you MUST fill out an application. Otherwise, you miss out.
6: NO BASES. I'm serious, guys. Bases/generators are fun and all, but I want to see you put some effort into these characters. I put effort into drawing them for you, and I expect you to return the favor.
7: 1 person, per pony, per sheet. No multible adopts for one page UNLESS they are the commissioner of the sheet.
1: ~little-bash
2: ~little-bash
3: ~little-bash
4: ~little-bash
5: ~mosiebear
6: ~little-bash
7: ~little-bash
(As a side note, I added sexual orientation to the list of information because I, as a christian, do not believe in or support a sexual relationship between anything other that one man and one woman. This is my belief, and I would ask that if you do not think this rule fair, please pass this adoptable sheet by. I am not trying to offend, but I would not feel comfortable giving someone a character I made if the character themselves are going to represent something I strongly oppose. Again, I mean no offence to anyone. I'm just trying to save people time if they mark their character as anything other than heterosexual, because the applcation will not be considered for adoption.
Thank you for reading, and I appreciate those who will follow the rules. Again, if you do not like this rule, I ask you to please pass this sheet by. Thank you. )
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOH Yeah!XD
Okay
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Yeah, 5 is pretty cool looking.
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Name: Nocturna
Age: Six years old
Gender: Female
Orientation: Straight
Story:
Nocturna was born an adorable baby bat pony to her parents, Echo and Blackwing. Living in a cave sheltered from the world was perfect for being one like her. (the other ponies of the once lived with and tolerated batponies, until one of Nocturna's ancestors was driven mad. He confined himself to a dark cave, and became so obsessed with living in the dar, his eyes lost all power of sight. He became accustomed to getting around by hearing his own screams bounce off the walls of the cave. He murdered a pegasus midflight for trespassing in his cave with her friend once, and all batponies were banished to live in caves. Rumors were spread about all batponies being evil murderers, and eventually the ponies began to exterminate them, one by one. Ironically, the last to die was the insane batpony, Nocturne. His last words were, "I'm not dead yet, there will be another." Many years later, Nocturna was born to a family of normal ponies, who in disgust, banished her to live in a cave. However, she had no echolocation abilities, and kept injuring herself in the darkness. She tried flying in secret during the day, and was quite agile in doing so. A young pegasus stumbled upon her practicing her routine in the forest one day (she's the descendant of the murdered pegasus) and was amazed. She had run away from home, in hopes that her aerial flight skills could make her famous. They decided to team up, and they formed a performance troupe called AcroBATics.
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I'm sorry, that pony is already adopted now. Thanks for trying, and better luck next time!
(But loved your story too! it was definately a close second. 
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Thanks! I'm really glad she has a good home now. (And that's all that matters') I never complain when someone else gets an adopt I want, becaue then I get to watch it develop in their arms.
I totally wish I had paypal so I could commission you (And the money if I did, at that.) I look forward to seeing more of these sheets in the future, and perhaps I shall have a bit more inspiration next time. (I read a post on yor profile as to how you color and ink your ponies, I totally gotta try that! I use professional inks instead of sharpies, (although I hav access to both) and yours look wayyyy better!
Thank you so much for following through and have a great day!
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Haha, well my commission slots are open again, so that means a LOT more ponies should be up for adoption very very soon!
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Yes! By the way, I took some inspiration from your drawings in my latest deviations. What do you think?
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I think they look adorable!
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Haha okay! We can make pokeponies together!
Do you like Llyselle? Her eyes were based off of some of your and Kala Marie's styling.
I was gonna do the gen one evolutions of all the starters, but then I had a bulbasaur request. It kinda slowed from there.
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I noticed the Kala Marie style imediately! 
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Thanks! It kinda started when I won a tentacle pony, and then I saw the adopt there. I'll put up her story in a minute or two, I hope you like it! (I've gotten lots better at coming up with ideas since that adopt sheet of yours^^)
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Oh cool! I'll definately check it out!
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Aww, thanks! It was kinda thrown together at that point. Llyselle's is more logical and original.
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Haha, well she's a darling pony!
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Awh, thanks! I loked those kinds of po ies too. You relate to the, as they try to live normally.
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Yep. And their designs always promise to be somethign original, and not over-done. C:
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OK so if they are free, (meaning no paypal or anything or points)
then ill try out for 5. ^^
NAME: Shining Violet
AGE: 14
GENDER: female
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: straight
SHORT HISTORY: was born a regular pony but she touched a moon-flower (a magical flower) during the day, which transformed her into a bat-like pony. she became very clever and eventually made her home with the bats as their queen.
LIKES: nighttime, stars, flowers, hanging upside down
DISLIKES: really bright things, hot days, loud noises(it hurts her ears) and being challenged
WHERE THEY LIVE: in tall trees with the bats and other night creatures
FRIENDS: the bats, any night animal, animals with good hearing
Please let me know if you have to pay real money for these, because if you do than i will not be able to do this. (i have no paypal)
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I'm sorry, that pony is already adopted now. Thanks for trying, and better luck next time!
And once the commissioner takes their pick, the ponies are free to the public.
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ok! ^^ it was fun to try out, and i hope i can see more of your bat ponies!
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wait, are they free adopts? or for money? or for points? i want to know!!! because if theyre for free or for points ill try it for 5.
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i like 1 5 and 6. So i will just fill out apps for the three, i hope thats okay i read the rules <
#1
NAME: Melody Music
AGE: 17
GENDER: Female
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Straight
SHORT HISTORY: She was born in a town unknown to many, Music City. Her parents were sophisticated so she was raised like that. Musa, as she likes to be called, grew up and eventually left home to find her talent. She brought a violin and played beautifully as with every other instrument she touched. She gained her cutie mark and it means how well she can read music notes and play them. She is now traveling, playing music to all who are by her.
LIKES: Instruments, Music, Being alone
DISLIKES: Big crowds, Ponies who can't play instruments right or read the notes correctly
*FAMILY: Big Bass: Father Smooth Strings: Mother Jumpy Jazz: Sister Classic: Sister Noisey Rock: Brother Heavy Metal: Sister
*HOBBIES: Playing music, being with friends or being alone, learning new songs, learning to play new instruments.
*FRIENDS: The Mane 6
*WHERE THEY LIVE: Formerly Music City, Currently Ponyville
#5
NAME: Nightwing
AGE: 20
GENDER: Female
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Straight
SHORT HISTORY: Nightwing was born in the Everfree forest and abandoned at age 8. She learned to fly and survived on her own. She traveled through every city and town to find her mother and father. They didn't abandon her, they were forced to leave her by a mysterious pony. Her cutie mark is a moon with a bat in the center. It shows how she is closely related to the bat and loves the moon.
LIKES: Flying, Playing Pranks, the Moon.
DISLIKES: Being on the ground too long, Pranks that went wrong or ponies who take them too far, the Sun
*FAMILY: Silverwing: Mother Golden Wings: Father
*HOBBIES: Flying
*FRIENDS: The Mane 6, animals in the Everfree Forest
*WHERE THEY LIVE: Everfree Forest
#6
NAME: Saloon Moon
AGE: 22
GENDER: Female
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Straight
SHORT HISTORY: Saloon Moon was born at night in her familys bar/home(they live upstairs the bar is downstairs). They lived together and Saloon was taught how to polish the bar and fill the mugs correctly. She now owns the buisness, West Saloon, and runs it with her remaining family. Her father died soon after her birthday to cancer.
LIKES: Being in the bar, working, being with family
DISLIKES: Leaving her bar, being off work, ponies who take their families for granted
*FAMILY: Saloona: Mother Bar Bear: Father Saloon Sun: Sister Bar Jumper: Brother Bar Bail: Brother
*HOBBIES: Making new beers and wines, cleaning
*FRIENDS: The Mane 6
*WHERE THEY LIVE: Ponyville
I hope these are good enough ^u^
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I'm sorry, those ponies are already adopted now. Thanks for trying, and better luck next time!
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ok ^u^ i always enjoy ur contests
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"7: 1 person, per pony, per sheet. No multible adopts for one page UNLESS they are the commissioner of the sheet."
Did you read the rules?
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i know i did read the rules, i just couldnt decide which one i wanted so i filled an app for the 3 i like <
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The second one, if it doesn't get taken. C:
Prepare for on of those long bios, because I enjoy making up stories...
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NAME: Broken Branch
AGE: Ten
GENDER: Male/ Stallion
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Straight
*LONG* HISTORY:
Broken Branch was named his name because during the birthing, a storm brewing outside the hospital. Lightning struck and a tree fell right outside the window, crackling rising into the air as it was downed. His name was the first thing that came to his mothers' mind.
Broken Branch was born with two older brothers who tease and bully him constantly, whether it be about his size and stature or his naturally timid and frightened personality. His parents were careless and young parents, leaving him alone with his siblings all the time, having little knowledge of what happens while they're out partying or clubbing.
A simple explanation of what happens is that Broken Branch is torturously teased and toyed with, from laughing at him to locking him in the closet. It goes farther, sometimes.
After the older siblings moved out of the apartment when he was ten, Broken had a slightly better life, despite a newly developed disorder he'd gained from the bullying, Schizoid Personality Disorder, or SPD. This caused him to be very aloof and detached from social behavior, having anxiety when in emotional intimacy situations, and being increasingly indifferent on certain situations.
With this disorder, he kept mainly to himself, hardly interacting with classmates, and generally erratically wandering around outside, off to the forest a short walk from the apartment compound, his curiosity undying.
Animals became an interest of his immediately when he went into the forestry on the outer edge of the city. The area was highly populated with animals, particulary insects. Broken could interact easily with bugs. They never tried to talk with him, they just listened to anything he said. They weren't scared of his presence, sitting blandly around, buzzing about inside the jar he had found within the woodlands. They gave Broken courage to continue on, and still do, slowly breaking him out of his disorder as he's encouraged by his tiny comrades to interact with other ponies.
LIKES:
He generally favors insects, as they are one of his closest friends in nature. The Praying Mantis and the Ladybug are his two favorite insects as they were the first two he'd ever seen outside. Though, the Ladybug was dead and the Mantis was eating it.
Though he knows few spells, magic is another liking of his. Broken enjoys levitating objects and things, zapping spiders with an electric shock as well.
Since Broken is very close to nature, his favorite foods include nuts and berries, specifically berries. He loves the juices inside of them.
Broken enjoys solitude, being rather independent and hard-shelled, though he's beginning to return to sociality.
A random liking of his includes string or thread. It's entertaining and passes time.
DISLIKES:
Broken Branch heavily dislikes arachnids, they disgust him. Ever since he found out spiders weren't from the insect kingdom, after he'd observed them up close and had been bitten on the upper knee, Broken felt deceived and never neared them.
He dislikes most ponies, generally untrusting of other ponies and unwilling to meet strangers.
Broken doesn't like bed time at all, it takes time from his day, even if it's relaxing and gives him more time to himself. He often stays up late to watch the fireflies, intrigued on how they light up and glow in the night. He becomes tired due to this, and adds to the list of dislikes. He doesn't enjoy being weary.
*FAMILY:
Rita was his mother, a white Unicorn with a neon yellow mane and bright green eyes who works at a club bar. Her cutie mark is a fancy margarita glass.
Delvin was his father, a brown and black Earth Pony with a grass colored mane and bottomless black eyes who makes a living as a limousine driver. His cutie mark is a slick tore with twinkling stars around it.
Spider Star is his older brother, a slick dark grey Earth Pony with a pitch black mane dipped neon yellow and green eyes who works as a movie theater manger in Trottingham. His cutie mark is a white star with a film case curling behind it.
Dusted Skies is his older brother, a pale brown Earth Pony with a white mane and deep brown eyes who was last noted to be be in Manehatten in the Rift Wave, a ruthless gang of bandits and thieves, but his current residence is unknown. His cutie mark is an old western style pistol.
*HOBBIES:
He most enjoys studying any type of insect, of course, as there are many which he hasn't discovered within the the forest he most usually resides in.
Exploring is another hobby of Broken's, as he does go out in his large bouts of spare time when his parents are out. Whether its at night or day, he'll escape the room whenever he gets the chance.
Shocking spiders with his Unicorn magic, Broken Branch rather sees this as a hobby and his job to 'rid Equestria of the eight-legged beasts', as he always says. Do remember, he's only ten, and rather immature over all still, so he thinks of spiders as evil venomous monsters, despite their small size and all.
*FRIENDS:
Broken Branch doesn't exactly have friends which are ponies. Specifically, his best friend is a little Ladybug he feeds and keeps in his jar habitat, he named her 'Lady Spottingham'.
Other than that, the insects and animals are his friends, keeping to mostly solitude.
*WHERE THEY LIVE:
His current residence is with his parents in a small apartment building on the edge of Trottingham. Broken Branch mostly can be seen within the forest he has named 'Insect Village', though it is named otherwise by whatever explorer first found it.
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I spend way too much time doing this type of thing. .__.
But I think that pony is extremely cute and could have quite the history behind him.
Ack. :U Just saw that he was taken. .3. Well... Oh well.
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Pssshhhheeeew! That's a long, impressive, wondderfully written bio!
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So glad that you enjoyed it! x3 Last second I saw the commissioner had claimed the pony, but I'd token a lot of time to write it up, so I figured I'd just post it anyway. I'm excited to see the next one, your sheets are always fun to see!
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Lol.. I didn't know it was actually that long..
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Long is good though, because you're fleshing things out.
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True, true, even if sometimes it might all go to waste.
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Yeah, basically on these sheets, the person commissioning it gets first dibs.
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Yep. Next time I'll make sure to wait for the commissioner to choose, so I don't go through this again.
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mi gosh I wanna try for the bat pony now lol!
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:3 I'm new here so I don't know most of the smileys. XD Shame, they're so much fun.
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[link] [link] [link]
[link] Are some of my favorite PLZ comments/pages so you can learn the names of the icons to type them out. :3
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Wow, that's a lotta plzes! (I dunno how to plural it.)
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(Me neither. XD) Do you know how to use them?
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Yeah, of course! :icon and then you put in the plz account name. End with another colon.
Thank you for your help! I'm so glad my friends suggested I join, I love it here. The majority of the site is a giant pool of inspiration!
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Haha, just making sure.
And I'm glad you're so inspired here.
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Thanks! Your work was ome of the first things I saw here, actually. I was like, "I want to be able to do that someday!" I feel bad though, because now I have more watchers than my friends who introduced me, and I'm not exactly sure if they are okay with that.
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Well, that does happen from time to time. But if they're finding a problem with you having more watchers, they aren't being very happy for what success you're gaining, are they? :< Real friends shouldn't begrudge something good happing to someone else. Have you asked them about that before, or are you guessing that this may be the way they feel?
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Well, whenever I talk to my friend about Deviantart, she all of a sudden doesn't want to draw any,ore, and then claims she's more into writing. I know her better than to believe that.
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Ahh, I see. I've seen that happen before too. :< Maybe you should directly ask her is something about deviant art is bothering her. Or maybe see if there are ways to bring a little attention to her page. She may be jealous of your sudden "success" by gaining so many watchers, and feel bad for being jealous. In any case, I think you should ask her if she's alright. She may actually just be trying to find something she's better at than drawing, so she can make a break in dA too.
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