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Kendrian — Fighter in trouble 3
Published: 2008-07-19 00:26:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 4757; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 105
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It seems like once again a fighter of Fiesta Online has gotten into trouble. This time she has been captured by the Marlone Clan at Burning Hill.She was a bit careless and happened to walk into the boss' lair. She was no match for him.
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I'm not really satisfied with this pic, but I decided to upload it anyway. Enjoy it or not.
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Comments: 2
Honestly, it's not bad. Part of the problem is that your poses are all kind of stiff and samey. What if you tried a more natural stance with your damsels?
I also like your strong sense of narrative, with the situations the damsels find themselves in and what not. In this particular case, mind, I might have gone for a heavier gag in case she has friends. And tied her with something other than rope if you're going to anchor her to your sword.
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Don't be too hard on yourself. Personally, I think you an OK job with it. (but that's just my opinion 
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