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Published: 2014-03-27 02:14:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 56518; Favourites: 1155; Downloads: 216
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Void-Adoptables [2014-03-28 00:07:41 +0000 UTC]

this looks awesome!

but i had a terrible thought..
the fight could go a bit too far and Spike could do some nasty things to Rarity

*cough*LikeBiteHerNeckReallyHardWithBloodAndAll*cough*

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LuminoZero In reply to Void-Adoptables [2014-03-28 03:22:34 +0000 UTC]

That is like suggesting that any man in the world could go too far and beat their wife to death with a wrench.Β  Yes it is possible, but most men (most PEOPLE) wouldn't even consider something like that.

-Lumino

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ElementOf-Loyalty [2014-03-27 21:07:31 +0000 UTC]

Whoa,Rarity has a backbone of pure steel to stand up to Big Spike.
Claire has the right face for this scene.

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Kgrrimskey In reply to ElementOf-Loyalty [2014-03-29 22:26:03 +0000 UTC]

Pffffftt! Spike has backbone to stand up to Rarity.

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Shogun-Nesto [2014-03-27 19:10:34 +0000 UTC]

Awwww that was great

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Arya-Jaeger In reply to ??? [2014-03-27 19:08:28 +0000 UTC]

Until we have seen someone's darkness, we don't really know who they are.
Until we have forgiven someone's darkness, we don't really know what love is.

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geoice In reply to ??? [2014-03-27 18:52:44 +0000 UTC]

Forgive

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EX1E In reply to ??? [2014-03-27 18:34:31 +0000 UTC]

OH MAN THAT WAS JUST TOO CUTE.

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ScarletandLunaRcool [2014-03-27 18:30:02 +0000 UTC]

XD Claire in the background, unamused, LOL.

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Orhblin [2014-03-27 17:52:16 +0000 UTC]

That has to be the best Dragon/pony I have yet to see, if I ever saw a good one before just now.Β 

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Xphire906 [2014-03-27 17:29:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god. Beautiful

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Jonot [2014-03-27 14:04:57 +0000 UTC]

Every couple argues. Just don't do it in front of the kids.

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Demolition-Kitty In reply to Jonot [2014-03-27 16:31:50 +0000 UTC]

that isn't true if you have one Mexican parent, i've been woken up in the middle of the night to be used as a leverage in a fight by my mother

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Jonot In reply to Demolition-Kitty [2014-03-27 16:34:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow. I'm happy that my sister-in-law doesn't do that to my brother.
My sympathies to you.

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Siansaar [2014-03-27 13:02:11 +0000 UTC]

lovely story! i suppose her look in this picture is supposed to be "why are you arguing?", but tbh it comes across as "not this sh*t again" to me

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Quincydragon [2014-03-27 10:54:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh boy...

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HealingBlight [2014-03-27 10:50:59 +0000 UTC]

You know there isn't any real hatered between them by the fact that nobody truly malicious would dare anger something as intimidating and ferocious as a fully grown rarity.

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Sirkylanthered [2014-03-27 10:03:37 +0000 UTC]

With a mom like Rarity and Spike being a stubborn dragon, Clair should be use to this stuff.

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spyrofan923 In reply to Sirkylanthered [2014-04-08 05:59:20 +0000 UTC]

I agree. The best couples tend to fight on occasion. And seeing as Spike and Rarity are both emotional and stubborn at times........this is probably both healthy and a normal occurrence for all of them.

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Bigshot232 [2014-03-27 09:00:54 +0000 UTC]

looks like rarity is the one that is upset or angry about something and spike is trying to explain himself.Β 

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Lurks-no-More In reply to ??? [2014-03-27 07:11:49 +0000 UTC]

Snarl snarl, whinny whinny.
No relationship is without its occasional clashes.
And Claire is really, really good at pulling the grumpy, world-weary, "Oh geez, I thought you guys were supposed to be the adults!" look.

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Kgrrimskey In reply to ??? [2014-03-27 06:30:36 +0000 UTC]

Is it just me or does Clarity look 100% done with her parents

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Tatsurou-san [2014-03-27 06:09:09 +0000 UTC]

The only thing I think that would have made the story better, in my opinion, is if Rarity had come in at the end to sleep in Claire's bed, too.

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Kgrrimskey In reply to Tatsurou-san [2014-03-27 06:31:02 +0000 UTC]

Dude... That's brilliant

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Tatsurou-san In reply to Kgrrimskey [2014-03-27 15:25:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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DestinyDecade [2014-03-27 04:54:41 +0000 UTC]

This picture... it happens to a lot of families when arguing ensues. When their children are in the middle, it makes them wonder why they do this. I've had my fair share of them and it's not pretty.

Simply lovely.

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AZREAL258 [2014-03-27 04:48:54 +0000 UTC]

Leave it to the modern dragon/pony hybrid to save their parents marriage.

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ACEnBEAKY In reply to AZREAL258 [2014-03-27 06:03:26 +0000 UTC]

I feel bad for when kids can't have any fun because they have to play the role of the adults.

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AZREAL258 In reply to ACEnBEAKY [2014-03-28 00:56:00 +0000 UTC]

Yeah but sometimes kids are wiser than parents.

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ACEnBEAKY In reply to AZREAL258 [2014-03-28 18:54:46 +0000 UTC]

Sad but true. Something that should get you more respect as a child only gets you more responsibility and more persecution.

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FangsOut [2014-03-27 04:28:26 +0000 UTC]

I love this fandom

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Omnifighter1 [2014-03-27 03:55:36 +0000 UTC]

A lovers' spat.

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LuminoZero [2014-03-27 03:33:08 +0000 UTC]

This.Β  This was the Sparity/Claire fic I couldn't write.Β  I had ideas in my head, but NotARealPonyDotCom absolutely nailed it.Β  I cannot think of really anything significant I would have done better.

We were given a look into the life of a real married couple, and the unfortunate truth that all couples fight, but it didn't come off as insincere or difficult.Β  The story wasn't flawless, but it was damn-near close enough.

Well done to the both of you.

-Lumino

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TheblueQueen16 In reply to ??? [2014-03-27 03:27:08 +0000 UTC]

I sat and read this and I have to say, really nice! Your friend did a prettY well written.

Fav charter: Clarity. She so sassy😝

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Wolf-Fang4 [2014-03-27 03:19:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow I just read that before this.

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ZDForrest In reply to ??? [2014-03-27 03:15:32 +0000 UTC]

Even the best of friends fight sometimes. It's only when you let that hurt turn to hate rather than forgiveness is when your love is truly doomed.Β 

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Crazeddude4000 In reply to ??? [2014-03-27 03:13:30 +0000 UTC]

Clarity's derping to meΒ 

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bico-kun In reply to ??? [2014-03-27 03:02:57 +0000 UTC]

I'mma have to read that when I get out of the desert.

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Sire-Sword In reply to ??? [2014-03-27 03:02:21 +0000 UTC]

She just looks so unimpressed. Like, she looks like the only mature one there.

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Tornkiller00 In reply to ??? [2014-03-27 03:00:11 +0000 UTC]

This is what I love about this fandom. The fic was amazing, and this pic is gorgeous, and we're just getting started.

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LordMasterJohn In reply to ??? [2014-03-27 02:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I like the themathic given here

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eon54 [2014-03-27 02:30:02 +0000 UTC]

Poor Clarity.

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cowgirlup0 [2014-03-27 02:26:50 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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WildbreathTheOrigina [2014-03-27 02:26:01 +0000 UTC]

Clarity not amused.

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PurfectPrincessGirl In reply to ??? [2014-03-27 02:25:59 +0000 UTC]

Clarity to the rescue!

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CITRUSKING46 [2014-03-27 02:25:35 +0000 UTC]

"WHAT DID I TELL YOU ABOUT SODDING COOKIES!?"

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Noise-Nin [2014-03-27 02:24:40 +0000 UTC]

clarity, officially over her parents bullshit(aren't we all)

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xPD369 [2014-03-27 02:23:21 +0000 UTC]

Look at clarity face haha

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cmara [2014-03-27 02:15:32 +0000 UTC]

uh oh

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