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Nee (c) =NeKoChAnKEmilie (c) ~KALEIDOGod
Complete Manga :Reaching for the Sky
p.s: page 48, 49, 50 at nekochank dot com
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WARNING
Please Respect my gallery
if you don't like it ... don't look at!
Constructive critics are welcome
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DUN-DUN-DUN-DUUUUUUUUN!!!
Somehow the dirtiest part of my brain suggested me right about her feelings
Next time i'll listen better
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Sweet! This story keeps getting better and better!
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Kyaaah! Lo sabΓa!!! Ju >_< Es muy triste >_< Pobre Emily U.U
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de acuerdo, pero habra que esperar la siguiente pagina...
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ShΓ >_<
(Espero que haya yuri, es mi pasiΓ³n xD Pero... Ju... No quiero que se vaya Emily! Es adorable!!!)
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Unm nada mal nos caeria aunque, Karla no me dijo nada al respecto de escenas de ese tipo con Emilie y nee 
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-^^- Nos sorprenderΓ‘ para bien, eso seguro
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Now complete the circle by having two male characters kiss
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....i can't see Kian doing that....i doubt Micca would want to kiss Azure
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Not Kian, but some other character that would suddenly do it and that character would probably get punched afterwards...
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well there are 3 (and if i really havent been paying attention 4) guys: Kian, Azure, and Micca
and like i said...i doubt Micca would kiss Azure(since Micca seems the most likely to be gay)
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So that's why she didn't like Nee hanging out with Kian.
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lol, insert random plot twist here XD
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Yep, didn't see that coming. But I sure do love it when girls share a tender moment (and a bit of tongue, haha) X3
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Now THAT I didn't see coming like the rest!
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BWOA SHIT!
I never saw that coming..
I thought she was just a concerned friend.
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I've been following this story for some time now, but I still think that you have lots of things to learn about writing.
I only see people being all sweetums here, so let me just give you some critisizm.
The way you are trying to build op stories is sometimes really rubbish, like in this page you go trough all the lines so fast, without trying to build op drama and so the entire 'shock' effect is pretty much totally gone.
I mean, it goes from happy to sad to climax to kiss in just 4 panels, it just doesn't really work that way.
Apart from that I can tell you're working on a nice story here, and the art is of very nice quality, so I wish for you to continue these series, but kind of try to look out for what I said.
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lol, nice one
but i do believe it's "we're" not "where"
but dont mind me, i'm just a idiot ^^
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I bow to you Nekochank, the sex plot twister XD
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The "sex plot twister" hehehe 
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thanks, someone say that every month XD
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Holy shit! Sexy plot twist! 0.0
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Dun-dun-duuuuuuuuuuun! o w o
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Wow... >.> I actually... Didn't see that coming... Now it just seems too obvious looking back.
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Yeah. Close calls. Sudden blow jobs. And now your best friend of the same gender is snogging you. Jesus Christ.
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Oh no, im surprisingly getting into this!
D: I wanna see more!
YURI <33
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