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Kikanemimi In reply to 1oooinkstains [2012-09-04 06:15:40 +0000 UTC]

try pressing them with both arms and you'll get that shape : )

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Armonia-Justin In reply to 1oooinkstains [2012-09-04 06:09:39 +0000 UTC]

seeing as the artist is female i'm fairly sure she does understand how breasts work, just saying xD also they dont really look oblong just looks like she's squeezing them together

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SHarles25 In reply to 1oooinkstains [2012-09-04 05:30:44 +0000 UTC]

I think you don't understand: they are not human 1st hand, second they are characters from an other world so they can have any kind of anatomy, realistic or not.
The Author have her own style, that's it

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LindseyDisney In reply to SHarles25 [2012-09-04 06:32:08 +0000 UTC]

No, she's kinda right. There is a fine line with style, but these creatures are going for a more human like physique. The breasts here do look a tad wonky. The creator asked for a critique, and got one. The whole "characters are from a different world so they can have outrageous anatomy" is a really lame excuse, too.

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SHarles25 In reply to LindseyDisney [2012-09-04 07:53:17 +0000 UTC]

ever since I am on DA, I've never really focused any critiques on the anatomy or breast size or shape whatever and there is a reason for it.
I think this is all depending on the artist, when making a critique you can tell everything from your point of view, but to be honest any negative critiques will rarely have any real impact if they are made by people with fewer related art in there gallery, this is how it work on DA, if your account is empty or filled with random pictures, traditional art, etc and then you start critique a digital art comic, how can we say you have the credit for saying such thing?

I watched both you and gallery and I can tell none of you have made any single real full body with realistic proportions and super well made hands etc, so ok you can critique as much you want but work on it before telling her that she made stuff not the way you like

Peace and no offence attended, but I just defended NeKoChAnK on a point she clarified already on a journal some time ago.

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LindseyDisney In reply to SHarles25 [2012-09-04 08:39:49 +0000 UTC]

Wow I guess I'll go top to bottom then.
That's a simple mistake so many artists make. Not paying attention to breast size and shape. It's kinda important. And anatomy. Extremely important as well.
And a critique should mean something to an artist. It's a mistake they've made, big or small, and they should probably fix it. It should be how all artists on DA react to one, but sadly, DA is known for being full of people who don't react that way.
And I'm getting kinda lost here because your grammar is quite difficult to decipher....?
WOW here's the part that bugs me. There was literally no reason to bring my gallery, or this other chick's gallery into it. I am a fifteen year old girl, who just got a little more serious about anatomy, and drawing in general. If you look at my first picture from March, and then the one from just today, you can see I've actually improved quite a bit. I've really been researching my anatomy lately. But I'm still on the road of progress. I am actually always asking for critiques, because I wish to improve my talent further, I'm just not lucky enough to get them often. And have I made a full body with realistic proportions? Yes, I actually have. Did I post it here on DA? No, I have other sites that I share my artwork on too. DA is not my serious art-sharing site. It's more for my silly RP groups, and sometimes gift art. I don't post my serious art here, because DeviantArt is kind of a horrible place, full of horrible people.
And here's a newsflash. You don't have to be a master artist to give a critique. When I ask my friends, who don't draw, what they think of a picture I've worked on, and am proud of, they might point out a flaw I didn't see before, because a fresh pair of eyes can sometimes pick out what you can't. "Oh, her arms look a little short." "Wow, his hands are a bit small." ANYONE can point out obvious and basic anatomical flaws.
Now that we're snooping through galleries, what's in yours? Some mediocre photos you took, a couple Naruto OCs made with a doll maker, and some line-art you didn't draw, but colored. Which also has some pretty poor anatomy. And according to your "Devious Info", your favorite poet or writer is "Me (without hesitation)". Not with your piss poor grammar. And you don't even have any writings in your gallery, how can we say you have the credit for saying such things? (Does that seem familiar I hope?) You are in literally no place to judge.
And you were not really "defending" her, Mr. White Knight, you were harassing this girl because she made a critique that was asked for. Her and I were the only one to give this artist an actual critique. Everyone else is just patting her on the bum, and thanking her for the fan-service. She might enjoy the positive attention, yes, but perhaps she enjoys well-thought out critiques as well.
And a point she made on a journal a long time ago? I don't watch her, so I wouldn't know? If it's the lame excuse about "different world so horrible anatomy is fine", then that's not very good. At all.

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SHarles25 In reply to LindseyDisney [2012-09-04 11:17:15 +0000 UTC]

Well, sorry for having a very poor gallery
Like I said early, do not take offence.
I won't bother explaining why my grammar into my third language isn't as good as my first one.
And for poetry, to be honest I always wrote them on a paper and gave them away, sadly for me I never been able to duplicate any of them and it's been a fact I haven't made any new ones lately.
Peace dear.

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LindseyDisney In reply to SHarles25 [2012-09-04 17:35:41 +0000 UTC]

When you say "no offence", it doesn't make it any less offensive. It just looks like you're trying to weasel out of the consequences.
And doesn't feel too good when someone calls you out on your own lameness, eh.

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Neo-Draco In reply to ??? [2012-09-04 04:04:03 +0000 UTC]

Awesome.

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KungfuMustard In reply to ??? [2012-09-04 04:01:18 +0000 UTC]

I am slightly reminded of Hellsing.

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sparks7744 In reply to ??? [2012-09-04 03:58:18 +0000 UTC]

XD

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miku1212 In reply to ??? [2012-09-04 03:07:45 +0000 UTC]

Lol

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LighttheChao In reply to ??? [2012-09-04 03:02:16 +0000 UTC]

It would be awesome if nosebleeds could really happen in situations like that, but I dunno if it's ever happened before. Anyway, Kian's crazy for kicking Katrina out for ice cream just so he could be with Nee^w^

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Ryukky In reply to ??? [2012-09-04 03:00:38 +0000 UTC]

hehe,I sense trouble in the future

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KatsuAshomi In reply to ??? [2012-09-04 02:57:45 +0000 UTC]

AHAHA, 痴漢

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jackanarchy99 In reply to ??? [2012-09-04 02:56:35 +0000 UTC]

Not enough nosebleed!

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Kotrebo In reply to ElecRockin [2012-09-04 02:27:53 +0000 UTC]

uhhhh ... it took time to hire a maid? You know, that whole before and after sequence of things spanning a timeline?

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ElecRockin In reply to Kotrebo [2012-09-04 21:04:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh crap, my mistake.

When I read it the first time, I thought the third panel was him snapping out of his day dream (especially cause of how quick they gotten the maid LOL). That's why I found it so awkward. ><;;

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