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Published: 2011-08-06 17:48:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 35616; Favourites: 653; Downloads: 0
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Description Perry almost regretted helping Ferb out of the mud pit to go get help. With nightfall came eerie shadows and suspicious noises. His senses were on alert more than usual. His heart beat loudly like a drum. And sitting in the thick mud for hours did absolutely no help.

But he couldn't leave the fifteen-year-old. He couldn't leave Phineas alone there, injured and catching a fever. It was bad enough Perry had sent Ferb off with an injured arm; it would have been better if they had both thought of a way helping Phineas out without infecting the cut on his leg or injuring his twisted ankle at the same time. But Perry knew more than anyone that moving Phineas without any professional help would only make his situation worse.

So he sat there, trying to keep the teenager's head above the thick mud while waiting for help to come.

Maybe it would have been better if he had never done what he had done; maybe it would have been better if Perry had left well enough alone.

Then Phineas and Ferb wouldn't be in this mess.

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You can call it an excuse if you want. I. DON'T. CARE. That made last night almost an evening I never wanted to remember. No, it has nothing to do with the movie: only the people who watched it three hours before me and come rub it in my face on notes. People will and already have given me crap about my storylines after the movie, so I've come up with a loophole.

I will be writing it in the next few weeks.




characters (c) Dan and Swampy
art (c) KicsterAsh
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Comments: 117

Dragimal [2011-08-08 03:11:26 +0000 UTC]

DARNITPEOPLE! STOP MAKING ASH'S LIFE HARDER! It makes me mad that your doing this. Don't get me wrong, I love it when you come up with new storylines! I'm just ticked that you were forced into it by a bunch of whiners who don't have enough imagination to read your stories and appreciate the fact that you took the time to write them!

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Lils97 [2011-08-08 01:07:47 +0000 UTC]

Excited!!!!

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Princess-Rosalinda7 [2011-08-08 00:50:20 +0000 UTC]

I know now that ur 'Francis getting Perry' story makes no sence now but it's better then how they got Perry in the movie.Batholimu!(Or something...)Wow.

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DustyButterfly [2011-08-07 21:41:11 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait to read it! But I still like your story line, even if the movie ends differently.

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mikuru-SOS [2011-08-07 13:49:07 +0000 UTC]

yay new story!!! I love your PnF stories and I've just started reading Book 3 of The Seer. I'm really looking forward to this one and I can't wait to read it.

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TybaltduCapulet In reply to ??? [2011-08-07 12:24:42 +0000 UTC]

loopholes are good. Looking forward to it and sorry about the people giving you crap.

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Lyssie212 [2011-08-07 05:37:25 +0000 UTC]

Eeek! I'm so excited to read this! I love your stories sooo much, and I think they are definitely much better than the movie. And I'm not just saying this to make you feel better. It's the honest-to-goodness truth. Keep up the utterly amazing work!

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MagicMage88 [2011-08-07 02:17:39 +0000 UTC]

Personally, I like your way of handling the Phineas/Ferb/Perry situation...I was rather disappointed with the way they ended the movie because it seemed a bit like the easy way out. I say, if you wrote your stories that way and things haven't worked out the same way in the show, forget the people who don't like it. Your stories are your stories, even if the characters come from someplace else. If you want to write it a certain way, do. I hope you're feeling a bit better. :/

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desolate-oneechan [2011-08-07 02:03:00 +0000 UTC]

I don't see why they think it matters that your stories take place in a slightly different timeline. That just makes it AU fanfiction, which it was anyway. I still love your stuff, but this loophole should be interesting.

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Axe2345567 [2011-08-07 00:16:20 +0000 UTC]

Did you a-holes think that her story could take place during a different timeline? Did that occur to you people! God I need to beat up irving

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jokergirl129 [2011-08-06 23:16:10 +0000 UTC]

I don't see why people are going to give you problems about your stories. Just because you created certain events that don't exactly line up with some events in the movie doesn't mean they aren't good. Plus some of your ideas seemed to have came about before the movie. I say you write what ever you want to write.

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pYez [2011-08-06 23:12:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh don't worry, amnesia is usually curable with intense photographic proof.

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ToaTarkana [2011-08-06 23:12:30 +0000 UTC]

It is a writer's biggest challenge to make sure their stories stay cohesive with one another; writing fan fiction for an ongoing series makes this especially important - and harder.

You are an fantastic writer. You've taken these characters who, due to the nature of the show's intended audience, have little to work with, and have fleshed them out spectacularly. It was inevitable that your storylines, no matter how well-written they are, would eventually meet a point where they broke from canon significantly.

It's not an excuse. It's an something that goes with the territory and cannot be avoided. And knowing your writing, I trust it will be amazing.

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Tigerach [2011-08-06 22:48:55 +0000 UTC]

Ah, it's okay. In my fanfiction I had to move things around and add stuff and make dumb excuses to make my version work with the movie's plotline.

It's worth it.

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Mattpwnsall [2011-08-06 22:30:56 +0000 UTC]

I dont care about the storylines after the movie, what I do care about is the effort and how well you do your art and stories!

I LOVE this picture, and the story!

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AppleDanish In reply to ??? [2011-08-06 22:23:42 +0000 UTC]

People are completely and ridiculously ignorant. For anyone who's been noting her: LEAVE. HER ALONE. Find something better to do than hurt other people's feelings, you assholes! Dx

I love this picture and I love the story to go with it. Your story's are amazing, forget following anything specific.

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zame328 In reply to ??? [2011-08-06 21:50:08 +0000 UTC]

oh im sorry! i didnt know that you havent seen it yet! D: i apologize.

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FucshiaWillow In reply to ??? [2011-08-06 21:37:44 +0000 UTC]

My only question is... doesn't your storyline work anyway? Like if they found out his secret again or something? Some people are stupid...jeez.

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MollyTheWanderer In reply to ??? [2011-08-06 21:22:56 +0000 UTC]

...Are people being stupid to you? I'm sorry.

I havent gotten to watch the movie yet either. I'm gonna wait till I can find it online for free. And I like your stuff, so other people can go poopy. And if your stuff ends up close to what Swampy and the guys at Phineas and Ferb central are doing? Great minds think alike.

Hope today is happier for you ^_^.

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ShoyzzFanArt In reply to ??? [2011-08-06 20:50:22 +0000 UTC]

What is the story going to be called?

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kungfu-blaziken [2011-08-06 20:36:31 +0000 UTC]

I never intended to rub ANYTHING. I simply forgot about the time difference and wanted to share in the excitement of the movie with a friend. I am DEEPLY sorry if I offended you in any way.

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KicsterAsh In reply to kungfu-blaziken [2011-08-06 22:24:48 +0000 UTC]

You weren't the only one to do it, and you were one of the polite ones. You didn't offend me, the only thing that really hurt was when you asked that last question in the note.

But it's in the past now, I'm trying to forget it, and I'm trying to keep going.

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kungfu-blaziken In reply to KicsterAsh [2011-08-06 22:37:11 +0000 UTC]

Right. 'Keep moving forward!'






I've never seen that movie, but I thought you'd appreciate the reference

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lilmizzkrazie [2011-08-06 20:14:33 +0000 UTC]

Strange, I didn't visit your page last night until after I saw the movie not wanting to be spoiled or wanting to spoil you in case you hadn't seen it yet.

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animeforever01 [2011-08-06 20:03:14 +0000 UTC]

who cares if your stories are different from the movie! that's what makes them awesome!

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nutinc2254 [2011-08-06 20:00:35 +0000 UTC]

sorry if I did bug you

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RyuTheWeredragon [2011-08-06 19:46:07 +0000 UTC]

-_- They have huh? That's terrible.

I mean if you had started AFTER the movie that's one thing... but since you started well before the movie, it comes off as rather rude.

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Jackie-SugarSkull [2011-08-06 19:41:53 +0000 UTC]

I hate it when people give you spoilers after you CLEARLY ask them not to! Some people have no shame...

Don't let what people say about you or your stories get to you.

Your stories are AMAZING just the way the are! They've captured more emotional depth than the entire series, in my opinion.

Great Pic, by the way!

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ElyPandita [2011-08-06 19:34:53 +0000 UTC]

You don't have any loopholes, you just don't know what happened between the movie and your stories. Yet.

Haters gonna hate sweetie! And they only hate good, stuff, you know crappy work doesn't get that kind of stuff.

Be proud of what you do. Greatest artist get the greatest critics.

And you always have your girls here.



On the other hand, this is just amazing.

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KicsterAsh In reply to ElyPandita [2011-08-06 22:22:29 +0000 UTC]

Thankies loads and loads and loads, Ely
<333333333333333

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ElyPandita In reply to KicsterAsh [2011-08-06 22:26:12 +0000 UTC]

No problem, dearie, I really mean it

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iloveDannyPhantom914 [2011-08-06 19:32:17 +0000 UTC]

I'll be honest, I like your storyline better. It gives it more substance, you know? Plus, Francis rocks.

And don't listen to those people. Block 'em, and forget about it. There are enough people that positively LOVE your stories that they don't matter.

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Agetian In reply to ??? [2011-08-06 19:24:47 +0000 UTC]

I don't know about others, my friend, but personally I truly and wholeheartedly enjoy your amazing stories, I love the development
of the plot, and I believe that it has achieved the level of depth and beauty that was not even attained by Disney itself and probably
will not be in the entire P&F series! Please don't give up and definitely keep writing, your stories are some of the most
amazing I've read yet, and they are the stories that made me love P&F ten times more than I already loved it (and I already loved
it a lot )

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rosetheeevee12 In reply to ??? [2011-08-06 19:24:17 +0000 UTC]

I havent seen the movie but I will say just ignore them I know that there memories have been erased from that moment...

Nice pic though

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Aussiebabe29 [2011-08-06 19:10:26 +0000 UTC]

I think work it better the some of the movie story. I mean I so totally saw the ending coming, will apart from the Isabella bit, I loved that
But I think how you wrote Perry was brought home from Phineas and Candace's dad and how Perry helped Phineas to walk... the movie didn't seem sensitive (not sure if thats the right word) enough about how Perry felt about Phineas and Ferb knowning his secert. Yout think would have tried talking or comunitating in some way to Monogram about letting the boys know his secert.
It seem too professional in away for me. Like his secert is more important, will thats how I saw it.
LOVE THE PICTURE!! Cant wait to read the story behind it!

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PhantomDreamerLuna In reply to ??? [2011-08-06 19:07:52 +0000 UTC]

but i love your stories just the way they are. I remember you always saying that you never even watched all the episodes before you starting doing fanart and fanfiction. I personally don't care if you're an expert or a noob; if you have talent, share it with others. And if you WANT to draw and write in support of something you love, just DO IT. Who cares what anyone else says? It's your choice, not theirs...

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Dreamweaver100 In reply to ??? [2011-08-06 18:55:54 +0000 UTC]

That's so rude, people bombarding you with spoilers before you even watched it. DX

Though I haven't seen much of your gallery, I like your art. ^^ And your storylines are nice too. If it's a fanfic, why does it even matter if it fits in perfectly?

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Aikaikaik In reply to ??? [2011-08-06 18:55:19 +0000 UTC]

I love your stories a bit more than the movie (even though i enjoyed it for the humor) I love your Stories much more because in some areas, it shows a bit of real life that could be possible, making The characters better than ever! You made stories that we could never see happening in a episode of PnF!! Don't feel bad, because tons of people love your stories as you make them! Dont stop your stories!!!

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Dhraca15 In reply to ??? [2011-08-06 18:28:39 +0000 UTC]

You are the one who told me to not to worry about
what other people thinks about my art. SO Im going to say
the same thing to you... If they doesnt like the story, then Is their problem!
You dont have to feel bad for those who doesnt like your stories...
You have to feel great and very lucky to have friends that LOVEss your stories!!
Cheer up!! you have a lot of friends who care about you! !

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purplekatz93 [2011-08-06 18:11:46 +0000 UTC]

I liked the movie, but I love your stories even more.

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GhostDog401 [2011-08-06 18:10:52 +0000 UTC]

*gasp* not Phinny

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Kanashii-Sorrow [2011-08-06 18:09:50 +0000 UTC]

I love your story lines so much and I'm sorry people are being ridiculous. I think your writings are fantastic, I really do! I think it's amazing how you wrote a fitting back story for everyone. You made something hilarious , great in every way!

This looks awesome and I can't wait to read it, NOT because it's a loophole, but because you wrote it.
I love your work thanks for being awesome.

Many blessings,
Kana

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basilluvr56 [2011-08-06 18:09:41 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry people did that to you! That wasn't fair at all. I'm loving the picture. Though! And you keep writing with all the story lines you have! I love them!

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Animaluver21 [2011-08-06 18:09:21 +0000 UTC]

atleast u saw it all...i was out and came back 2 minutes before it ended, and then i forgot to set my alarm so i woke up and it was 45 minutes into the movie...

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LoungingLemming [2011-08-06 18:07:18 +0000 UTC]

seriously? people have the nerve to give you crap? dude, you made your storyline WAY before the movie was put together! good lord, i guess people have nothing better to do with their lives then, how sad.

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Scribblenautdrawer [2011-08-06 18:01:05 +0000 UTC]

yes,I want see the film too

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dawnwally [2011-08-06 18:00:35 +0000 UTC]

you shouldn't let people upset you like that!!! your story is your own and doesn't have to please everyone. it doesn't matter if you don't match what dan and swampy wrote. you are a great writer and you make your own stories!!

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Helihi [2011-08-06 17:57:27 +0000 UTC]

It doesn't matter what other people say. Your stories are perfect [link]

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Helihi In reply to Helihi [2011-08-06 18:00:07 +0000 UTC]

Ignore the link. That was some weird thing my computer did

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Deberrygirl In reply to ??? [2011-08-06 17:53:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry to hear about all that stuff but I perfer your story lines if it makes any difference.

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