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(somewhere in ch. 21)... (And the end of Book one!!!!)

But, the blood in her veins went cold when she saw Damion carrying Rook. He was covered in blood and littered with cuts and abrasions. When he raised his head, she saw the twin black eyes and blood coming from his nose and mouth. 

 

She quickly tried to reach him through the thick snow. “Damion?!” she screams his name at the top of her lungs when he begins to fall. Tears ran down her face as she sprinted and tripped through the snow in a desperate attempt to reach them. 

 

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The demon had at last made it up the hill. Only then, did he relinquish his hold on his heavy scythe at the gate while walking up the path to his mansion. ‘So close, yet, so far away,’ he thought as his legs continue to take him to his goal. Rook had hardly stirred in his hold. He was too quiet and still, making Damion's stomach drop as he continued forward. Muffled sounds of barks entered his hearing. He realized it was Ruby as she circled them, then, walked alongside him. Sweat broke out on his skin as his vision began to swim. 

 

He heard another voice and instantly recognized the warm sound. ‘Sophie.’ His steps faltered as he desperately looked up to try and see her, but only saw a blurry vision of blues and gold’s. He tried to reach out to her. “Sophie,” he rasped before his vision completely blackened and he began to fall to the ground. 

 

All he could feel was the bone chilling cold that seeped through his flesh as if the Dark Lord himself had a grip on his soul and was dragging him down to the underworld. 

 

His dark world was nothing more than muffled noises, touches, and scents as something turned him to his back and shifted his head to lay on something soft that held the strong scent of lilacs and vanilla. Something hot and wet fell upon his cold, bloody face as watery sounds echoed in his head. He tried to open his heavy eyes, but was too tired and weak to even speak and only fell further into unconsciousness. 

 

‘Is this the end?’ 

 

To be continued… 

Book two: Retaliation 


WANNA KNOW WHAT THE HECK HAPPENS NOW?! HERE IS A LINK TO THE E-BOOK VERSION YOU CAN BUY ON AMAZON!  Plus the comments here can give you a pretty good idea what the rest of the fans think ^W^ THIS IS THE END OF BOOK ONE, BUT THIS IS DEFINITELY NOT THE END AS WE CONTINUE WITH BOOK TWO: RETALIATION!!! (which is a rough draft/ WIP you can read here until it is edited/completed and ready for amazon.)


www.amazon.com/dp/B01KSJ6S5I#n…


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Comments: 228

kitsunefire7 In reply to ??? [2014-04-28 13:26:12 +0000 UTC]

she'll be fine. The soul eaters wanna take out their biggest threat.

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onegiantdinosaur In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-04-28 18:16:45 +0000 UTC]

oh okay.    

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Moon-chan332 In reply to ??? [2014-04-28 05:03:56 +0000 UTC]

awesomeness and i feeeeeelllll realy sorry for damion

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Moon-chan332 [2014-04-28 13:26:33 +0000 UTC]

XD lol he'll be fine~...mostly

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Moon-chan332 In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-04-28 13:31:15 +0000 UTC]

can't wait till u upload the next bit of the chapter. good luck wih college and keep up the good work!!!

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Moon-chan332 [2014-04-28 13:59:25 +0000 UTC]

I will ty ^^

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bloodking30 In reply to ??? [2014-04-28 04:37:26 +0000 UTC]

good

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kitsunefire7 In reply to bloodking30 [2014-04-28 05:08:18 +0000 UTC]

good? o,o

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bloodking30 In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-04-28 14:14:42 +0000 UTC]

yes good

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Azoresangel In reply to ??? [2014-04-28 03:39:22 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh churches saving lives since forever  

WHAT ABOUT SOPHIE?!?!?! ARE THE SOUL EATERS GONNA GET HER!?!?! GAHHHH!!! WHY MUST EVIL CREATURES SOMETIMES WORK TOGETHER?!?!?!! .... Okay I'm done I apologize for my outburst ... but now I have to wait for the next chapter!!!!!

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Azoresangel [2014-04-28 03:41:36 +0000 UTC]

next ch.? U mean update ^U^

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Azoresangel In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-04-28 05:25:55 +0000 UTC]

Yes .... yes I mean update .... I seems like chapters ... I don't know why 

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MantiisShrimp In reply to ??? [2014-04-28 03:14:43 +0000 UTC]

Daaaaaaamn......smart thinking Damion

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kitsunefire7 In reply to MantiisShrimp [2014-04-28 03:29:48 +0000 UTC]

^^

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littlebeast666 In reply to ??? [2014-04-24 03:57:13 +0000 UTC]

holy shit!!! let them get out alive!!!!

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kitsunefire7 In reply to littlebeast666 [2014-04-24 04:11:39 +0000 UTC]

XD lol its kinda destroying the point of having 3 or 4 more books if one or both of them die~

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littlebeast666 In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-04-29 02:39:13 +0000 UTC]

true. still fun to say though. lol

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werewolf-hime1313 In reply to ??? [2014-04-22 20:43:58 +0000 UTC]

O________________O

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kitsunefire7 In reply to werewolf-hime1313 [2014-04-22 22:25:20 +0000 UTC]

XD lol interesting face.

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werewolf-hime1313 In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-04-22 22:35:28 +0000 UTC]

the poor boys!

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kitsunefire7 In reply to werewolf-hime1313 [2014-04-22 22:38:26 +0000 UTC]

Damion/ Rook: WERE MEN! NOT BOYS!

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werewolf-hime1313 In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-04-22 22:51:41 +0000 UTC]

All males are boys when they're injured. that's because they need to be mommy'd back into health. P=

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kitsunefire7 In reply to werewolf-hime1313 [2014-04-22 23:32:33 +0000 UTC]

XD lol touche 

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werewolf-hime1313 In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-04-23 04:20:24 +0000 UTC]

=3

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spygirlLeah In reply to ??? [2014-04-22 08:23:54 +0000 UTC]

*starts whimpering* D-D-Damion R-Rook?... PLEASE BE OKAY!!! TT^TT (still love the story and i'm happy to see you update it can't wait for more)

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kitsunefire7 In reply to spygirlLeah [2014-04-22 19:17:37 +0000 UTC]

Damion/ Rook: WE AINT DEAD YET! WE GOT THIS WOMAN! D<

XD lol im glad your loving it so far despite the violence and the drive for survival ^^

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spygirlLeah In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-04-23 04:23:38 +0000 UTC]

me: i wasn't saying you guys are dead, i'm SAYING that i'm worried (warning: rant incoming!) and PLEASE explain how you guys got this!? because Damion nearly got his wing ripped off and can't even stand up straight and Rook's got a hole in his stomach and his leg is being used as a chew toy AND on top of that your both being swarmed by soul eaters SO PLEASE EXPLAIN!?!

XD well i really don't like violence but i do like action so got to live with it, although survival makes me curious as a kitten. i'm kinda werid like that ^///^; (but i really love a good romance X3)

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kitsunefire7 In reply to spygirlLeah [2014-04-23 13:00:52 +0000 UTC]

Damion/Rook: ...shit happens. -,-

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Gr33nGiRl In reply to ??? [2014-04-21 19:45:48 +0000 UTC]

 you did it again. I have died.

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Gr33nGiRl [2014-04-22 00:39:43 +0000 UTC]

XD lol dont die!

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onegiantdinosaur In reply to ??? [2014-04-21 16:28:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh Nooooo!!!!

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kitsunefire7 In reply to onegiantdinosaur [2014-04-21 16:35:51 +0000 UTC]

there still hanging in there

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onegiantdinosaur In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-04-21 19:23:45 +0000 UTC]

They need help! Like a Soul Collecter Collective or something!    

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kitsunefire7 In reply to onegiantdinosaur [2014-04-22 00:38:38 +0000 UTC]

Damion/ Rook: WE GOT THIS! D<

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onegiantdinosaur In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-04-22 03:21:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh, you do? >_> The gaping hole in rook's stomach and damion's lack of ability to fly say otherwise.

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kitsunefire7 In reply to onegiantdinosaur [2014-04-22 04:02:37 +0000 UTC]

Damion: This wont stop me. 

Rook: This wont kill me. 

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onegiantdinosaur In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-04-22 20:29:13 +0000 UTC]

Well I'll just have to wait and watch then. But I still think there should be a soul collector collective...

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kitsunefire7 In reply to onegiantdinosaur [2014-04-22 22:25:52 +0000 UTC]

who says there isn't?... in book 2 X3

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onegiantdinosaur In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-04-22 22:43:04 +0000 UTC]

:0

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kitsunefire7 In reply to onegiantdinosaur [2014-04-22 22:46:01 +0000 UTC]

X3 yep

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onegiantdinosaur In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-04-22 22:49:21 +0000 UTC]

   

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Ungen333 In reply to ??? [2014-04-21 01:24:40 +0000 UTC]

OOOOIII!!! WHAT THA HELL IS GOING ON!? ROOK NOOO! and ofcourse… you just needed to stop.. just like that?.. NOT EVEN A FULL SENTENCE!? GAAAAH 
but i liked when that little basters said 'It won't do any good collector. You're surrounded.' and hoo my god I've been gone from deviant art some time now and damn i have missed reading this! ^^

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Ungen333 [2014-04-21 02:58:13 +0000 UTC]

XD lol glad u missed my story. And sorry I left it like that. College has been brutal on me to get my work and prodjects done-completely draining me of my inspiration brain juices XD lol but I will update soon asap ^^ 

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Ungen333 In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-04-21 19:33:15 +0000 UTC]

haha awww~ i feel ya!

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bloodking30 In reply to ??? [2014-04-16 00:39:06 +0000 UTC]

i hope rook is alright

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kitsunefire7 In reply to bloodking30 [2014-04-16 03:57:02 +0000 UTC]

Well would you be if you had a gaping hole in your stomach? XD

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bloodking30 In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-04-16 15:44:34 +0000 UTC]

that true

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spygirlLeah In reply to ??? [2014-04-15 22:53:47 +0000 UTC]

OH GOSH!!!NO NO NO NOOOOOO!!!! SOPHIE DAMION ROOK NOOO!!! T^T and the soul eaters are working together!? D: WHAT!?

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onegiantdinosaur In reply to ??? [2014-04-15 17:20:46 +0000 UTC]

: [   ]  OMG. Now I'm worried...!

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kitsunefire7 In reply to onegiantdinosaur [2014-04-15 21:54:20 +0000 UTC]

you should be   

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