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Published: 2011-02-24 08:49:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 145; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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She looks like a Vulcan in this picture, which really was not what I had in mind. This is an early portrait of my character Jade. I dont care for her in this style though. Neck is wide, among other things. For those who wonder, the coil about her neck is her hair wrapped very tightly in fabric; Its quite long.Related content
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It's late, im tried, but Im also in an artistic mood, and I'm critiquing this like it or not.
First off, I like it and the shading. It is very proportionally correct, but the features are off.
It looks very masculine. The neck is too thick. The nose is also too bulbous.
The eyes are a little high making the forehead not seem correct. The ears will have to follow the eyes.
Also, got some underbiet action going on, need to slender out that chin. Females have sexy sleek chins.
Other than that, the clavicle may be a bit low.
And I hate to mention is, but she looks cross-eyed. The eyes dont appear to stare forward.
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