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Kostmeyer — 1DF SPITFIRE - Round Two
Published: 2009-11-15 01:53:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 3601; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 95
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My character Spitfire has made it through to the second round of *AngelCrusher 's latest tournament - the One Dollar Fighter competition!This time, the opposition is 's bizarre Ninja Granny! I don't advise you look at his half of the fight: [link] as it involved Aunt May's evil twin here wearing a bikini!
In my version we see that all the throwing stars, flash bombs, nasty pointy things, agility and ninja skill in the world doesn't count for a lot when the super-strong super-heroine you've been successfully annoying finally does manage to land a punch.
Spitfire would feel guilty for this I'm sure, but having seen that bikini picture, I'm not feeling guilty in the least!
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She certainly wouldn't! It's nice to try a more physical character this time around!
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Damn straight! It's always cool just to see a good ol' fist fight!
BTW, check out my profile for a sec. Got something that may interest ya.
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Interesting character - but I want you to consider a couple of things before I add him to the list:
1. He's VERY powerful - possibly TOO powerful I think. Remember this is a collaborative story not a fighting tournament - how will this guy work in our storyline? If you think he'll work in this storyline I'm happy to add him - but characters who will win every battle aren't fun - and neither are characters who are so powerful they don't need allies. I know you've added weaknesses but basically they amount to - 'he's unstoppable if he sees you coming' not much of a weakness really.
2. I started to nod off reading his bio I'm afraid - is there any chance you could begin it with a summary of just the basics - powers - personality etc - just the sort of things people need to know to understand what sort of character he is. If people have to read through several pages of text before they understand him, the chances are people won't use him in their pages. Keep the extra detail but put a summary at the top.
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Thanks for the comment.
1. I know he overly powerful, but I've based him around the major magic users, like Dr. Fate, Doctor Strange,etc. While he is capable of great power, he rarely uses it all, keeping with simple spells rather than overtly complicated ones. Those would require extreme measures and usually leave him exhausted from use. Course, I can replace the 'immortal' power with 'longevity', cause I still want the guy to come off as a wise, ancient being. There is also a weakness that I left out I can add in that would render him powerless.
2. Yeah, sorry about that. I saw how some of the other refs had a long back story to it, along with how mediocre my artwork is, I felt like I really had to flesh out my character through words, if nothing else. Still, I can create a brief summary above everything else.
All in all, nothing to hard to solve and can easily be done.
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lol I made the same comment on their long bio comments too! If people have to read a bio the size of a phone book in order to understand the character they just don't bother, so I'm glad you've sorted that.
As for the power thing, like I said, as long as you're OK with using him in the context of this story it's fine - but if you play him as an all powerful being he'll get zapped by the Beyonder, as there's only room for one all powerful being in this story!
I'll add him with tomorrow's update.
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Yes! 
Also, I may be adding a second page before the time is up, though I just need to plan it out for a bit.
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Look forward to seeing it!
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Great Fight. A bit mean breaking her dentures like that but I approve of the violence. I also like the inclusion of the Shogee.
Oh is that a cranky octopus under the water?
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It certainly is! I couldn't resist! As for the denture breaking - she deserved it for breaking my eyeballs (have you SEEN the other half of this fight? Shudders!) Thanks for the 
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There is a rule in the Ninja world, Keep you damn Gi on!!!
I am an ardent follower of this rule. She deserved everything she got.
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Busted dentures, that's epic!
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She deserved it! lol!
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Indeed, her side was quite nasty and ferocious!
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