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L9OBL — No Church On the Moon

Published: 2014-05-25 05:08:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 1224; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 9
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Description Who don't believe, in anything!

If I remember correctly I think this project was based off of a picture of three screen shots assembled togeather with the same caption... idk the sketch has been sitting on my computer for months. finally got to finish it. Enjoy!
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OfficialGoldenOwl [2014-05-25 21:54:18 +0000 UTC]

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Hey there! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> I'll try to critique this as best as I can, so sorry if it's a bit lengthy...

I LOVE the way this is organized, and the way the characters fit perfectly with the lyrics chosen here. It goes beyond the actual fandom of the show, which I always applaud. Perhaps the organization is a bit bizarre, with each character looking in separate directions. It just makes it look like it was traced, since each pose is directly from a scene of the show and not originally drawn out. I am, by NO means, accusing you of tracing this piece. I'm saying that this piece LOOKS like it could have been traced.

I never give more than three stars of originality to MLP fanart. Don't take it too personally, I just wouldn't have the same reaction to this piece if I already didn't know the characters first. No big deal.

There were a few minor things, technique-wise, in this piece that stood out to me, and that I think can be improved in your future work. First off, the shading is strange and inconsistent. Celestia is fully defined/cell shaded, but Sombra and NMM have little to no shading at all. It makes the characters appear slightly flatter than you want them to. Secondly, I can see you were trying to go for a more textural element in the manes, but you used an extremely hard brush. This makes the hair appear spiny and rough, rather than flowy. This is just nitpicking, I can see you did quite a bit of work on the hair. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> Also, the lineart is a tad shaky, try to make more line variation, and confident strokes.

And finally, I gave the highest amount of stars for impact, because the way you've integrated the text with the artwork is divine. I ADORE the wisps coming off of NMM and the different fonts you chose.

All in all, very nice job! I hope this helped, I look forward to seeing more of your work!

Happy Drawing!
~GoldenOwl

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Gunflame345 [2014-05-27 16:01:17 +0000 UTC]

What's this?! A MLP/Kany West Crossover!!!??? 

Brilla-

Kanye: Hold up...I'mma let you finish Gunflame...but I just wanted say this is one of the best pictures of ALL TIME!!

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Jose-Ramiro [2014-05-26 03:07:51 +0000 UTC]

Super cool.

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GUILLE832 [2014-05-25 14:25:45 +0000 UTC]

That actually makes much sense, and I like the way it is applied to MLP. Then Discord comes and mops the floor with the three of them   

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lyanawolf [2014-05-25 10:58:48 +0000 UTC]

o.o so awsome

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Cromegas-Flare [2014-05-25 08:19:44 +0000 UTC]

Whats a god to a nonbeliever?
...

A Nightmare. 

Well played, well played.

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BadDogAlliance [2014-05-25 05:31:48 +0000 UTC]

I love that song I also did one like this only I uses sonic 

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