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Well uh,,, I guess... uhm... II can explain this!
Really!
Uhm...
No actually I can't. I:
It's just a dress up game, uh, for your own character!
Cause I'm lazy and I didn't want to draw the hair from all the HS characters.
And I'm not sure if it will be working. If it isn't working for you just try to load the page again or something...
If you think I made something wrong or you think i should add something, please tell me and I will try to add it. :>
Have fun with it and please upload the characters you made with this and show me (:
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Feel free to judge/review! My fantroll is basically an OC for my Zodiac-Leo.
Name: Leona Léon (Pronounced: Lee-o-na Lay-on) (I couldn't think of a name that goes with the 6X6 naming rule.Maybe Leonia Léotin? That doesn't sound right to me though...Hm)
Blood Colour: Ivy
Age: 7/8 Alternian Sweeps (Around 17 human years)
Derse or Prospit?: Prospit
Strife Specubus: Fist/clawkind: She rarely gets into fights as she only lives with her lusus and a few others, but she hunts with her claws and sharp teeth.
Lusus: An overgrown, white lion. (About the size of a brown bear give or take a few inches)
God Tier: Rogue of Blood
Trollian: She doesn't have one currently, because of where she lives. (It'll be explained in the 'basic knowledge' part. However when/if she gets one, it would be 'AgileCyber' or something like that)
Typing/Writing quirk: 'r's are doubled and makes animal puns whenever she can, kind of like Meulin. (For example...
AC: Hey! I just thought of a purrrrfect idea! It would be cat-astrrophic if I didn't do it!
AC: Answer nmeow!!!
AC: Are you 'lion' to me? You know, you're becoming unbearable!). When actually speaking, she goes into a frenzy of purrs/meows/little 'raw's when she get's too excited.
QUADRANTS:
Matsprit/Flush crush: None
Kismesis: Maikri Aannia (Pronounced: May-kri An-nia) (Another OC of mine)
Morail: Maikea Taurum (Pronounced: May-kee-a T-ow-room (Last name is latin for 'bull')(Again, another OC of mine...)
Auspistice: None.
Sexuality: Demisexual (does not experience sexual attraction unless they form a strong emotional connection with someone; no prefered gender)
Horns: Her right one is like Meulin's, but larger and her left one is bent so it looks kind of like a dog's bent ear.
Personality: She has a kind and sort-of bouncy personality. She is curious about everything and gets easily distracted. At first, she seems like an innocent, childish troll, but when triggered, she turns into 'animalistic/attack' mode and only lets her instincts guide her; it's hard to get her out of that mode and she normally isolates herself from others until it passes, if not, then she will attack anything that comes too close or makes her feel threatened. She also has an "I'll do it, when I want to” attitude.
Likes: Play-fighting (and playing in general), running around and exploring. She often tries to chase Maikea around but gets scolded by her lusus as Maikea doesn't like to play like she does. When she explores, every time she finds a new area, she draws it in a little, tattered note-book she got from when she was very little. She also loves hunting; she loves to stalk and hide from her prey, she thinks of it as a little game that she wins almost every time. She is very childish and sometimes gets teased about it (it's playful teasing, so she doesn't mind). She loves her big brother - Luckus (Pronounced: Lu-k-us) Léon - because he's the only one that actually play-fights with her and he is always there to comfort her and listen to her if she gets in trouble or needs someone to talk to.
Dislikes: Small spaces, bright lights, loud/high pitched noises (it affects her ears), being put under pressure, when the subject of matspritship comes up (she hasn't had a single matsprit, which is considered unusual because of her current age.) in a conversation. She hates when she is ignored and gets very upset if she doesn't get a certain level of attention.
Basic knowledge (The basics on what you need to know about her, like her past and stuff): She was raised by her lusus in the mountains when her village was burned down and there was nowhere else to go. She was raised with a few others that her lusus saved from the burning village; a total of 5 others were saved and raised with her). They moved to the forests a few miles from their previous mountain home when she was about 4 sweeps old (about 10 or so human years) and so that's why she doesn't have any technology or act like normal trolls.
Weapon of choice: Claws/fists/sharp teeth etc...
Description of appearance: She has black, extremely long, mane of hair that goes to the floor, she always leaves it down though she does trip over it sometimes. She has medium-grey skin, but more on the lighter side, and bright , gold/yellow eyes. She wears her signature grey hoodie that her lusus brought her when she was young, it is now tattered with rips in various places (that have been poorly sown back together) and has small blood stains of various animals, although there is hardly any smell as she washes it whenever she can, although some blood stains won't come out. Seeing as she doesn't find many cloths or things she can use for clothes, she generally only wears the hoodie (the hoodie comes down to about mid-thigh and she wears whatever is available underneath it).
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Feel free to review!
Name: Midori Trixion
Species: Landdweller/troll
Blood: Olive
Gender: male
Age: 6.46 Alternian Solar Sweeps (around 14 human years)
D.Planet: Derse
Strife Specubus: Rockkind. He usually tries to avoid conflict in general, but when he has to fight he chucks stones from as far away as he can get. (had no other ideas, I know, 'm lame.)
God Tier: Prince of Mind
Lusus: A large groundhog. (about the size of a polar bear)
Trollian: necroCybernetics (cuz fuck the GCAT)
Typing quirk: "h"s are doubled, doesn't use compound words. (such as..
NC: hhey, I have been wondering were you have been lately..
NC: hhello?) and doesn't caps the first words of each sentence. When actually speaking, he fumbles over his words when he gets exited.
QUADRANTS?:
Matesprit/flushed: no one at the moment, though he has mixed thoughts on his Kismesis from time to time.
Kismesis: Citrin Archim. (another one of my ocs..)
Moirail: former moirail was Lerves Yamena (yet another oc) before he passed.
Auspistice: none.
Horns: small and slightly lighter in color than normal, they curl in on themselves once around. Sorta like an awkwardly made cinnamon roll, I guess. XD
Likes: Fighting with his custodian to pass the time, dark/confined spaces, nature and stalking beasts to see were they live so he can come back later. He has a map of the dens and nests he's found throughout the forest behind his hive. He also likes fires and often lights camp or bon fire's at night and uses the soot and ash to make designs on his lusus's fur. He wants to learn to "play with fire", and has attempted it a few times... He now has a few burn scars on his left hand and lower back. His favorite food is "rice crisps", as he calls them, and asks the humans if they have any at hand from time to time.
Dislikes: bright lights and loud, high pitched noises, being teased and/or messed with, the subject of matespritship and/or sexuality coming up in a conversation, being put under pressure and being made the center of
attention. He hates being ignored and talked over when he wants to say something.
Personality: somewhat closed off with feelings and such, but prefers to talk with others when he has a problem. He has a rather shortened temper and has a sort of "get to the chase and cut the bullshit" attitude. Unlike Kitkat, he doesn't mind not being in control. He hates when he or his team loses though, but he plays the good-loser card alot. He's not very persistent with long or taxing tasks and usually gives out halve way through. He has a weird way of ruining peoples or trolls way of thinking, and can usually get others on his side with the way he makes their points sound stupid and/or unrealistic along with emphasizing his to make them seem better than they actually are.
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Aguu~ This is great! .. I wish i had this type of patience and creativity, and this character sounds like someone i want to hug.
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Oh wow, thank you!~
Didn't expect that, so thank you! Yeah, I wanna hug him too X3
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You're welcome hun.
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a bit big, and i would have preferred some long hairstyle options. maybe make bangs and hair length (in the back) separate options?
really enjoyed though, and you did a blood good job.
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My fantroll is based off of myself. Feel free to judge!
Name: Sahara Dersat
Species: Landdweller
Blood Color: Dark shade of green, kind of like the Doom color scheme?
Gender: Female
Dream Planet: Derse
Strife Specibus: Fistkind; She's lousy at fist fighting but she thinks she'll get better, Knifekind; She has an expertise with knives!
Lusus: And overgrown snake
God Tier: Thief of Time (She likes procrastination if you can't tell)
Quirk: S=ss, stutters on occasions when she's excited.
Horns: The right horn is broken, the left is like Kanaya's but a bit straighter. It's pointed inwards.
Trolltag: blindArtist
Ancestor: the Messenger (Spends her time working with Summoner, works as a "Messenger" for most. She is culled by one of HIC's followers.)
Land: Land of Forestry and Lava (LOFAL)
Matesprit: None... she doesn't exactly fancy that quadrant. It's rare that she'll take it up.
Kismesis: Laturl Kunhan (Female)
Moirail: Isuful Mardeh (Male)
Auspistice: Nope
Personality: Bitter, she can't stand much. In a way she's more of a passive Karkat... in comparison. She's foul mouthed and keeps her trap shut unless she's spoken to or she simply HAS to say something. Wait...no. She's not that quiet. In fact, Sahara is very talkative. She's easily annoyed and lets someone know. Just to let you know, she's neither a leader, nor a follower. She's neutral! She has a high level of anxiety but she'd brush it off like a small scratch leaving her emotions bottled up. She's a bit melodramatic but she can't stand dramatic people at the same time? Oh those hypocrites!
Detailed (somewhat) description of Appearance: She has short grey hair, cut in a bob. She's not completely skinny and she has the stamina of molasses despite her weight of 143.5 lbs at 3.5 sweeps. She's always wearing a scarf the color of her blood and is usually wearing a black sweater. She's got these huge hipster glasses she actually needs over a heart shaped face.
Likes: Dark spaces, slithering creatures, reading whilst bundled up in blanket on a winter morning, hot chocolate she's received from human friends, fan-fiction, romcom novellas, cussing, and human traditions like comic-con. (She has human friends... absurd! The blasphemy!)
Dislikes: Cold feet, her hair or ears being touched, the fact that she purrs, loud noises unless it's yelling, secrets she cant be told, and stupid people. (People so stupid she NEEDS to scream!)
Sexuality: Polysexual (All genders)
Fetch Modus: Stack (Amazing...)
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If only making cherubs was an option
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I'll review for you.
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name: Colakan Melana
[I'm sorry, but that name is 7x6 which does not fit the troll naming rule. Try to fit the 6x6 troll letter naming rule.]
species: landdweller (troll)
[Okay.]
gender: female
[Overused, but okay.]
age: 6 sweeps (13 years old)
[Overused but okay.]
dream self: Derse
[Okay.]
weapon: a huge green and blue hatchet
[Okay.]
lusus: a huge two headed bird with 3 eyes on each head
[Rather marysueish, but okay.]
title: rouge of life
[Alright.]
blood color: dark blue
[What shade? Use: orig09.deviantart.net/37f4/f/2… for reference.]
quirk: b=6 t=7 c=3
[So, let's say(Hi there. My name is Colakan and my blood is blue.): Hi 7here. My name is 3olakan and my 6lood is 6lue. Does it seem like it fits?]
horns= one horn is straight up and the other is bumpy
[Do you mean like Kanaya's left horn and Gamzee's horns?]
trolltag: tweetybrave (TB)
[Try to either: fits with the canon GCAT rule, or make a fanonverse rule with goes with all of your trollian tags.]
ancestor: the hunter (her ancestor was forced
hunted down the lowbloods and bring them to the GHB to be killed and was forced to watch them die. one day she tried to help a lowblood escape and was caught and killed)
[Any fancestor would not have know canon ancestors, other than having heard of them, and The Condesce of course. Furthermore, ancestor titles are eight letters long with 'The' in front of them, such as The Summoner. A better title for this ancestor would be 'The Huntress'.]
land: LAND OF RAIN AND FIRE
[LORAF.]
Matesprite: salonex nexsol
[It is 'Matesprit' and her Matesprit's name should be 6x6, not 7x6.]
morial: arona malons
[It is 'Moirail(Mo-rail)' and her Moirail's name should be 6x6, not 5x6.]
auspistic??
[It is 'Auspistice' and they are the facilitator between Kismesis when the Kisemesistude gets dangerous for those in it and those around the two within it.]
kismesis;???
[Kismesistude is Hate-love. You hate them, but you find them very attractive.]
Evil self: non
[Trolls with an evil self would have to either be bipolar(Like Sollux), high most of the time(Like Gamzee) or have multiple personalities(Like Eridan slightly does)]
personality: shy, excitable, nice, silly, sweet
[This really doesn't describe a troll, as trolls are very mean, and cruel. It is only by chance that Feferi, Nepeta, Kanaya and Tavros are very kind and sweet.]
likes: pop, birds, the snow, the sun, magic.
[To trolls, 'pop' is Faygo. Birds are known as chirpbeasts on Alternia and Beforus. The Alternian sun burns all trolls except for jade bloods, seeing as when they die, they can come back as a 'rainbow-drinker'(A vampire) and because they take care of the mother grubs, so they have to run errands during the middle of the day.]
dislikes: gore, darkness, non-fiction, death.
[Essentially, that is what most trolls like. Trolls are awake at night, and they are very violent, tending to lash out at each other for no apparent reason.]
You definitely need to work on her, and definitely check out the Wiki page if you're confused about something.
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If it's ok with you....would you mind reviewing mine? If you want to, though. I think she needs work, and you seem to know a lot more than me about what a troll should be like. (Yes, she's a female....overused, I know. I'm working on a male character. Also I can't think of an ancestor for her...Maybe The Huntress? Might already be used...Oh I don't know. I'll figure it out.) If you have time, it's alright if you don't want to.
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It's alright. I'd be happy to help. For her Ancestor, just remember that titles are normally 8 letters long, with The Condescension and The Grand Highblood being the only exceptions. Send me a message or something with her information and I'll help you out.
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Thank you so much! I'll get thinking for her Ancestor. I'll send you the information soon.
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Alright. Can't wait to see what you have so far!
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Feel free to review! :33
I don't bite!
Sometimes...
Basic Information:
Name: Brit Jonese
Species: Human (Becomes a catgirl a few times in RP because I have Neko issues)
Gender: Female
Age: 13 1/2
Derse or Prospit?: Derse
Fetch Modus: Doll Modus (The cards become dolls with phrases on them. You say the phrase to retrieve an object)
Strife Specibus: Nailkind
Weapon: Two big nails welded together from the ends, leaving the sharp sides out and able to injure.
Game Entry Item: (John's apple, Dave's egg, etc) A Cruxite Hairbow
Sprite: (Prototypes, pre- or post-entry, and final form) 1st) A Barbie doll she got when she was 5. 2nd) A sphinx cat she got (deceased)
Exile: Cautionary Scavanger
Server Player: Jule (Another OC)
Client Player: Brio
Title: Seer of Time
Active or Passive?: Passive
Medium: Land of Dolls and Strike
Denizen: Tigri (Tiger in Greek) She's orange with black stripes and sharp canines
Human-Specific Information: (Troll characters delete this section!)
Eye Color: Honey Brown
Hair Color: EXTREMELY dark brown
Skin: Latina (? I dunno, I'm bad with skin colors and skin tones and crap)
Symbol: (Describe its appearance and how you thought of it) A doll with golden hair and a lighter shade for her skin
Guardian: Her parents and older brother, though her dad and older brother are never home
Ectosibling(s): Jazz Crella
Pets: Sphynx cat names Sadie (Deceased)
Other family: (Eg, Jade's grandfather.) I listed all that are important already 
Home: (Appearance and general location) 3 story house in the rich part of town her parents use to show off.
Chumhandle: fangirlingAristocrat (Homestuck AU, No GCAT rule)
Typing style: Perfect grammar, no punctuation.
Sexuality: Bisexual
Relationship status: Single
General Appearance: (All characters must fill out from here down!)
Height: Short. That's all I'm gonna say...
Hair: Medium length and pulled over her right shoulder
Disabilities/Health Concerns: Synesthesia
Favorites and Least Favorites:
Color: Red (Favorite) Blue (Least Favorite)
Music: Techno (Best) Country (Worst)
Movie: Romance (Best) Horror (Worst)
Book: SHE CAN'T DECIDE
Food: Apples (Best) Oranges (Worst)
Clothing: nekogamergirl.deviantart.com/a… (Favorite) wedding-pictures.onewed.com/ma… (least favorite)
Prized possession(s): Her dolls
Alchemized item(s): iDoll (iPhone + Doll) Figddle (Figet Friend + Squiddle AND LET ME SAY, IT WAS HORRIFYING) Pinkie Pillow (Pinkie Pie Plush + Pillow) iGlasses (I think you know... and the glasses are fake)
Personality:
Biggest goal: Learning more than she could ever dream of
Greatest fear: Losing those she loves
Darkest secret: How her life really is
Does anyone know?: No, her parents died on the day she found them and planned on telling her friends.
If yes, how did they find out?: They didn't
Greatest strength: She's very manipulative
Greatest weakness: Someone bringing up her relationship with her family
Greatest accomplishment: Making it as far as she has
Biggest regret: Not telling her family she loved them before entering the medium (They died)
Are they more aggressive, assertive, or passive?: Passive
Are they emotional or stoic?: Stoic
Which do they trust more, their head or their heart?: Both. She trusts her head in emotional matters and her heart in important decisions.
Are they an introvert or extrovert?: Introvert
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Since it's an AU, no GCat rule because i don't completely understand it
Found out what it was, and I ain't doing that because it took long enough to get fitting chumhandles BEFORE I understood
Not being lazy, I just have irons in the fire things to do
Gomen
Anyways, feel free to review!
Basic Information:
Name: Ceresa Piazzi (Ceresa is based off of Ceres and The discoverer of Ceres was named Giuseppe Piazzi)
Species: Landdweller Troll
Gender: Female
Age: 7 Solar Sweeps (15.17 Years)
Derse or Prospit?: Prospit
Fetch Modus: Orbit modus (The biggest item is the base. It keeps all of the other cards orbiting around it moving. If you take it out, everything falls)
Strife Specibus: Icepickkind
Weapon: Silver ice pick with a painted blue handle.
Game Entry Item: (John's apple, Dave's egg, etc) A snowflake
Sprite: (Prototypes, pre- or post-entry, and final form) Her lusus, A doll her lusus gave to her
Exile: (Their name and function pre- and post-exile)
Server Player: Satura Ringsi
Client Player: Plutos Cronia
Title: Seer of Hope
Active or Passive?: Passive
Medium: Land of Literature and Sugar
Denizen: Abraxas
Clothes: Black tank with her sign on it in sapphire blue. She has blue shorts and occasionally wears an over the shoulder crop top she randomly picks out of her closet when she feels to warm... that's why she likes the cold. (As you can see, she doesn't just not care about fashion, she despises it)
Troll-Specific Information: (Human characters delete this section!)
Blood color: Sapphire Blue ( Look here: th01.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2013/169/e/e/hs__fir3h34rt_s_... )
Symbol: (Describe its appearance and how you thought of it) Didn't think of it. This is the symbol: symbols.com/gi.php?type=1&id=291&i=1 )
Lusus: White polar bear with a blue nose and blue paws.
Ancestor: The Assassin (Was The Grand Highblood's assassin who didn't like working for him but wanted to stay alive. She was kind to lowbloods and regretted having to kill some of them off. One of GBH's assistants saw her talking to one and ratted her out. She was then sentenced to execution.)
Hive: (Appearance and general location) It's a makeshift house in the middle of the woods made from tree bark and is completely coated with different shades of blue paint.
Horns: Her right horn curls inward like a question mark/hook and the left sticks straight up and bends at the tip
Trolltag: icyCablestitch
Quirk: O/o= *, Words like ICE or FROST are in all caps, I/i
TW: #OCS #UNKNOWN
Matesprit: None
Kismesis: Plutos Cronia
Moirail: Satura Ringsi
Auspistice: None
General Appearance: (All characters must fill out from here down!)
Do they need to wear glasses or contacts?: Yes
If yes, are they nearsighted or farsighted?: Nearsighted
They should wear their glasses, but do they always?: Almost never.
Weight: 116 Pounds.
Height: Strangely short compared to the other trolls.
Hair: She has it in an uneven bob (One side does to her ear, the other reaches her neck)
Disabilities/Health Concerns: None unless her short height and high blood counts then yes, she has one.
Favorites and Least Favorites:
Color: Royal Blue (Favorite) Peach (Least favorite)
Music: Pop (Favorite) Rock (Least favorite)
Movie: Fantasy (Favorite) Romance (Least Favorite)
Book: Non-Fiction (Favorite) Sci-Fi (Least Favorite)
Food: She'll eat anything, really
Clothing: Her black t shirt and jeans (favorite) fancy dresses (Least favorite)
Prized possession(s): A polar bear statue she has in her room
Alchemized item(s): HuskPick (Husktop + Ice Pick)
Other likes/dislikes: Being played with mockingly (So pretty much those that b u l l y h e r) Being thought of as unimportant.
Personality:
Are they more aggressive, assertive, or passive?: Passive on the outside, Aggressive on the inside
Are they emotional or stoic?: Stoic
Which do they trust more, their head or their heart?: Head
Are they an introvert or extrovert?: Introvert
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{Feel free to criticize}
Name: Novesa (No-veh-suh) Cunara (Cuh-nar-uh)
Age: Around 13 human years/ 6 solar sweeps
Gender: Female
Blood: Olive Green
Species: UNICORN!(Nah, shes a troll)
Strife Specibus: Staffkind
Modus: (Idek. Help)
Lusus: Buck Wolf (Wolf with buck horns)
Personality: Laid back with friends, bit shy around new people(Ooh bet I hit the marysueish thing here)
Likes: Reading, nature, being with her friends
Dislikes: Large crowds of unknown trolls
Matesprite: None
Moirail: None
Auspitice: None
Kismesis: None
Prospit or Derse: Derse
Symbol: (Work in progress OC, I need to work on this)
God Tier: Thief of Life(Idk if this is a genderrole tier or not yet)
Troll Handle: immortalForest (Need help with this, don't understand how handles work)
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I'll review her for you.
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Name: Novesa (No-veh-suh) Cunara (Cuh-nar-uh)
[Is there any meaning behind it? If not, that's alright.]
Age: Around 13 human years/ 6 solar sweeps
[Okay.]
Gender: Female
[Most people do female OCs, but it's okay.]
Blood: Olive Green
[Nice.]
Species: UNICORN!(Nah, shes a troll)
[Heh, nice joke.]
Strife Specibus: Staffkind
[Okay.]
Modus: (Idek. Help)
[Think of John's first Fetch Modus. It was stack, so he had to use the item on the top in order to get to the one underneath. How do you want her to be able to retrieve an item from her inventory?]
Lusus: Buck Wolf (Wolf with buck horns)
[Nice. Very original.]
Personality: Laid back with friends, bit shy around new people(Ooh bet I hit the marysueish thing here)
[Not really. That's actually pretty generic, but still pretty good. Being shy around new people/trolls is okay, especially since she's a mid-blood, so it's to be expected. 
Likes: Reading, nature, being with her friends
[Alright. Natural for an olive blood.]
Dislikes: Large crowds of unknown trolls
[Nice. Due to her being a mid-blood, if a purple blood or violet blood got their hands on her, she'd instantly be culled. Good.]
Matesprite: None
[Matesprit. Other than that,okay.]
Moirail: None
[A'ight.]
Auspitice: None
[A'ight.]
Kismesis: None
[A'ight.]
Prospit or Derse: Derse
[Okay.]
Symbol: (Work in progress OC, I need to work on this)
[Some good ones would be plantery symbols, arrows or spirals.]
God Tier: Thief of Life(Idk if this is a genderrole tier or not yet)
[Thief of Life is already taken by Meenah, but she could be Knight of Life or Seer of Life. instead.]
Troll Handle: immortalForest (Need help with this, don't understand how handles work)
[Trollian Handles have to fit with the GCAT rule, meaning GG, CC, AA, TT, GC, CG, GA, AG, GT, TG, TC, CT, CA or AC. Or, if you're making a fantroll with their own universe(Not canon), you can make up your own letter rule or simply go without a rule.]
Pretty good. Definitely needs some work, but pretty good so far. Message me if you want some help with her.
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Thank you ^^ And no, there is no menajng behind the name, I just liked it.
For modus... Maybe like, ugh idk what Ita called but its where there are a few cups and something is underneath one and you have to find which one it is..
I'll take a look at the seers and knight roles and see which might fit her a bit better.
For the handle...
I'll have to think for something for that.
A little bit of help with the symbol and handle would be appreciated.
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Hmm, for her fetch modus, you could call it Trick Or Treat, then if you mess up, you'll get a different item. Let's say she's trying to grab a book, and her other two items are a necklace and a knife, so she accidentally chooses the one with the knife, and it gets thrown at her? For the godtiers, a good page to look at would be dahniwitchoflight.tumblr.com/post/75520350475 . You can use a generator(Such as this one: rumandmonkey.com/widgets/toys/… ) for her trollian handle. As for her symbol, you could use the bowl of Hygeia( upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia… ) as it. Hygeia was the Greek goddess of healing, so I figured being a calm goddess would fit with Novesa because she seems rather calm.
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No problem! Message me or reply to this any time you need help with an OC. ^_^
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This it really nice but I do have a few critiques. I really like how it's set up and I like your style. I personally think the ears\fibs should change color with the skin tone (so they match), and maybe add a grub marks option for those who don't want belly buttons on their troll? IDK, good job. 9\10
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Name: Sage Mendizi
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Pesterchum Handle: brilliantlyStreaked
Hair: Long black hair with a white streak. Her hair is parted pretty far to the left side.
Clothes: A black long sleeved shirt with dark grey pants. Her shoes are black. Has a nose ring (not septum).
Symbol: A blue book with one of those little book mark thingies that are attached to the top hanging down.
Personality: Tends to come off a bit creepy, and is in to classical music. She is very sweet, and when she wants to get to know you she will stare you down. She loves being inside and doesn't really like human interaction because when she was younger she met really rude people who bullied her. She ran away from her mom and went to her friend Mint's house ( Mint lives with her sister) when she was 10.
God Tier: Seer of Doom
Land: Land of Cloaks and Fast Wind
Dreamer: Derse
Other info: She is deeply in love with her friend Mint, but Mint has yet to notice.
Could you guys review her? She is sorta a work in progress and I really want to write a story with her and 7 other friends play Sburb (they have no connections with John or his team AT ALL).
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I'll review for you.
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Name: Sage Mendizi
[Good. It fits with the 4x6/4x7 name rule for humans.]
Age: 14
[Good. Being 14 would help keep her from somehow interfering with John and the others' session.]
Gender: Female
[Alright, but try to make a guy sometime.]
Pesterchum Handle: brilliantlyStreaked
[Is there a handle rule for their session? Like, canon Homestuck's rule is GCAT where it has to be like GC or At, you get it.]
Hair: Long black hair with a white streak. Her hair is parted pretty far to the left side.
[Okay. Fitting I suppose.]
Clothes: A black long sleeved shirt with dark grey pants. Her shoes are black. Has a nose ring (not septum).
[Okay. Seems good.]
Symbol: A blue book with one of those little book mark thingies that are attached to the top hanging down.
[Alright.]
Personality: Tends to come off a bit creepy, and is in to classical music. She is very sweet, and when she wants to get to know you she will stare you down. She loves being inside and doesn't really like human interaction because when she was younger she met really rude people who bullied her. She ran away from her mom and went to her friend Mint's house ( Mint lives with her sister) when she was 10.
[Well, you could separate that into personality and backstory. So far so good.]
God Tier: Seer of Doom
[I see no problem with it.]
Land: Land of Cloaks and Fast Wind
[So LOCAFW? Seems okay.]
Dreamer: Derse
[Nice. But what type of derse dreamer? Asymmetrical or what?]
Other info: She is deeply in love with her friend Mint, but Mint has yet to notice.
[Ooh, nice. Some unrequited love, eh?]
Really good so far, it just needs a bit of editing and you need to decide on naming rules and pesterchum/trollian handle rules. Other than that, I'd say about a 8/10 overall.
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Thank you! I was really sure I'd gone into Mary Sue territory ;3
Also, I've seen the pesterchumhandle format before, but I don't really understand it. Is there anyway you could explain it to me?
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Of course! The GCAT rule, as stated on the pretty reliable wiki, "GCAT is a common presentation of the pairings of bases in the double helix structure of DNA."
Pretty much, for the canon universe, the rule for the chumhandles/trollian handles, they have to use a letter in the combinations, GG, CC, AA, TT, GC, GA, GT, CA, CT, AG, TG, CG, AC, TC, TA. However, John has the handle ectoBiologist, in order to avoid the trolls, but his previous handle was ghostyTrickster. In fanon universes though, you can either stick with the rule, or make your own, or go completely without a rule.
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Thank you! And I don't think I made a rule for my faniverse, but I might when I've decided everyones handles.
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No problem! For mine, I'm kinda just going with whatever pops into my head, since the universe my sister and I are working on is currently without a handle rule.
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Cool! I don't have a person to decide what the handle rule is so... Yeah ;3
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It's okay. Maybe my sister and I could incorporate your OC into our fanonverse. ^_^
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That would be cool!
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name: yuki nohiko
age: 6 sweeps ( i think in human years that's 13)
gender: female
race: sea dweller
trollian handle: lordlunatic
blood color: black
lusus: 3 headed shark
strife: cross bow
matesprite: ?
morail: ?
auspistice: ?
kismesis: ?
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Mind my reviewing her?
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name: yuki nohiko
[That's 4x6. Troll names are 6x6.]
age: 6 sweeps ( i think in human years that's 13)
[Yes. 1 sweep is 2.16 human years.]
gender: female
[Okay.]
race: sea dweller
[Alright.]
trollian handle: lordlunatic
[This does not fit with the GCAT rule.]
blood color: black
[Please, refrain from using black/white/grey as a trolls' blood colour. It would be the ultimate mutant and they would be culled in the wriggling caverns. Also, they would be a land-dweller if their blood was black.]
lusus: 3 headed shark
[Rather mary-sueish and unoriginal.]
strife: cross bow
[Okay.]
matesprite: ?
[It's Matesprit, and does this mean she doesn't have one or you don't understand?]
morail: ?
[It's Moirail, and does this mean she doesn't have one or you don't understand?]
auspistice: ?
[Does this mean she doesn't have one or you don't understand?]
kismesis: ?
[Does this mean she doesn't have one or you don't understand?]
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Thx I'll fix those problems and the reason there is question marks is she hung out with some pretty shady people in the past and they recently died but her not MORAIL yet (also her flush crush) is teaching her to behave properly. Oh question what does gcat stand for this is probably a stupid question.
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The GCAT rule, as stated on the pretty reliable wiki, "GCAT is a common presentation of the pairings of bases in the double helix structure of DNA."
Pretty much, for the canon universe, the rule for the chumhandles/trollian handles, they have to use a letter in the combinations, GG, CC, AA, TT, GC, GA, GT, CA, CT, AG, TG, CG, AC, TC, TA. However, John has the handle ectoBiologist, in order to avoid the trolls, but his previous handle was ghostyTrickster. In fanon universes though, you can either stick with the rule, or make your own, or go completely without a rule.
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Name: Kazbat Rellox
Age: 7.5 sweeps (I think that's 16?)
Gender: Female
Race: Seadweller Troll
Trollian Handle: DreamlandGenius
Blood Color: Indigo
Lusus: water snake
Strife: Spearkind
Matesprit: ?
Moirail: Pamola Terrin (Belongs to TwilightWolfCourage )
Auspistice: ?
Kismesis: ?
Please Review :3
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I'll review her for you.
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Name: Kazbat Rellox
[Good. 6x6. Does it have a meaning?]
Age: 7.5 sweeps (I think that's 16?)
[Yes. It's 16.2 because 1 sweep is 2.16 human years.]
Gender: Female
[Okay.]
Race: Seadweller Troll
[She would be a landdweller with Indigo blood, but if her blood was violet or fuchsia, she'd be a seadweller.]
Trollian Handle: DreamlandGenius
[If you're going with your own naming rule, okay, but if you're going with the canon one, it's GCAT which are the letters you can use in combinations.]
Blood Color: Indigo
[She'd be a landdweller with Equius' blood colour.]
Lusus: water snake
[Okay.]
Strife: Spearkind
[Okay.]
Matesprit: ?
[Okay.]
Moirail: Pamola Terrin
[Okay.]
Auspistice: ?
[Okay.]
Kismesis: ?
[Okay.]
Pretty good. The only real problem is her blood. 9.5/10
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