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Razor was originally going to do a lot more during this fight (and in the fight with Maul), but I changed the script to focus more on Scarfire and Lightning.Sorry Razor, you'll get your chance to show off in another chapter.
In case you're wondering what those changes were, here's a list so you can be disappointed- I mean uh... Satisfied? :
- Razor was going to tackle Maul out of the window after Maul knocked the gun out of his hand, screaming "WHERE’S YOUR BIOLOGY NOW B----???"
- Razor was going to pull out a missile launcher on Boulder, miss, hit a wall and nearly cause the building to collapse on them (originally, they were not going to fight on the roof), then shoot again, hit Boulder's arm and cause it to start bleeding.
- Razor was going to throw a small bomb at Boulder, but it wasn't going to be very effective.
About the page:
-Woo! Lightning has arrived! Finally.
EDIT: I should mention that Lightning can use his portal abilities to teleport himself to locations quicker- though it's risky to do this since he's not very good at it and could become trapped in the void or another dimension instead.
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