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This is going to be the drawing that I show when I FINALLY rewrite this story and post it on my website.
I'll work on the other stories too, I promise. (Maybe..)
Here is a bit of what I've rewritten:
"Hey! Hey! Muroku! You wanna play tag?" I ask my biggest brother. Muroku opens his eyes and yawns, "We played that at least five times already." He says as he shuts his eyes again. "But that was yesterday!" I complain. "Go play with someone else runt. I'm tired." Muroku says and I sigh in disapointment. I walk over to my other brother Niko who is smaller than Muroku but still bigger than me... Niko is also sleeping, how boring! Why are my brothers so lazy? "Niko! Niko! Do you wanna play hide-n-seek? Or Chase? Or anything?" I ask and Niko replies with a very loud snore. I sigh again, there's nothing to do here!

That was from Razor's point of view. When he was a puppy he wasn't evil or anything but you'll find out how he went from annoying little puppy to giant scary murderer soon enough.
Like all of the stories in the "Wolves of Secret" series, each chapter will have a different wolf's point of view. The first couple of chapters will be Razor and Drake though.
Also I do know that after dialogue you start a new paragraph but I'm too lazy to do that.

Description
This is going to be the drawing that I show when I FINALLY rewrite this story and post it on my website.
I'll work on the other stories too, I promise. (Maybe..)
Here is a bit of what I've rewritten:
"Hey! Hey! Muroku! You wanna play tag?" I ask my biggest brother. Muroku opens his eyes and yawns, "We played that at least five times already." He says as he shuts his eyes again. "But that was yesterday!" I complain. "Go play with someone else runt. I'm tired." Muroku says and I sigh in disapointment. I walk over to my other brother Niko who is smaller than Muroku but still bigger than me... Niko is also sleeping, how boring! Why are my brothers so lazy? "Niko! Niko! Do you wanna play hide-n-seek? Or Chase? Or anything?" I ask and Niko replies with a very loud snore. I sigh again, there's nothing to do here!

That was from Razor's point of view. When he was a puppy he wasn't evil or anything but you'll find out how he went from annoying little puppy to giant scary murderer soon enough.
Like all of the stories in the "Wolves of Secret" series, each chapter will have a different wolf's point of view. The first couple of chapters will be Razor and Drake though.
Also I do know that after dialogue you start a new paragraph but I'm too lazy to do that.