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Published: 2002-11-07 04:26:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 209; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 25
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Description And then fireworks shot into the heavens,
and wine flowed down into the seas and lakes.
The birds and other animals came to attention  
then scattered into their small holes and crevices
in the earth. The large white moon glistened with
the red and blue particles from the undeniably
breathtaking light show. The clear blue water  
rippled across the seas and lakes as the light
winds blew across the water with grace and  
brilliance. The huge ever-greens shifted and  
swayed with ever-growing delight as the seemingly
straining winds glided through the trees and  
branches with the simplest of ease. A seemingly  
endless sky, clear as can be, black as the darkest
of nights if it wasn't for the almost painted on  
starry white dots that were surrounding the delicate
light bearing dilated moon. The small ripples
glanced against the broad sides of the tiny boulders
that lined the sea. A very small, yet mystical  
island seemed to push its way out of the water  
to reveal a dense population of tree and animal
life that could grasp and steal the breath out of  
your chest. As you would revel in the beauty of  
such a place that shouldn't only exist in the very
imagination that has created so many other worlds
in so many other times that it seems to yearn, no  
to scream at the top of it's being to be placed
into true existence.  
-Adam
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Comments: 5

iamjulez [2003-03-20 18:54:16 +0000 UTC]

"it seems to yearn, no
to scream at the top of it's being to be placed
into true existence."

very beautiful ending, to a very completely moving piece.

i like that part the best, just because i feel it more. to each his own... but i know what that feels like to yearn, and to scream to feel like i exist. that's probably why i like this piece so much, i can relate....

--julez

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fusionx [2003-01-04 05:29:14 +0000 UTC]

nice expressive words, great mental imagery, another beautiful piece

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strawberrygirl [2002-12-20 16:54:19 +0000 UTC]

powerful images. Well done. Keep writing...I'll be watching *smiles*



hm....Maybe I should post some of mine....I don't think they're as good as this one, but it would be interesting to see what kind of comments they got....

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eternium [2002-11-09 03:34:49 +0000 UTC]

; clap: one thing is for sure.. you are good in writing poems! cool

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asht535 [2002-11-08 06:05:34 +0000 UTC]

very great writing, i love the words you used i could feel the inspiration here great worK!

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