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Published: 2003-02-19 03:20:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 139; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description sort through each sad soft memory,
here and there.. pause to inhale
charismatically pulled by voices from the past
the pain, the need to understand
reconcile each filtered journey
trifling paths of recompense due
give to life a light, sunburnt need
the marrow of which drive to desire
understand the fruitless drone of the hive
all this create
honey, the goal
the product of a thousand soft sad memories
alone a drop of glistening gold
the excrement of drones
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Comments: 7

groovus [2003-02-26 21:46:10 +0000 UTC]

I'm beginning to catch on to your style I think. filt'ring through the trifling. This has fun, sadness and in a twisted way glory. I love this. And I'm sure there are more little gems embedded herein.

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wicked-eve [2003-02-24 19:04:51 +0000 UTC]

Give me another word for beautiful...
i dont want to repeat myself...
hmmm....
RAVISHING!
This is just ravishing honey...
i adore the emotion you've poured into this...
tremendous honesty mixed with emotion...
fab writing lil deer!!!

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fourleafclover [2003-02-20 16:53:52 +0000 UTC]

i like it...its beautiful...but im gonna have to come back and read it later when my headache goes away...its making me not be able to think at all...

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klentex [2003-02-19 20:32:22 +0000 UTC]

this is wonderful. i think this is the clearest ive heard your words so far from your writes. you seemed to know exactly what you wanted to prove, and covered it over in this similiarity of mindlessness(not a bad thing i mean). these soft sad memories, are the reasons i have burned every picture, letter, etc in my house. those that i do have left are in a box in storage

forgetting can be bliss, but to remember is to know you have suffered and lived; or at least survived...

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codebluessm [2003-02-19 14:15:10 +0000 UTC]

Wow. I must say very nice job, littledeer. Very nice. I love your words, I wish I could come up with sentences like those. +fav

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ladynyk [2003-02-19 05:54:27 +0000 UTC]

Pure beauty. I love your words.

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lilitheternity [2003-02-19 03:42:14 +0000 UTC]

give to life a light, sunburnt need
the marrow of which drive to desire

I love this part, all of it is so beautiful. And very emotional. And every memory makes us who we are today...this poem is wonderful and i hope all the best for you.

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