heretolearnboy [2019-01-23 19:04:56 +0000 UTC]

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i am going to do from left to right.
character1:
The first thing i saw was the left arm, i think you wanted it to put it on her back because that is really the only way it can go since on the front you can't really see it (weird position but if it's intented that way so be it).
The clothes look really tight and uncomfortable, some folds would really help.
character2:
too much stuff, a keyhole headless robot mummy it's just looks and sound messy.
More symmetry and a study on how to draw mechanical arms would help.
character3:
Cute, simple (that does not mean bad) but too generic, the pyramid character it's incredibly over used(i love the weird effect around it though it really gives the paranormal sensation).
It will be greatly appreciated something to make it stand out more, because right now it just looks like a human version of Y.V. (Yung Venuz) from nuclear throne.
General hint:
I would tell you to study how to draw hand particularly fingers better, since pretty much all of them or don't have any or are hidden.
The background is probably the biggest let down, it's just, there, something more detailed would look really nice, even the gray smudges are ok, but with more detail.
The shadows on the "ground" really makes no sense, it's obvious that you did not gave it any attention (their just circles), and usually nobody gives it any attention, but when you see the amount of attention put in shading on the characters (really nice) one would probaly want too see same quality to the shadows (mind that this two are tiny problems that you should not worry too much about)
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Also my english it's kibda rusty so excuse me (and correct me)
for some grammar errors

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