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schneelocke In reply to ??? [2013-09-26 10:28:41 +0000 UTC]

Awww, isn't she a sweetie. That bow is really pretty, and I love how you drew her wings.

I don't recall, do you mind critiques? There's a few (admittedly rather minor) things I think could still be improved in this picture. But despite those, it's quite lovely. And yay for striped socks!

I hope you'll feel better soon, too.

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Longinius-II In reply to schneelocke [2013-09-26 19:25:08 +0000 UTC]

I had to sneak a bow in there! I really liek how the wings came out too! Thanl you.

Oh if you have a critique feel free to point it out. I'm still learning after all. There's always something to learn!

I hope so too. :/

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schneelocke In reply to Longinius-II [2013-09-26 22:17:20 +0000 UTC]

OK - just making sure because some folks don't feel comfortable with it (which I totally respect).

As I said, the picture really is quite lovely, and there's just two small issues that caught my eye that I think could still be improved. First, there's her face; I can't quite lay my finger on it, but I think her eye may be placed a little too low, or perhaps a little too far to the right (using the canvas as a reference).

I'm also not sure about the way her tail connects to her body. Granted, I don't really know a lot about horse anatomy, but again, something looks a little off about it.

But as I said, those are minor points, and I really don't mean to give them undue weight, so please don't think I'm disliking the picture or anything. The opposite is the case!

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Longinius-II In reply to schneelocke [2013-09-27 16:51:05 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I understand, and I'm glad to hear you to take that into consideration. I will pretty much say outright in a description if I don't want critique.

Mmm, I dunno, It might be an awkward angle in general that would make it look weird? I guess, I dunno man.

Yeah the tail is a little awkward, but that's mostly due to m e drawing her body in a really weird angle. XD the connection point is way too high, it should be much lower in reality.

Ahahah, don't worry, I can tell you still like it. But I appreciate the little critique too!

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schneelocke In reply to Longinius-II [2013-09-27 21:14:03 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

I wish I knew more about drawing myself, though; then I could give more useful critiques and articulate my thoughts better.

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Longinius-II In reply to schneelocke [2013-09-29 14:11:22 +0000 UTC]

Mmm, It's fine the expression of the thought is still useful for me.

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punkrocksavedmylife In reply to ??? [2013-09-26 08:43:51 +0000 UTC]

An' a mighty purty butt it is, too!

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Longinius-II In reply to punkrocksavedmylife [2013-09-26 19:43:39 +0000 UTC]

The purtiest!

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punkrocksavedmylife In reply to Longinius-II [2013-09-26 23:08:41 +0000 UTC]

Don't be getting no ideas, lover boy!

Whether she actually feels that way at first, she's bound to come around and accept their love in due time (not that a portion of us actually do, mind you).  I like to think they could work, though, and not because everyone says it's "clichéd".

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Longinius-II In reply to punkrocksavedmylife [2013-09-27 16:45:29 +0000 UTC]

I think those are really cute as a ship. I think it's my favorite of the straight ships.

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punkrocksavedmylife In reply to Longinius-II [2013-09-27 19:52:01 +0000 UTC]

It's easily one of mine too.

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Longinius-II In reply to Shizui [2013-09-26 19:26:35 +0000 UTC]

Yay for fluffy bows!

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MisterKaos In reply to ??? [2013-09-26 06:08:29 +0000 UTC]

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Longinius-II In reply to MisterKaos [2013-09-26 19:27:03 +0000 UTC]

lol

I think RD has to go through a lot of tissues around my page.

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MisterKaos In reply to Longinius-II [2013-09-26 22:03:36 +0000 UTC]

And poor AJ keeps having to duck!

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Kyoshyu In reply to Longinius-II [2013-09-26 21:15:12 +0000 UTC]

At least she doesn't burn cardiologists!

She might be a drain a the local blood bank, though...

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Kyoshyu In reply to Kyoshyu [2013-09-26 21:15:54 +0000 UTC]

(drain on the)

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lrft4san In reply to ??? [2013-09-26 04:57:20 +0000 UTC]

Ok, I'll admit it, Fluttershy's rump is better than Pinkie Pie's. I know it's been a few months since we had that conversation, but I'm glad we're now able to compare the too. I can just imagine my fingers sinking into those butterflies on her flanks.

Pony butt aside, this is a really cute picture. I mean very cute. Cute pose, smile, cute pony. Fluttershy is just an adorable pony, whose cuteness is increased to impossible levels when she's wearing striped socks and hugging a pillow. Awesome picture, and I hope you get well soon.

This is nurse Red Heart, wishing you a quick recovery.

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Longinius-II In reply to lrft4san [2013-09-26 19:29:18 +0000 UTC]

Eheheh, I'm glad that you have seen reason. Hers would be the softest thing... <3

Ehehe, thanks happy that you like it. Fluttershy is the element of cute after all, so I think I overdid it with this one. XD Including literally every pony-cute symbol.

Oh nurse Red Heart, I will do my best.

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lrft4san In reply to Longinius-II [2013-09-26 20:33:14 +0000 UTC]

Yes, Fluttershy's would be impossibly soft

I don't think it's possible to over doing Fluttershy's cuteness, at least not the way you drew her.

just remember to take care of yourself, and don't over do it

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Offline65 In reply to ??? [2013-09-26 04:49:34 +0000 UTC]

She looks gorgeous
Hope you get well soon

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Longinius-II In reply to Offline65 [2013-09-26 19:32:37 +0000 UTC]

Glad you think so.

Thanks, I'll try.

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Fundz64 In reply to ??? [2013-09-26 04:22:21 +0000 UTC]

"So t omake myself better I drew some pony butt"

Great minds think alike!

#BUTTS

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Longinius-II In reply to Fundz64 [2013-09-26 19:32:49 +0000 UTC]

Butts make everything better man... <3

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Fundz64 In reply to Longinius-II [2013-10-03 07:18:35 +0000 UTC]

*Longinius-II ...
where have you been all my life?

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Longinius-II In reply to Fundz64 [2013-10-04 19:19:20 +0000 UTC]

Eheheheh, I'm always here brother.

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6XShadowX6 In reply to ??? [2013-09-26 04:10:14 +0000 UTC]

I love you so much right now.

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Longinius-II In reply to 6XShadowX6 [2013-09-26 19:33:00 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Happy you liek it.

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Longinius-II In reply to BB-K [2013-09-26 19:35:56 +0000 UTC]

Eheheh, I could've drawn some, but I didn't really think it would've fit THIS pic.

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BB-K In reply to Longinius-II [2013-09-26 23:38:55 +0000 UTC]

That's alright, I'm no fan of looking at lingerie from the back angle as I prefer more of the front, where the front shows all of the details which the back can't.

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FallenShadow000 In reply to ??? [2013-09-26 03:51:01 +0000 UTC]

Hope you get better soon so you can continue making great art like this.

And because no one has said it yet: DAT ASS.

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Usagi1992 In reply to FallenShadow000 [2014-01-28 19:31:17 +0000 UTC]

Trust me...you SHOULDN'T have.

It is possible to find just ONE decent MLP 'plot' picture what this GODDAMN FUCKING MEME ruining it for me?! Yeah, I know it's trivial, but it's REALLY a pet peeve of mine.

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FallenShadow000 In reply to Usagi1992 [2014-01-29 04:24:49 +0000 UTC]

My bad. I couldn't resist. xD

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Usagi1992 In reply to FallenShadow000 [2014-01-30 20:57:26 +0000 UTC]

It's okay, you're not a mind-reader. And forgive me for sounding like an angry stick in the mud. I must've woken up on the wrong side of the bed that morning. All I'm saying is, that meme should be reserved to HUMAN asses, not pony plots. I'm just saiyan.

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FallenShadow000 In reply to Usagi1992 [2014-01-30 21:06:01 +0000 UTC]

Ohh, the puns! Punny pwnies!!! xD

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Longinius-II In reply to FallenShadow000 [2013-09-26 19:36:24 +0000 UTC]

Ehehe, I'll do my best. Art needs sacrifices after all.

Dat ass indeed. It is glorious.

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FallenShadow000 In reply to Longinius-II [2013-09-26 19:43:10 +0000 UTC]

*wraps arms around Fluttershy* IDK what you're talking about... >_> <_<

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ColonelYeo In reply to ??? [2013-09-26 03:48:15 +0000 UTC]

Very lovely work, Longinius. I really love how you drew Fluttershy's wings, and I like the butterfly shaped bow.

You try to take it easy, my friend. I hope you get well very soon.

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Longinius-II In reply to ColonelYeo [2013-09-26 19:37:12 +0000 UTC]

Yay! I love how the wings came out here. It looks really nice.

I will do my best to get better. :/

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Longinius-II In reply to Mario94 [2013-09-26 19:37:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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ThatWittyObserver In reply to ??? [2013-09-26 03:45:39 +0000 UTC]

I hope you feel better soon...

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Longinius-II In reply to ThatWittyObserver [2013-09-26 19:39:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I will try to.

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Template93 In reply to ??? [2013-09-26 03:45:32 +0000 UTC]

Dat plot!

great work as always! Your drawing are the best!

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Longinius-II In reply to Template93 [2013-09-26 19:40:24 +0000 UTC]

The Plot is sooo beautiful.

Than you! I'm happy to hear that.

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