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CONTEST IS CLOSED NOWThe winners will be anounced tomorrow (i first need to read all the stories again, and im tired now hehehe)
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Since a lot of you told me they thought it would be a fun idea to do a story contest , here it is
(( for those who rather wanted an art contest > dont worry , that one will come too ))
PRIZES
third place > 500 points - 1 free commission - an icon - a llama if i haven't given you one yet
second place > 750 points - 1 free commission - an icon- a llama if i haven't given you one yet
first place > 1000 points - 2 free commissions - an icon - llama if i haven't given you one yet
>> if i get a good amount of entries i will add more prices <<
how to enter
- The thing you need to do is choose one of the scenes above (more info about them later) and write a story for it . You can make it as short/long as you want
- Its not like how longer the story how more change you have on getting a price > its about the content
- the pics above are for insperation > these "scenes" can happen before your story , at the end of your story or while .
- you can enter by writing the story by commenting on the comment : comments.deviantart.com/1/5051… or write text and upload it on deviantart (i cant open sta.sh files) with mentioning me or sending me a link to it
- make clear in the story wich scene is your insperation (by telling me the number > 1 - 2 .. 5 - 6)
- you can enter one story per scene (you can add your story whenever you feel like though)
- you can tie scenes together > it will count as one story (so you will still be able to enter 5 other stories if you want)
- you can add as many characters as you want > either one of your OCs or any of mine , or an canon character ~
- im not a spelling bee myself , so spelling mistakes dont matter at all to me ! as long as i can understand it x)
- you dont neccesarily have to advertise this contest > but i will appreciate it
LITTLE INFO ABOUT THE SCENES
scene 1
characters Redrecord - Skyline Jr - Paint Tool
place pic above is suppose to be in Redrecords bedroom
scene 2
characters Brick - Tulipa
place pic above is suppose to be Bricks working space > where they build and stuff
scene 3
characters Gumdrop - Pinkiepie - Hula Hoop
place pic above is suppose to be sugar cube corner
scene 4
characters Iconicflash - Rarity - Iconicflash's mother , no name for her yet but for this she can be called Ms Glanz
place pic above is suppose to be at Carousel Boutique (Raritys shop)
scene 5
characters Poppy - Hamelin - Crinklecut
place pic above is suppose to be at their highschool
scene 6
Make up something for yourself ! It has to contain one of my OCs but the rest is all up to you ~
scene 7
characters Daisy July - Scarlet Melody - Fluttershy - Heath
place pic above is suppose to be at a store
scene 8
characters Gabby - Bartlett
place pic above is suppose to be at Iconic's agency where Gabby works as a secretary
>> I will consider all stories the same > you will not get a bigger change at winning just because you choose scene 6 <<
FOR MORE INFO ABOUT THE CHARACTERS GO TO THIS JOURNAL HERE
SCENE INFO
CONTEST ENDS MARCH THE FIRST
>> no need to ask if you can join you just can <<
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Comments: 151
I wish I know how to make a story but I stink at it T^T
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I'll start after I get my PJs on. My mom probably going to be like "Why are you typing so much!? Are you doing homework?!" XD
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themajesticbutter394.deviantar…
030 welp...I don't really find myself really creative but at least i gave it a shot...
I hope you enjoy
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I love writing, so hard to come up with an idea for the pictures though, Ill see about doing it!
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oh my--
number two looks super sweet fluff
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Okay question, can we use all six scenes...? >>
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yeah you can enter one story per scene
but you can also tie them together i quess , forgot to add that in the discription sorry x)
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lol it's all good 
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Scene 1: BRUH!
Scene 2: B-Bruh?
Scene 3: Bruuuuuh *eyeroll*
Scene 4: Bruh bruh bruuuh!
Scene 5: Bruh... Bruh!
Scene 6: I typed Bruh too many times and now it doesn't make sense as a word and I question my spelling.
So all jokes aside, I hope you get some awesome entries!
Edit: Could Flash's mum be named Serene Starlet or somesuch?
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The story is changed its kinda long well here: once opon a time there is a pony named gumdrop who went to sugar cube corner looking for cupcakes then pinkie came and she said "welcome to the sugar cube corner may I help you?" Then gumdrop said "yes but I'm looking for 5 cupcakes" pinkie said "okie dokie Locke" 1 hour ago pinkie is done with the cupcakes then another OC came to look for a cake "may I have some cake?" The OC said "ok here's the cake" said pinkie I hope u like it^u^
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Ok here's the story of pinkie pie. Once open a time pinkie pie is making something delicious for Everypony she needs the recipe but then gumdrops came in and found the recipe thanks for helping me
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I'm entering again!
Scarlet Melody walked into the grocery store she visited nearly everyday, a cup of warm
coffee in her hand. She picked up the latest copy of Tree Fashion and placed it on the counter
along with the coffee she had been holding. She pulled out her wallet and put a ten dollar bill
on top of her magazine. Daisy July happily took the bill from behind the counter and opened
the register drawer. As she inserted numbers into the machine, Fluttershy walked in and filled
her basket with groceries. She beamed proudly when she saw Scarlet's magazine on the counter.
Daisy frowned at the register. The door swung open and Heath walked in, quickly grabbing
some cat food and hopping in line. He tapped his feet impatiently while Fluttershy contemplated
her flour. Scarlet, meanwhile was getting annoyed at Daisy for taking so long. After a few
minutes, the three were grumpy and complaining to themselves while Daisy played with the
register some more and began to feel the negative vibe in the room.
The four stopped bickering when the smoke alarm went off and the register began spouting
sparks and smoke. After a moment of screaming, flailing, and panicking, the alarm stopped and
so did the sparks. Smoke still sizzled out of the machine.
Fluttershy squeaked and Heath returned to his former state of impatience. Scarlet was bummed.
"That was the last of my money!" she shouted, causing both Fluttershy and Heath to jump
back in surprise. Daisy winced.
"Sorry, I'm not sure what went wrong. That's never happened before." She shivered, unsure
of Scarlet's reaction.
But to Daisy's surprise, Scarlet snatched up the magazine and stormed out the door, steaming.
Heath and Fluttershy left without paying, but Fluttershy left the flour behind.
After that day, she had a sudden flour-phobia for no apparent reason.
i hope you like it owo
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Yay, wrote another entry, because I got bored and had an idea ">.<
derpehfacearts.deviantart.com/…
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Doin scene 5 :3
It was a bright and beautiful day.Hamelin,Poppy and Crinklecut went to school together --since theymissed the bus.But,Hamelin thought that Poppy and Crinklcut seemed a bit...off.
Poppy and Crinklecut were giggling awfully loud.Hamelin was very confused and felt very curious.
"Why are you two giggling so loud?What the heck is so funny?" Hamelin said.
"Ooooh,nothing",Poppy replied in a very giggly voice
"Yeah,don't worry about it",Crinklecut said with a huge grin on her face.
"You guys are weird" Hamelin said.
The three friends arrived to their school.Hamelin was still very confused about how Poppy and Crinklecut were acting.Well,you gotta admit it is very weird,right?
"I wonder what those two are up to..."Hamelin whispered
Their first class was over.Hamelin went up to Poppy and Crinklecut to ask them a question.
"Okay,spit it out.What are you two dorks up to?" Hamelin asked out of curiosity."You two dorks have been smiling and laughing ever since this morning!"
"Umm.Hamelin..."Poppy said worried."We,umm..."
"You what?"Hamelin said in an annoyed tone.
"We got you on a date with Iconic Flash!" Crinklecut said fast as if she was holding it in for too long.
"Crinkle!!"Poppy shouted out loud.
"Oops...Sorry..."Crinklecut said.
Hamelin stayed silent.But on the inside,she was screaming her head off.
Then she finally burst."You, WHAT!?!?"Hamelin screamed in anger.
"We're so sorry!But...you've had a crush on him for long and we wanted to hook you two up!"Crinklecut said as an apology.
"But,you guys know I'm horrible at dates..."Hamelin said in a sad voice.
"You're not horrible at dates!You just need some time to practice!"Poppy said.
"Poppy,she doesn't need to practice!She just has to stay calm and be herself"Crinklecut said."Besides,your date with him is later after class".
Hamelin started to get extremely nervous.Everything in her mind went all crazy.But she realized that Crinklecut was right.She needs to be brave and be herself.
"Okay.Where is our date going to be?"Hamelin asked.
"At some café",Poppy said.
All their classes were over.Hamelin was starting to get nervous again.But she had to stay calm.
"Okay,let's go!"Poppy said.
Hamelin started to blush.Her face was flushed red.Poppy and Crinklecut laughed at Hamelin's face.
"Don't worry!You'll be fine!"Crinklcut said.
"Okay..."Hamelin said.
The three arrived at the café.When they entered they just saw Iconicflash was just waiting.Poppy pushed Hamelin in.Poppy and Crinklecut just waited for them to Finnish.
Hamelin then walked towards Iconicflash.he's even more handsome up close",Hamelin thought.
"H-h-hi"Hamelin said nervously.
"Hello,Hamelin",Iconicflash said.
"sweet celestial he knows my name!!" Hamelin said in her head.
They talked for a while and drank some coffee and had some food.They never knew they had so much in common.
After a while, they were done with their little date.Hamelin was still filled with such joy and couldn't wipe her smile off her face.
"Let's do this again some time",Iconicflash said with a smile.Hamelin just nodded and blushed.
After a crazy day Hamelin went home as happy as can be.
"This was the best day I ever had!" Hamelin said as she walked home.
~END~
I had so much FUN!!!
I hope you like it!!! ^_^
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thanks for the entry ~ I enjoyed reading it ^^
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Ur welcome and thx for making this contest! ^^
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I'll try...
Scene 3
Hula Hoop casually pushed open the door and stepped into Sugar Cube Corner, where Gumdrop was sitting at their usual table talking to Pinkie Pie.
"So then I pulled out a GUMMY BEAR and everyone started laughing and it was super funny!" The two laughed although Hula Hoop knew that Gumdrop had told the same story to Pinkie about a hundred times. They finally stopped and noticed Hula. "Hi there! What've you been up to? I haven't seen you in ages!" Gumdrop squeaked, standing up and slamming her hands on the table aggressively. Hula Hoop smiled lightly and slid into the seat across from Gumdrop.
"I saw you an hour ago." she said.
"Oh, right!" Gumdrop laughed again and quickly pulled out a bag of candy. Hula Hoop rolled her eyes and looked at Pinkie Pie.
"Can you get me a slice of cherry cake and a glass of water, please?" Pinkie nodded.
"Sure!" she skipped off into the kitchen.
"Are you getting anything?" asked Hula. Gumdrop sucked on her candy for a little bit and thought.
"Oh, right." Pinkie had never asked her for what she wanted. "PINKIE!" she shouted "I WANT A-" Pinkie ran up with a tray filled with food and drinks. She quickly placed everything on the table. "Thanks! You always know exactly what I want!" giggled Gumdrop, and she began dumping gummy bears into her hot drink. Hula Hoop looked at her glass.
"Pinkie, I asked for water." she explained. Pinkie laughed.
"Silly! We're all out of water!"
"Well why didn't you tell me when I ordered it?" Pinkie stood and thought for a minute.
"I thought you'd like juice!" Hula Hoop shook her head.
"I don't like juice." Hula swirled the straw around in her drink. "But never mind. It's okay." She pushed the juice away from her.
"I'll let you in on a little secret." said Pinkie Pie quietly. Gumdrop put down her drink and clapped her hands.
"What kind of secret?!" Pinkie scooted closer to the table and cupped her hand around her mouth.
"The sugar in this very juice, the one you are drinking now, is maaaaggggiiiiccc." She waved her arms around in Hula's face. Hula crossed her arms. Gumdrop 'oooh'ed. "It comes from deep within the Everfree Forest, from a magical plant called..." She rubbed her hands together. "a TREE!" Gumdrop clapped enthusiastically and quickly slurped the juice up. Hula Hoop scratched her head.
"That's it? The magic sugar comes from a tree?"
"Yes! But hush! No one else must know the secret!" And with that she stepped away.
Gumdrop began munching on her cupcake in a rushed manner. Hula watched her. She had noticed Gumdrop being enthusiastic before, but never this hyper.
"Gumdrop, what did you eat for dinner last night?" Gumdrop chewed carefully and swallowed, holding up her hand to say 'wait a second.'
"Macaroni and Cheese." So maybe it was nothing. Maybe she was just in a good mood.
But she wasn't acting normal. Hula excused herself and walked over to Pinkie Pie.
"Pinkie, have you noticed anything strange about Gumdrop recently?" Pinkie shrugged.
"Why do you ask?"
"Because... She's been acting really hyper today. Very Pinkie-ish." Pinkie smiled mysteriously and rubbed her chin.
"I bet it was the MAGIC SUGAR!" Everyone in Sugarcube Corner looked at them awkwardly. Pinkie didn't mind. Hula Hoop blushed like crazy.
"No, but she's been acting like this before she drank the juice!" Pinkie nodded.
"Hmm... You sure she hasn't eaten anything... Mysterious?!" Hula shushed Pinkie to avoid more staring.
"She said she had macaroni for dinner last night, so–"
"Oh, so it must've been the magic sugar!" Once again, all eyes were on the quite red Hula Hoop. She went back to the table and grabbed all her things, leaving some money on the table.
"Let's go home." said Hula, embarrassed. Gumdrop quickly finished her cupcake and followed reluctantly.
"Why? After the gummy bears I had for breakfast, I could stay out for hours!" Hula felt very dumb at that moment and quickly stomped out the door.
That's it! Hope you like it!
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Thanks for the entry! i loved reading it^^
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Contest Entry
Scene #1
Paint Tool was walking beside Skyline Jr towards Red Record’s house, Paint was wearing gym gear from the session he went to earlier in the morning, Red Record promised them that he would come to the gym with Skyline and Paint, But he hadn’t and now they were slowly walking towards his house to make sure he keeps his promise.
“That Record NEVER keeps any of his promises to be early, has he set his alarm clock on Off or something? The fact that he’s always not punctual gets rather bothersome.” Skyline Jr whispered to Paint Tool, who was slowly falling asleep.
Skyline slapped Paint on the back to wake him up. “so you’re planning to sleep as well?” Skyline scolded.
“Well sorry Mr. punctual, I just want to sleeeep.” Paint mumbled, still sounding half asleep.
Finally they both have arrived at Red Records house, Skyline knocked on the door, waiting for Red Record, His twin sister, or Mother to open the door, after a short while Red Records Mom had opened the door.
“Hello there boys, how are you today? I’m guessing Red Record forgot to be punctual as usual?” She asked.
“That Red Record’s really smart, but he’s not punctual at all!” Skyline Jr rolled his eyes as that line dripped from his tongue.
“Well come on in” She said with a wink, “I know Just the thing to wake him up!”
Paint Tool sharply looked up, still half asleep “Oh! Hello R.R’s Ma! sorry I didn’t say hi” Paint apologized, RR’s Mother just smiled and nodded, and handed Skyline JR. A cooking pan and a spoon.
Skyline and Paint Tool entered the room, Skyline tiptoed over to Red Record and started banging on the pan with the spoon as loud as he can. “GET UP GET UP GET UP!” Skyline shouted in R.R’s ear.
“GAH!” Red Record snapped awake, and turned over realizing that his alarm clock wasn’t turned on, and then he realized.
“Duuuuuudes, I’m so sorry that I didn’t get there to the gym with you guys!” Red Record sat up and ran into his Bathroom to change, probably for another 3 hours to fix his hair like usually.
“Oh Brother..” Skyline JR. facepalmed
“I don’t know about you, but I’m ready to go to sleep…” Paint Tool sat down leaning against the wall and fell asleep in 10 seconds FLAT.
Skyline JR. realized something along with Red Record, He was going to be here for a While.
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Well that was my entry! I might be making more, but this was one of my first writing pieces and i’m sure it has a lot of problems T-T
This was about scene #1 like it said on the top of the page, I hope you like it!
(Red Records a sleepyhead)
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thanks for the entry ! i enjoyed reading it > w <
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Scene 5
characters Poppy - Hamelin - Crinklecut
* Hamelin tries to load his books to the closet *
Poppy - What are you doing?
Hamelin - What do you think I'm doing? Loading my books to my dresser, duh! Trying at least.
Crincklecut - No, you're not, you're crawling the hassle to your closet and the ground does not like it.
Hamelin - How is it?
Poppy - Girl, forget the books! Is at the beginning of the year and you already trying to study hard? Nah Nah Nah! You will follow is in the school talent show!
Hamelin - I'm not interested.
Crincklecut - Go! You will love when we are the most popular school! Or even better: The Creative.
Hamelin - Again, how is it?
* Crincklecut pulls Hamelin *
Crincklecut - We will make your registration! It is near the water cooler.
Hamelin - But ... But ...
Poppy - No "but"! You will us and will like it!
Hamelin - * gulp *
.: A few minutes later :.
Crincklecut - The test will be in 10 minutes already know the talent that we will present? Dancing, singing or something in mind?
* The two shake their heads with the sign "no" *
Crincklecut - WHY NOT YOU THOUGHT BEFORE?
Poppy - Why God wanted.
Hamelin - Look debauchery, Pop! I said it would not work, we give up, we have no choice.
Crincklecut - Of course we have!
Poppy - No we do not.
Crincklecut - How so?
Hamelin - I talked and Poppy. We have no talent to show.
Poppy - Otherwise pay monkey in front of the entire school.
Crincklecut - Of course we have one! Each of us has: Poppy knows how to make great food, I know gymnastics and Hamelin has a great voice and...
Poppy - Wait, wait, wait! These talents do not match.
Crincklecut - Yes.
Poppy - I mean that we will compete individually and one of us will go on top of our group making his fame go to his head and we will rebel against it on out, what will leave us forever and will eventually separate us old, with wrinkles living with ten cats and continue competing, competing and competing forever?
Crincklecut - I had never thought of that...
Poppy - I do not, but that is what might end up happening.
Hamelin - then we will cancel our registration?
Crincklecut - Of course not! Have you ever thought in our new reputation if we do this? We will be known as the school cowards!
Hamelin - But I'm not to participate! I said! * leaves *
Poppy - She's right, we should not have done it with Hamelin just because we wanted it and we can not participate if this will affect our future as former friends. We should apologize to her.
Crincklecut - You're right, let's move it.
.: In Hamelin house:.
Hamelin - What do you want now?
Crincklecut - We want to apologize, we should have listened to you.
Poppy - Will you forgive us?
Hamelin - Of course, yes, despite having known better in this contest. Should have been more courageous and believed in you: the best friends in the world. Give me a hug!
Poppy - Awww!
* All hug *
.: End:.
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1-hey lazy we have to work WAKE UP !
woah !! you two scared me what time is it
its 11 -,-
WHAT ??!!
yea .. did you sleep late ?
i tried to sleep early but my neighbours were having a party
did you go to the party
no they were SO ANNOYING that is why i didnt sleep well
oh ...
so we are going to get out of the room and wait for you
*sigh* ok
after 10 minutes
come on we are going to be late !
gosh why are you so nervous we are not going to be late
yes we are going to be late
do you want me to write more ?
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Thanks for the entry ~ if you want to write more you can ^^
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This is longer ^^ (but short put more things in the future)
1- Let's wake up !!!! We have to do a little run!
2-Haha I like you very well !!! Would you like to meet sometime? : D
3-Pss do not say anything that will upset you can remove the food that much cost me ...
4-Wo! Rarity you surpass yourself this very very very very good !!!
But ... If not finished even and started ...
-Eeeeh ... Seriously ... Em ... Well I ... I ... Eh! I do not agree and said anything !?
5- look will love this !!! you sure !!!!!!!!!!
6-Wo ... Bored ... Mmm'll draw something ... Gore? ... Nya ... I better go see the wonderful drawings Looji ... ^^
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Here is my entry !
Bricks and Tulips
scene 2
characters Brick - Tulipa
place pic above is suppose to be Bricks working space > where they build and stuff
Bricks and Tulips
Its was a sunny day, the sun was Brighter, But the warm wind make the day even more delightful. Tulipa, Was doing her chores, Washing dishes, keep wondering when she's goin to find a nice guy, than can take care of her, and love her with all his heart.She was so distracted, on her day dreamings, So distracted, that she didnt notice that the water was shedding from the sink '' Oh mai ! '', Tulipa closes the sink key, and she runs to get something to clean it up. When she runs to get a Rag, The television/Radio Reporter was talking about something so interesting '' Since the new Tea shop open their doors, the people keep coming and coming out with so many stuff for her Tea stuff, There are somany Tea sets, Tea bags, even med
Also Good luck reading all the entrys , it may take time
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derpehfacearts.deviantart.com/…
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waking up scene
hehuhhehuhehuhehuh
omg i did this on ur stream
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Here's Mine, I hope you like it. and It was very very fun to do ^.^!
Looji Competition entry: scene 4 "Mother, I really should be walking Herman" Iconic Insisted, ignoring the everlasting glances from several girls at the nearby salon.
The older woman raised a dismissive hand "Oh don't worry I'm sure that Arty-" she faltered "whatever his name is..."
"Paint Tool?" The blonde pointed out
"Ah yes!" she exclaimed clapping her hands together once "Yes, he agreed to look after him while we are gone for the day" she drifted off "Such a nice young fellow, uses very intricate words, some even I don't know!.." she said smiling, tilting her head slightly to glance at the tall blonde walking next to her.
Iconic let his mother ramble on, he wouldn't really admit such things but he did enjoy when his mother let go a little, sometimes you don't really know what the fashion industry does until you get away from it, Then again they weren't totally on a fashion-free trip, Iconic was in need of a new suit for a conference with the company - His mother insisted in this small
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thanks ! but when i click on it , it says link not found 404 (something like that)
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Looji Competition entry: scene 4 How Is it working now, If it doesn't work then I'll submit it as a journal entry since it's not letting me post a literature deviation
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sorry , i cant open sta.sh files anymore , my sta.sh is broken :c
you can also place it in a comment here , if its really not working for you
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I managed to get It into a separate literature deviation ^.^
Looji competition entry - scene 4 "Mother, I really should be walking Herman" Iconic Insisted, ignoring the everlasting glances from several girls at the nearby salon.
The older woman raised a dismissive hand "Oh don't worry I'm sure that Arty-" she faltered "whatever his name is..."
"Paint Tool?" The blonde pointed out
"Ah yes!" she exclaimed clapping her hands together once "Yes, he agreed to look after him while we are gone for the day" she drifted off "Such a nice young fellow, uses very intricate words, some even I don't know!.." she said smiling, tilting her head slightly to glance at the tall blonde walking next to her.
Iconic let his mother ramble on, he wouldn't really admit such things but he did enjoy when his mother let go a little, sometimes you don't really know what the fashion industry does until you get away from it, Then again they weren't totally on a fashion-free trip, Iconic was in need of a new suit for a conference with the company - His mother insisted in this small
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For 4
A old looking lading was walking , taking in her hand a hand of a younger man .
Ms Glanz: Oh my! I can't believe you finally accepted to come with me!
IconicFlash: Mom.
Ms Glanz: You'll see how this cloth designer is talented!
IconicFlash: Moooom!
Ms Glanz: And she's pretty too! Maybe you can ask her to go out fo-
Iconic: MOM!
The younger man stopped , as soon the women did too , looking at her son.
Ms Glanz: Did ...Did you just yell at me ?
Iconic: Maaaaybee....
Ms Glanz: You don't want me to ......
Iconic: No , mom... Nooooooooo!
Ms Glanz: You left me no choice son!
Iconic: NOOOOOOOOO!
Ms Glanz: I'll use it! I'll use the "cry" if you don't come with me, and be the gentleman you normaly are !
Iconic Flash: *whimpers* Yes mom....
The lady smiled , as she took her son's hand and continued walking. They soon arrived , in front of them , was a giant house , the old lady smiled , but the boy , instead , had a negative smile , and was trying to run away.
*i'll edit when i have time to continue , this is not finished*
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thanks for the entry ! I like it now already , cant wait to see it finished ^^
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Thanks ^^ I'll finish it now ^^
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Waffles1012 41 minutes ago Student Traditional Artist
(Ok, so this is my entire for the contest, sorry that it is a little bit rushed, but enjoy!, oh and this is number one)
*BING BING BING, AND OTHER POT NOISES*
"RISE AND SHINE SLEEPING BEAUTY! TIME TO GET UP!"
Redrecord woke up with a jump, messing his beautiful dream he had
"W-what? *looks at Skyline Jr.* DUDE! *throws pillow* WHY DID YOU WAKE ME UP?!"
"Sorry Red, time to get up!"
"Why? What time is it anyways?!"
"It's 5:30 in the morning, you're lucky, he woke me up at dawn" said Paint Tool while complaining what he could have done if he slept the whole night
"You don't know what today is?!"
"Of course I don't" said Redrecord
"It's International sports day! And I'm gonna spend it with you two! Unfortunately, I couldn't wake up the other guys to celebrate this national holiday....Non of the less, Time to get up!"
*time skips 30 mins ahead*
"So what are we gonna do dude?"
"We will head out to the field and play some sports of course! We'll first start off with soccer then...." (Skyline continues talking in the back-round)
"Psst, dude, psst Paint, psst"
"what?"
"Do you really want to do this?"
"Nah, do you know what I could have been doing right now? Sleeping! I'm so tired that..."
(Paint tool continues to complain)
"So what do you say Red?"
"W-what?"
"Did you even hear anything That I said?"
"No, but I'm completely on board with sports day! yay!" He said sarcastically
"Then let's go!"
They all walked to the field and Jr here brought the equipment
"So ladies, what sport do you want to play first?"
"I would like to play badminton please" said Paint Tool
"Nah, how about soccer!" Said Skyline
"Ok"
They were about to start but Redrecord was sitting on the benches
"Hey Red! Come play!" Said Skyline
"Nah dude! Save next round for me!"
A couple of minutes into the game, Paint Tool screamed
"Ouch! My knee!"
"Sorry man! I tried to kick the ball but instead I hit you! Are you ok?"
"No, my knee hurts really badly, and you know how I could have prevented it? By sleeping! gosh, I did I get myself into this mess?"
"Aw, shut up and let me pick you up"
Redrecord rushed to the scene
"Dude, I heard a scream, what happen-*red looks at Paint Tool* whoah! What happened to you!?"
"Nothing! just help me carry him to the hospital"
"Fine dude, whatever you say"
So they carried Paint Tool to the hospital, turns out that now he can't play soccer anymore because of the injury, but everything else was just fine. The End!
(Btw, I might want to do number 4 or 2 next, hope you like it!)
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Well I'll give it a shot I guess...
Scene 3
Gumdrop had managed to drag Hula Hoop away from her hoops to go to sugar cube corner. Hula Hoop set her brightly colored hula hoops down against her chair and sat down with Gumdrop across from her. They both ordered cupcakes and smoothies, plus a slice of cheese cake, but soon after Hula Hoop got up to use the restroom.
"Alrighty, see ya later!" Gumdrop hollered, waving her hand back and forth.
As soon as Hula got back, she took a bite out of her food saying, "I'm actually really hungry now that I'm here." Gumdrop giggled. Hula didn't know why, until she bit into something that was certainly not supposed to be in a cheesecake. She just growled and stared at Gumdrop.
A high, squeaky voice was heard and the clinking of glasses tapping each other as Pinkie Pie ran out of the kitchen. "Hi! I'm so glad you're here, girls! Here are your cup cakes-" She pause and placed a cup cake back down on her tray, leaving one hand free to stroke her chin. "My Pinkie senses are sensing some negative energy. Negative energy is not allowed in Sugar Cube Corner!" She rested her fist on her hip. Hula glanced over at Mr. and Mrs. Cake yelling at each other behind the cash register after hearing what Pinkie said.
Pinkie saw jelly beans in buried Hula's cheesecake and leaned over to Gum Drop. Putting a hand on the cheek closest to Hula, Pinkie whispered, "I don't think she likes Gum Drops..."
"She liked them yesterday!" Gumdrop flailed her arms over her head.
"Well I don't today." Hula huffed with her arms crossed.
Pinkie couldn't find anything to do about this. She instead put a smile back on her face and placed the cup cakes and the smoothie on the table. "Well, here are your cup cakes! I have another regular customer who has been waiting for an hour to take her order." She said before waving at a young girl with flowers in her pink hair, sitting at a table alone. ((My characters go to Sugar Cube Corner like every day shh)) "Maybe drink some of your smoothie to get rid of the taste. I'll be back with your check!" She skipped over to another table.
"An hour?" Gumdrop asked.
"I was singing a song about smiling..." Pinkie said, now at the table with the young girl.
Gumdrop heard Hula's voice yell, "Gumdrops in my smoothie too!"
"Sorry! Here, I'll pay for it." She reached into a small pouch she had and pulled assorted gummies out of it. "Oh no..."
"You brought the wrong pouch." Hula face-palmed and shook her head. "I'll pay."
After that, all was ok. Hula Hoop forgot about the whole thing after receiving a new hoop made of assorted candies from Gumdrop.
The End
hope you like it! My apologies if they're out of character or anything.
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