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Description "Well, well, I do believe that's a wrap on our magic duel, Moony. Goodness me, you're so adorable right now, I could just gobble you right up-!"

"Do not patronize me, witch. You haven't won-I'll best you yet!" Moondancer squeaked indignantly, kicking in vain with his teeny mouse paws. His voice had become quite high-pitched and cute, though it seethed with self-righteous fury.

Pandora blinked. "Moondancer, dearie....you've been turned into a field mouse. Own up to it. Certainly this is game over-I mean, can you even shapeshift yourself back to normal?"

Moondancer glanced up at his nub of a horn, and for a moment, he struggled to call upon his magic, cheeks turning pink with exertion. Finally, his horn lit, then made a small sputtering sound, and he panted.

"....No." He folded his mouse arms with a huff. He pointedly didn't look at her.

"Well." Pandora smiled, amused. "I could change you back, I suppose. On the condition that you promise not to fire magical lightning at me when I'm just trying to order an oatburger. Really, a sneak attack at lunchtime? Moony, Moony, Moondancer, I thought you had better manners than that."

Moondancer glared at her, twitching his whiskers. "A true mage would never let their guard down. A magic duel can strike at any moment. You should have been prepared."

"Uh huh. And what about the oatburger cook? You destroyed half his restaurant's drywall work."

"Irrelevant." Moondancer said darkly. "Darkness will fall on whomever stands in the way of my rightful victory. I won't rest until I defeat you, she-beast. I will not rest until all of ponykind stands awed and cowed before the great and powerful Moondanc-"

"Blah blah, ultimate sorcerer, blah blah descendant of Starswirl, blah. Geez, Moony, you're a broken record. Y'know, I'd eat you, but I bet a grumpy little mouse like you would give me crazy indigestion."

"I'm not afraid of you." Quite warily, Moondancer eyed the great serpent's sharp fangs. "R-release me, witch."

"Alrighty. Good luck figuring out how to shapeshift back into a big snobby stick-up-your-bum unicorn." Pandora released him, and he dropped to the ground.

"Oh, I relish the challenge, she-demon." Moondancer balled his little fists, defiant....before looking down uncertainly at his paws. "...There must be a textbook on this sort of thing somewhere."

"I'm sure. Well it's been fun, but I do have an oatburger to eat. If I can even find the damned thing in the rubble from your magic blast." Pan had begun slithering away, thoroughly annoyed. Moondancer called after her, mortified and furious.

"This isn't over! I'll get you!" He squeaked, stomping a paw. "Our next duel will see you defeated, I swear on Starswirl's ghost!"

Pandora turned and winked. "Sounds like a date, Marshmallow. Bring it on." And she snickered when it elicited another round of angry, red-faced sputtering.

"Honestly, Moondancer, you never learn."

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as adults, Moondancer challenges his rival Pan to lots of random magic duels. He's never won and that really, really rankles him

Pan finds it half amusing, half annoying, and really wishes Moondancer would drop the noble crusader thing and that they could just go back to being friends again
related:

i realized i haven't shown much of Pan's shapeshifting abilities. She loves becoming various animals, with snakes, big cats, gerbils, and chickens being her favorites. She's also fond of magicking Moondancer into various cute rodents when he tries picking fights


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Comments: 205

Gischtkralle In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 11:52:17 +0000 UTC]

Pandora looks sooo cool as a snake *-* Like wooow... reminds me a bit at Kaa from Junglebook xD

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FrostKuji In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 11:34:51 +0000 UTC]

You're slowly turning Moondancer into Vageta(Saiyan-Frieza saga).

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Lopoddity In reply to FrostKuji [2017-06-29 17:45:54 +0000 UTC]

That's good, Vegeta is my favorite character (second only to Krillin)

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FrostKuji In reply to Lopoddity [2017-06-30 14:30:21 +0000 UTC]

So who's going to be his Bulma?

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EspyFandoms In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 11:22:22 +0000 UTC]

Lol!

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AshetheREDscout In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 10:58:53 +0000 UTC]

moony mouse is sooo cute ahhh!   

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Unkownbrony52 In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 10:53:10 +0000 UTC]

Love the details you put into her snake form with her colorization. Fantastic work.

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Shintari In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 10:52:30 +0000 UTC]

Chicken Pandora... I NEED TO SEE THIS!
Especially with Henrietta there as well!

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tpalacios17 In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 10:03:18 +0000 UTC]

I could get lost in those mesmerizing eyes of hers. 

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the-trash-guardian In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 09:57:08 +0000 UTC]

didn't know you were into vore

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AlphamonOuryuuken In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 09:34:39 +0000 UTC]

Pandora makes a sexy snake!

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Godzillamaster69 In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 09:18:46 +0000 UTC]

That's what you get when you act like an ass, Moondancer.

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Kittycool103 In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 08:42:06 +0000 UTC]

i realy love the snake pandory its so well done ^^ and the mous moonie hes so cute!;3;

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39-TheWolf In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 08:25:36 +0000 UTC]

This really reminds me of the magical duel between Merlin and Madame Mims from The Sword in the Stone. 

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LaVallett1 In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 08:05:09 +0000 UTC]

Pandora should have just eaten him. There, problem solved. The End.

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Lopoddity In reply to LaVallett1 [2017-06-29 17:49:03 +0000 UTC]

In the original dialogue draft, she would have "eaten" him, then spat him back out because he tasted bad. I dropped it because it felt a bit too mean-spirited and out of character. :/

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LaVallett1 In reply to Lopoddity [2017-06-29 20:06:41 +0000 UTC]

Alright. Though he needs to be put down a peg or two to teach him a lesson.

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Korlis In reply to LaVallett1 [2017-06-29 09:07:02 +0000 UTC]

that's kinda called a murder

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SnakesNSnoodles In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 07:49:17 +0000 UTC]

this is so cool!!
Snake Pan is best Pan

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FaeDeeDraws In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 07:41:36 +0000 UTC]

has someone been watching Sword in the Stone

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Martyn-Arts In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 07:39:56 +0000 UTC]

Talk about rude, Moony.

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RainwingArts In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 07:37:01 +0000 UTC]

is it weird i platonically ship them?
and not including the self-righteous side of moondancer. wish he'd drop the act.

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Lopoddity In reply to RainwingArts [2017-06-29 17:52:09 +0000 UTC]

"Platonically" ship them? Well, they did used to be very good friends:

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RainwingArts In reply to Lopoddity [2017-06-29 21:32:24 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, key words are "used to." O want them to return to being good friends.

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DNLnamek01 [2017-06-29 07:25:04 +0000 UTC]

Nice work on the designs. Kind of reminds me of Merlin & Mim's Magician's Duel from Disney's Sword in the Stone.

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LezzyBugO3O [2017-06-29 07:24:01 +0000 UTC]

Pandora looks gorgeous as a large snake! Bet she's great at the whole hypnotizing eyes while singing a certain song

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Zcat91819 In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 07:20:19 +0000 UTC]

...Soooo this reminds no one of "The Sword in the Stone"? Cause that's all I'm thinking about!

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Poison-Anthem In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 07:11:34 +0000 UTC]

Pandora is so beautiful as a snake <3

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NODOGAN In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 06:58:08 +0000 UTC]

huh, a mouse with an unicorn horn is actually quite adorable...this should be MORE popular concept! great work Panny you sexy devil

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bloominglove In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 06:53:53 +0000 UTC]

I love how you drew her eyes.

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AkityMH In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 06:51:36 +0000 UTC]

I am heavily reminded of Sword in the Stone with the Wizards Duel...

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Blake741 [2017-06-29 06:44:17 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, very nice work  
The only thing that seems off are Pandoras fangs. Snakes have only one pair of prominent fangs, the upper frontal fangs that are used to deliver venom other teeth are miniscule in comparison and are used to help keep hold of prey during venom injection and swallowing. Non-venomous snakes don't have prominent fangs at all, as the teeth are used to keep hold of prey during swallowing.
For a relatively common layout in venomous snakes blog.wcs.org/photo/2015/03/11/…

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Nelyasun In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 06:39:08 +0000 UTC]

XD XD XD XD Moondancer, just accept that she is better XD

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Schluge In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 06:34:31 +0000 UTC]

Is it just me, or does anyone else get a Sword in the Stone feeling?

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Javira-Butterfly In reply to Schluge [2017-06-29 06:41:02 +0000 UTC]

My thoughts exactly when I saw it! xD

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Madness-Made-Fresh In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 06:31:03 +0000 UTC]

This is great.

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SinjaAussiaAngels [2017-06-29 06:26:27 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome XD! Moondancer is sooo adorable with his mousy pout! Pandora is quite lovely!

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WubcakeVA In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 06:21:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank god it's a normal picture!! I was so scared this was one of those creepy snake vore pictures ;-; seems people can't draw snakes without making them a fetish these days. 

Anyways, I love the detail you did on the snake! Very nice!! Love the details in the eyes. The expression on the snake is great you can see some beauty in the creature but also that threat if you actually were a mouse XD Also I love the mouse's grumpy face XDD Too cute!

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Grevere [2017-06-29 06:19:08 +0000 UTC]

The name of the tab reads: "Bested by Lopoddity," as if you were the one who won a duel.

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spotty-bee In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 06:18:07 +0000 UTC]

So like the magic duel in Disney's The Sword and The Stone? Cause I could see Panny acting like Madam Mim!

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Ringtailed-Loser [2017-06-29 06:13:03 +0000 UTC]

Will we see Pandora as a chicken in the future? Please?

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dakotadugger In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 06:12:21 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely love it. Does remind me, just a bit of Madam Mim and Merlin X3 <3 though most definitely original regardless. 

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SnowyLilacs [2017-06-29 06:08:12 +0000 UTC]

Moondance should've booped the snoot,that would've gotten her! XD

Very nice style on the snake and mouse,very nice, But no thanks to the Jungle Book,I kinda was expecting Pan to have those weird hypnotic eyes of Kaa's

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urzapw2000 In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 06:05:58 +0000 UTC]

well he looks cute as a mouse!
and Pandora looks awesome as a snake!!
what effects do you think her venom would have in this form?

little scene:
Moondancer: huff huff... there must be an easier way to get this book out...
Midnight Abyss: did i just hear a mouse talk?
M: AH! oh... Morn- I mean Midnight... it's you...
MA: Moondancer? is that you?
M: unfortunately, yes
MA: you tried to fight Pandora? again?
M: (sigh) yes...
MA: (pulls out book that Moondancer was trying to get) well your ability to find what you need did not diminish with your size... hold still (with a wave of power her horn ignites and her eyes begin to               glow)
M: what-(a wave of power flows out of Midnight Abyss) AHG!
MA: did it work?
M: (looks down at himself) I-I appear to be myself again... thank you

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GreenEggsAndHam1998 In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 06:05:15 +0000 UTC]

This is great! Though now I'm wondering what Pandora looks like as a chicken and what she gets up to

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mortalshinobi In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 05:57:39 +0000 UTC]

this is oddly cute

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LunarLine [2017-06-29 05:55:26 +0000 UTC]

nub horn is best horn

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GeneralLioness In reply to ??? [2017-06-29 05:54:39 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of the dual between Merlin and Madam Mimm from Sword in the Stone.

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BeeQueen158 In reply to GeneralLioness [2017-06-29 16:44:28 +0000 UTC]

I was literally about to make this comment lmao

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GeneralLioness In reply to BeeQueen158 [2017-06-29 21:05:27 +0000 UTC]

XD

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