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Description The time was now. Pandora lay sleeping before him like an enormous housecat, looking deceptively harmless. Without giving himself time to consider any second thoughts, Moondancer struck. He brought down his arms violently, sinking his enchanted spear deep into her ribcage. Pandora woke immediately, and screamed-but Moondancer closed his ears to it. She deserved no pity. He forced the spear in deeper and twisted it-and Pandora writhed in agony, like a great serpent in its death throes-

"Aiiieee!!-Ahh. Oh. Ow. Oh, that hurts. Owie. Oh, you're killing me." Pandora stopped screaming abruptly and spoke, calm and completely deadpan, and Moondancer felt his heart gripped in ice. She cackled wildly, the sound ringing in his ears, and he knew at once that he'd failed. Again.

"This is the best you've got? Seriously?" Pandora's eyes twinkled with mirth, despite the spearhead buried just shy of piercing her lung. "A sharp stick? Oh, how the mighty have fallen, Moondancer."

She gripped his spear in her paw, and sent a surge of magical electricity through it, such that he was blasted away from the force of impact, and landed in a crumpled heap. She advanced on him, unhurried, like a lion stalking a mouse. He watched, horrified, as the wound he'd inflicted on her closed itself up.

"But that should have-t-that spearhead was coated with Midnight's strongest poison-!"

"It's pretty rude to burst into someone's lair uninvited, you know." She interrupted, smiling. "Especially since I wasn't even doing anything. My plans for today involved napping and treating myself to a nice lava bath. But here comes Moony Moony Moondancer playing hero again, stabbing his dear ol' friend Panny in her sleep."

"We're not friends." Moondancer growled, struggling to his hooves. "We h-haven't...been friends since you...since you killed your own father-"


"Oh, was that where I crossed the line?" Pan yawned, stretching casually. "Melodramatic as always, dearie. I didn't kill Daddy, I absorbed him. Although if you want to get technical, I do suppose the process of that did kill him-"

"How could you? How c-could you bring yourself to murder-"

"Tish tosh." Pan waved her paw, dismissive. "He had power, I wanted it. It's not like he was using it for anything-doddering old fool had given up beautiful, beautiful chaos, and for what? To kowtow to you little pony simpletons?" She scoffed, before pausing in thought. "....I didn't expect my plan to kill him, though."

"Monster." Moondancer coughed, and felt blood wet his lips. Pandora's blast had done more damage than he thought. "Monster."

"This again? Urgh." Pandora rolled her eyes and huffed, like she used to, when they were still friends, and the world made sense. "Always with this lecturing, Moony-'Oh boohoo, you're a monster, oh waah, Panny, you're hurting ponies, you're not this evil, please stop this, blah, blah, blah." Her eyes turned cold. "You're boring me, Moondancer. And you know what happens when I get bored."

Moondancer did know. He'd seen the horrors for himself. He scowled up at her, searching for strength. "You can do whatever you want to me, witch. You can't stop justice, nor the inevitable return to harmony. In the end, the princesses will prevail-"

"The princesses have been absolutely useless since they transferred their magic to Princess Twilight. What a brilliant plan that was." Pan scoffed, rolling her eyes. "We all know the heat death of the universe will come before Mommy Dearest will manage to kill me. Her attempts are getting laughable. Mom tries her darndest, but when the time comes for that last blow-" Pandora threw her paw up to her forehead and gave a sad, doe-eyed expression, lip quivering. "Please don't do it, Mom. I'll be good again, I promise. I'm still your little girl-I'm still Panny-I'll be good again, I love you, Mommy-" She burst suddenly into wild, joyous cackles. "That's all I have to do! And that killing blow never comes! She can't! I killed her husband, I turned Equestria inside out, I forced her friends and family into hiding-but Mommy can't do it, because she still sees me as some dumb little baby cubbie that needs to be protected." Pan laughed fondly. "It's sad, really."

"She loved you." Moondancer felt his eyes prick, and hated his weakness. Hated that after all this time, he still cared. Numbly, he let the tears fall. "...We all did."

Pandora paused, and for a moment seemed bothered by something-but then shook her head, smiling wide. "Aww, how sweet. I love you too, Moony. Out of all the ponies in the world, you're my absolute favorite yarnball to bat around." She seized him suddenly with magical telekinesis, levitating him high up into the air-before dropping him. He hit the ground with a dull thud, and she laughed at his pained groan. "I'll never get tired of it."

Moondancer didn't answer, because something in his chest had broken, and breathing was beginning to hurt. At his silence, Pandora glanced at him with poorly masked concern. She leaned down and cupped his face, stoking tenderly at his cheek.

"Aw, poor baby, think you might have a pierced lung there. Did Panny play with you too rough? Come here sweetie, I'll heal you up good as new, and then we can play some more-"

Moondancer gasped for breath. "....C-Cupcake." He managed to wheeze. "Cupcake...."

Pandora froze. Her expression became guarded, and she lifted her chin. "What about her?"

"This isn't...w-what she'd have wanted..."

"Oh, I'm sure it isn't." Pandora glared. "But she can't exactly speak up now, can she? She's out there rotting in her grave, and it's all-you-ponies' fault-" Pan's eyes began to glow, and the area around them began to charge with a malevolent energy, like air before a lighting strike. "She was the only one who ever loved me for me-my only true friend-but you ponies couldn't even let me have that, could you? You were all so scared of me, and what a child of chaos might do-you were all so afraid that somehow, someday, I'd turn into a monster. As though it was my destiny." Pan bit her lip, now struggling with tears.

"The ponies came for me. At night, when we weren't expecting it, they came, and...and my...my Cupcake s-stood in the way."

Pandora tried to discretely wipe at her face, but Moondancer caught the act. She continued on, speaking more to herself than to him.

"She was so brave...always so brave...." She whispered, wringing her paws...before her expression switched to wrath, and she snarled.
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"You wretched little beasts took her from me." Pandora seized Moondancer in her magic again, this time lifting him up to her face. "Murderers, all of you! Filthy, rotten little cowards! Do you know what it was like to watch my best friend-the pony I loved-bleed out in my arms?! My empathy evaporated on the spot." Flames erupted from the corners of Pandora's mouth, plumes of fire snaking between her bared teeth, like a risen dragon. Moondancer struggled feebly in her hold, fearing the fire, but she took her paw and gripped him tight around the throat.

"...You miserable little equines killed the one thing I cared about the most." Pandora's voice went low, quiet. Dangerous. "So now I'll destroy the things you ponies care about most. Your lives. Your loved ones. Your sanity. All of you-every rotten one of you-has something that can be taken away. And I will not rest until I've snatched it away from every single pony-until all of ponykind has paid for its great evil. I won't stop until Equestria rests in flames, and every one of your filthy, broken bodies lies burning in the wreckage." She leaned close, and Moondancer looked into eyes that blazed hot with hate-eyes that held no trace of the friend he'd once known.

The moment broke, and she dropped him, turning away. She spoke one last time, voice cold.


"Tell Mom to put that in a letter to Celestia."



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sloppy doodle is sloppy

so i mentioned over on my tumblr that my very first idea for Pandora was that she was supposed to grow up and become evil. Not harmless evil either-like, treating ponies as toys, actual threat to the world and reality as we know it-evil. That's why I named her Pandora-like the mythical character, she was supposed to unleash terrible things onto the world, and pretty much become the avatar of destruction, as Discord is the avatar of chaos. Anyway, I thought it'd be interesting to explore the idea in an alternate universe, and I thought it'd be cool to have Moondancer, of all ponies, be the hero, out to stop her. He's pretty determined, but evil!Pan is strong as shit, soooo his efforts aren't exactly going super well

Pandora isn't quite herself these days. When Cupcake was killed, Pan felt a piece of herself die, and she's been steadily going mad ever since. Her condition wasn't helped by absorbing (inadvertently killing) her father Discord, and having that great flood of chaos magic washing through her, twisting her mind....



this isn't canon btw, just an alt universe storyline (i call it the reverse AU)
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Black-Wren In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 06:02:29 +0000 UTC]

And Moondancer is the good guy and has overcome his angst.Β  Fear the day the two universes meet.Β  Good Pandora meeting evil Pandora and bad Moondancer meets heroic Moondancer.

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FandomThief In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 06:01:13 +0000 UTC]

I really like this AU. Though I love Moondancer as he is, it's interesting to see him as a hero character.

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harle2002 In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 05:44:17 +0000 UTC]

oh no dose this mean thatΒ Cupcake is like Pan's Black knight now? (is just thinking ahead)

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LittleSlimy In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 05:43:58 +0000 UTC]

So there is the alternate Universe where Pandora is a male, and there is a reverse Universe where Pandora is the villain.

So there is an Alternative Reverse Universe where Pandora is a male villain! Right?

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Attifer In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 05:40:18 +0000 UTC]

Very evocative piece. I'm curious, you say this is your imagery of a reverse AU, but had you ever considered it as some possible, far-flung future? Your previous drawings of Pandora in this style, as I recall, were many hundred or thousand years later when she had indeed become another avatar of chaos/destruction, when all the ponies of the Mane Six's time, including Pancake, former best friend, beau, and protector, were all long since dead. Given Moony's own incredible and mysteriously hinted at magical ability (looking at you covered cutie mark) from his Starswirl lineage, and the recent ponderings you've had with him conducting experiments on himself/more indulging for those of us who shamelessly ship he and Pan, would you think that there's some future where he lives long enough to see Pan's descent (or rise, as it were), and that by then he may have overcome his own troubles and hatreds, and go on to try and be a hero and stop Pan - or even become equally evil if not equally powerful, and be her consort?

Let's be honest I ask these things because that there stare is just too intense it's like mortal enemies and young adult novel soulmates rolled into one ugh

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suyuku-san In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 05:39:07 +0000 UTC]

I like a heroic Moondancer, he and even Pandora look amazing

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Unkownbrony52 In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 05:34:21 +0000 UTC]

So almost like the evil goku arc they had in dragonball super recently. I like the idea, especially if good pan causes an incident that drags evil pan over. Fantastic idea lop.

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SintelDragon In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 05:19:59 +0000 UTC]

he hug the spear as it impales the chest of elegance

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josecarlosmunoz12 In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 05:18:30 +0000 UTC]

Moony missed a headshot

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Badgerhead44 In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 05:15:15 +0000 UTC]

Awesome doodle 0-0
Also, does Pan's tongue look like that in the cannon universe too?

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Xiaahandrus In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 05:08:13 +0000 UTC]

I approve of this, the idea for the reverse AU, and Mooney should totally have a samurai hair style to go slay the dragon. C:

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Zorosilver In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 05:04:39 +0000 UTC]

...I-it looks really good...amazing in fact...

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AnUnfoldedPaperTiger In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 05:01:20 +0000 UTC]

I'll give Moony credit; takes someone that's seen some shit to stab the (what is it, quatrarch?)'s daughter in the noodle. Look at that face! He's probably twisting the spear-head in the wound while he's scowling...

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HyperSonicFire15 [2016-12-16 04:59:21 +0000 UTC]

"Sloppy doodle" she says. Ffff, everything you draw is amazing, even the things you say are sloppy. D: Much jealous. Love the glowy eyes

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cancottondy In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:56:45 +0000 UTC]

This is just an amazing piece, even if it is just a sloppy doodle. I love the intensity of his expression, the lightning, their manes... It has such a strong emotion behind it all. I think that this au is really interesting and would have loved to have seen how it all played out in the end.

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shadez8828 In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:52:53 +0000 UTC]

love it! also quick question do you ever do free commissions?Β 

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tomo-dachii In reply to shadez8828 [2016-12-16 14:43:14 +0000 UTC]

Those are requests, and her requests are always closed

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shadez8828 In reply to tomo-dachii [2016-12-18 23:28:51 +0000 UTC]

Aew, well hopefully I am emitter get real money or enough points.

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Dadjoke-Ness In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:52:17 +0000 UTC]

"You have unleased so many evils upon us, but you unleashed something good as well. You gave us hope, hope that you will be defeated, hope that I'll be strong enough to destroy you. Without this hope I was weak, pitiful even. But the hope that I could save my mothers, save your family, it gives me strength."

"My only regret is that sometime, somewhere, I'd wished we could be friends."

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CrystalQill In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:51:01 +0000 UTC]

"Oh, I've been impaled. [snicker]"

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DoodletheExpoodle In reply to CrystalQill [2016-12-16 04:53:52 +0000 UTC]

"Well, would you look at that?

I've been impaled."

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urzapw2000 In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:50:40 +0000 UTC]

oh no! not evil Panny!!
great picture!!
and let me guess...
Morning Glory helps him defeat her!
(she's Morning Glory and not Midnight Abyss because she's not 'evil' in this universe!)

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GypsyCharm In reply to urzapw2000 [2016-12-16 05:30:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeeeesssss!! That spear is coated with one of her potions to help weaken/kill the demigoddess!! *w*

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urzapw2000 In reply to GypsyCharm [2016-12-17 04:06:05 +0000 UTC]

that would be awesome!

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Shadowwolf14 In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:49:13 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting idea and I can't wait to see the dialogue, you do them so well!

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Oriana-jua In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:46:58 +0000 UTC]

SO MUCH DETAIL! This is amazing!

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Songal In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:46:46 +0000 UTC]

Hopefully he can buy Twilight and Discord the time they need to take out Panny. Even if it'll tear their hearts to shreds doing so.Β 

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Fluffomaru In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:46:34 +0000 UTC]

I'd be very interested in an alternate Moony.
I'd like to see how he would work without his issues making him a dick xD

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Rai-Knightshade In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:45:34 +0000 UTC]

Now, the real question is:
Does Cupcake become Panny's evil minion? Does she become a Guard to stop her? Does she become Moondancer's partner-in-crimefighting instead?Β 

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UniversesCollideInc In reply to Rai-Knightshade [2016-12-31 01:59:11 +0000 UTC]

Cupcake is dead. That's why Pandora went all evil; ponies all set to kill "the vile beast that would turn on them at a moment's notice" ended up killing Cupcake and Pandora snapped and in her anger and grief, proved them exactly right. Serves them right but she's gone way too far in punishing their entire race.

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:45:22 +0000 UTC]

Love this AU, although I'm glad it's not what you went with for your main universe

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cheshiref0x In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:43:21 +0000 UTC]

Dude this is cool as hell. Love the colors.

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existenceinanutshell In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:43:05 +0000 UTC]

Masterpiece.

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mlpdarksparx In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:43:01 +0000 UTC]

I so want to read the dialogue. Can't wait! XD

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Snail-Duck In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:42:32 +0000 UTC]

how did discord and twilight take to her corruption, that's my question.

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vvthegiraffe In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:42:25 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean this is sloppy? It's brilliant!!

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gay-gamzee In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:42:08 +0000 UTC]

holy SHIT this is an intense oneΒ 
Panny is fucking scary

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Pheonomon In reply to ??? [2016-12-16 04:41:14 +0000 UTC]

Looks so cool!

Cant wait for the dialogue!

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