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Published: 2001-08-27 21:29:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 284; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 45
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Everyone has an illusion in their lives, be it either a person that they can't quite understand, or their future. This is my first submission to DevArt, so please grade it. I want to know what I need to work on. Thanks!Related content
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I really like the blurry stuff, also the the rich colors. Overall I think it could use more text, but sometimes that isn't the best thing to do.
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actually the 'illusion' is the faded image in our minds... an 'illusion' perhaps ?
the face seemes so faded,
the eyes jaded,
the smile dry,
the spirit flies high.
the title suits perfectly, the image however could maybe use some more text, overall.. nicely done.
rajiv--
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I like it. The girl has a pleasant face. Whats the 'Illusion' font called?
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So.. you want a ruthless comment eh? Ok.. You could have probably ontinued the jagged effect on the white around the whole of the white part. Maybe you could have had blended the text in more. Other than that its not bad.
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