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LuxetUmbrarum — Who Am I?
Published: 2013-03-19 16:04:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 377; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 1
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Where is my body?,Where are my eyes?,
My mind is foggy,
Soulless, now I must hide.
Disembodied, decomposed,
Death around me, all in rows,
Ghostly sight, disappear,
For these flames will surely sear.
The ground O so cold,
People in it O so bold,
Now, my spirit, flies,
I wonder, Who Am I?
Lux et Umbrarum
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Aha I purposely broke the rules a little bit on this one and not for a particular reason. I'll admit this wasn't the best one I've written ( that honour goes to Demon In The Hallway) but I thought it flowed pretty well. And thank you
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Inspiration off of another...
And I forgot my leading lines before I could write them down 
Anyways! Very nice poem. I'm not seeing a regular rhyme pattern, but I do see a few lines that you may or may not have meant to rhyme [I'm pointing this out due to a lack of things for me to harp on about this poem 
And as a late welcome- Welcome to DA, even if I'm a month late
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