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Some fanwork of a fanfic: www.fimfiction.net/story/28978…

{Spoilers} Just some thoughts on the story.

While reading the story I had a feeling where it was going, in fact I knew exactly where it was going. Though that didnt stop me from wanting to believe what Aria was saying and that it wasn't as bad as it seemed. The ending was terribly bittersweet, I got the impression about moving on from the past and forgiveness and all the shit. Again that's just my impression. Aria, I thought, was a good choice. Being the most grounded of the three sirens, so in the end her being able to live and let live made sense. Sunset was also a good choice as well, I always thought of her as Twilight-lite of sorts who threw a hissy fit. The other Human 5 or whatever their call are ok I guess but Sunset has really grown into her character. You have a former villain coming to a subdued agreement that "You guys arent so bad" with another villain gave it some meaning. On top of that nothing in fanfic besides death was out of character or got too sappy. Towards the end I felt the bad news was delivered a little clunky but good enough. So all and all I really like it.

Added note: Her new outfit was nice just kinda meh to me so I changed it. This also gave me a reason to procrastinate.

Description
Some fanwork of a fanfic: www.fimfiction.net/story/28978…

{Spoilers} Just some thoughts on the story.

While reading the story I had a feeling where it was going, in fact I knew exactly where it was going. Though that didnt stop me from wanting to believe what Aria was saying and that it wasn't as bad as it seemed. The ending was terribly bittersweet, I got the impression about moving on from the past and forgiveness and all the shit. Again that's just my impression. Aria, I thought, was a good choice. Being the most grounded of the three sirens, so in the end her being able to live and let live made sense. Sunset was also a good choice as well, I always thought of her as Twilight-lite of sorts who threw a hissy fit. The other Human 5 or whatever their call are ok I guess but Sunset has really grown into her character. You have a former villain coming to a subdued agreement that "You guys arent so bad" with another villain gave it some meaning. On top of that nothing in fanfic besides death was out of character or got too sappy. Towards the end I felt the bad news was delivered a little clunky but good enough. So all and all I really like it.

Added note: Her new outfit was nice just kinda meh to me so I changed it. This also gave me a reason to procrastinate.