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Published: 2009-03-05 04:13:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 50; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Page 03... I've definitely been too ambitious for this project, I'll never finish as many pages as I want by Saturday! D:I fail it, it is drawing hands of the dying...
Once again, this goes to scraps once the completed page is done...
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Acisej [2009-03-05 04:20:08 +0000 UTC]
I'd add more motion to the sword, as that's the only thing that's bugging me.
And a tip, it's more effective to show the moment after the impact rather than while the sword is still in the neck.
Maybe draw the head severed and a few inches away from the body, and illustrate the sword-swipe going through rather than drawing the sword itself.
For page layout...I think it's fine. C:
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