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maidenofwar — Lose it all
Published: 2008-10-26 18:07:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 602; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 3
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If your promises don’t last, then neither do your feelingsAnd if passion fades, then so do all the reeling thoughts in my head… that need to be beside you… to hold you…
I'm choking... choked by this... loathing...
to myself and all it antails... to the sky and everything that fails...
My laughter more hysterical then before… that door is to remain locked…
The key to be thrown away… for what it means today…
I’ve fallen yet again… and there is no one there. Never has been. Nothing but a figment of my imagination, of what I would have seen… had I not been blinded by this all… FEAR THE FALL.
It can be leading. It can be… deceiving
Flowers? Roses? They wilt and they fade and they die.
And I, for one, refuse to cry.
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I like this poem, but everyone needs to cry sometimes
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yh... you're absolutely right ^ ^' but this was written at a precise moment when I felt I couldn't, but hey... that passes by...
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Well I'm glad you agree with me 
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I really like this, it's very powerful and moving.
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Wishing to bottle your emotions, to accomplish that, is to kill yourself on the inside... The pain it brings may attempt to knock down the walls for a time and fail, but everything erodes over time... That is when life truly goes to hell...
Words, though powerful they may be, aren't the strongest things have we.
Sorry... Ranting...
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but hey, you're good with words ^ ^'
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Thanks...
Not really... Lol
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That's really beutiful (what ~suna-rose351 wrote). Maybe in a weird kinda way, but non the less, you have a way with words.
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Your welcome. I really did like it.
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Some...
Check out my page...
I have some up...
Others I might put up later...
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I definatly will.In fact I'll go do it right now.
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Your welcome. I did go read them. Though not as many as I would have liked cause my mom was screaming at me to finish my homework.
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Thank you, again...
Lol
That's why I'm not usually allowed on the computer during the week...
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Yeah. I used to only be allowed to go on on weekends but now I just kinda go on without asking. I'm really suprised I haven't gotten in any trouble for it yet.
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Lol
I'll ask if I can get on if I don't have any homework...
So I've been on a good bit during the week lately due to exams...
I don't study, so what else is there to do, right?
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Yeah. Now that I think about it, I normally don't study either. The only time I do is if I absolutly know I'm going to fail, 'cause if I fail that doesn't go over well with my parents. They just want me to get into a good collage when I'm older.
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Same as mine...
My daddy said something about my sis and I studying everyday this week almost even though he knows that we're both just like him and never do...
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This is...
Wow. I love the ending. You stubborn git!
Ah I love you really.
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