oneofthefallen [2005-09-10 21:42:17 +0000 UTC]

AHHH~! o_o nekked guy *dies* x_X lol spiffy color peoples steffi~

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sonialeong [2005-09-10 10:46:35 +0000 UTC]

Nya ha, blue bish! ^___^ Dynamic pose, lovely arm muscles.

My 2 cents:
Chest area. His chest muscles are too wide, what you need to do is show a little more of his back & sides on the outer edges of his chest. An example of what I've done for a how-to-draw book is below:
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Crotch area - again, show that knob! XD It helps to separate the tops of the thighs.

Left foot - looks like you had a little trouble with this. I think the image would look stronger if it wasn't front facing. If his toe was actually pointing to his left, side-on, and leveled with his right foot it would look ideal, although you'd have to re-work the muscles you've airbrushed on his left leg.

By the way, before any of Steff's friends flame me, I'm her sister, so I'm allowed to be mean!! XD

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dicipleofthelie [2005-09-09 20:18:38 +0000 UTC]

you are much the better drawer than i

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