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Published: 2011-08-16 05:54:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 4139; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 28
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SAY YES SHINICHI I'M SO TIRED TO DRAWING YOU I AUTOMATICALLY DREW CONAN AND AM NOW UNABLE TO EVEN WATCH THE PAGE BECAUSE I FAILED SO HARD.
There's so much mistakes in this page because Gin captivated my brains and all I could think was GinGinGin
So I like only the first panel and the last one, which came a little bit... I knew he'd be scary but...
GIN
I'll stop this now. I'm so sorrryyyh but I want to keep going with the story and I have no time or interest to redraw this scrap. I should stop inking tired when I have no idea what I'm doing or how I possibly could make things better.
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Detective Conan ยฉ Gosho Aoyama
Story&Art ยฉ Me
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Ps: I'm not sure can I finish the next page for tomorrow. I'm going to the wool dyeing course today and the backround still needs colours. We'll see then.
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This is coming along so well!!! I absolutely love every page of it so far... I don't think this one is bad or a scrap :)
Also I wanted to mention I love the purple trees like they are shown in the second panel... 
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But it is
Oh the trees (someone realized it!) I was trying to find some psychotic atmosphere with them
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GIN!!!!
*joins the Gin fanatic club*
OH GOSH HE LOOKS SO NIGHTMARE INDUCING IT'S AMAZING
SHRINK SHINICHI SHRINK
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Wow, I love how you do Gin! Its scary! ;D I'm curious how you'll make it so Shinichi shrinks in the well. <:3
GRAMMAR CHECK! In the bottom of the left hand corner in that panel, You said "Ah, I don't complain" it should be, "Ah, don't complain"
<3 just trying to help with English~
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The well thing will happen later >:3
GRAMMR CHECK was wrong. Gin is talking to himself. He's not going to complain the thing Shinichi is stupid
But anyway, if you find some errors tell me!
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Please excuse me if I'm butting in, but I think the "Ah, I don't complain" might be correct. :) The way I interpreted that speech bubble is that Gin wishes he could have 'done this' years ago, but it's easier now anyway, so he's not complaining.
But you could be correct! I do agree that for someone that knows English very well it sounds just a little strange on the tongue. Maybe the "Ah I don't complain" should even go on the end of the sentence... Well anyway I think we'll have to wait for Mareliini's word on it all, haha ;)
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Ohhhhh, it was Gin talking to himself! NO WONDER, i was confused. xD Well in my case I'd fix that to "I won't complain" O3O Makes it a little more clear. Do you speak native english because if you ask me, I get a B in my english classes all the time and I'm never in advanced english. Even if I can only speak english right now, I still fail at it. >__> Stupid complicated language.
I'll keep doing this grammar check Mareliini xD just to help your english a bit. <-- trying to not sound like a know-it-all jerk.
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I'm stick in the way I speek in my native language ~
You were right btw.
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Mutta hรคnhรคn on!
: D
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I also like the last panel, btw. (Obviously) I smiled alot when I saw it!!
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GIIIIIIN!!!
I think it looks awesome, btw!
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Red eyes was brother's idea.
Thanks ~ <3
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Oki!^^
And you're wellcome!
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