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Published: 2018-11-03 02:22:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1216; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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This entree is form my old friend: DreamPuppeteer .Before I start, I will say that I forgot to consider adding the climate conditions for these redesigns. So despite this clearly being a desert design when I have no desert areas in consideration, I can't judge it for that because I didn't include those details in the guidelines in the contest.
I'm not sure what I was expecting from these entrees, but a BREAD CAMEL wasn't it. A fighting staff with a butter knife and a spoon on the ends is hilarious. In general, this design is creative, but I can see where the original design could have been portrayed in this way. This character is physically composed of peanut butter and jelly, as one might think. Despite having two entrees for this character, nobody considered creating strange gloopy hair. I can't take away points for that, but it is something I want to mention.
The problems that lead this to fourth place are a little more complicated than the previous two. The camel is very large and covered in loose hair. The time required to animate something so insignificant in the grand scheme of things would only delay real progress. For the actual focus of this entree, it's not because of the guidelines or the rules this time. A character who is literally made of two sandwich fillings wouldn't look this serious, or even carry a weapon. The post (listed below) had this almost evil glare to her. I'm not sure what would trigger this. I can combine many of these traits with the other entree for this character to make something better than either two alone, but if I had to choose between them, it wouldn't be this one.
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DreamPuppeteer [2018-11-03 05:56:57 +0000 UTC]
Oooh, I see :0c I don't mind the critique, and this was fun anyway! TBH I just mainly incorporated the colors itself into the design, with only mild references to the PB&J motif she had. That's probably why my entry fell a bit, I was mainly thinking a reference rather than an explicit idea of design.
But again, it was fun, dude, and congrats/looking forward to how the others did!
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