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- NAME: Nyles
- NICKNAME: sausage
- AGE: 23
- BIRTHDAY: October 29
- GENDER: Male
- NATURE: Relaxed
- POKEMON / HUMAN: Emboar
- HOMETOWN: Somewhere in Unova.
- HISTORY: When Nyles was a Tepig, he helps his parents running a vendor selling breakfast. He loves sandwiches very much, because making them is fun. There is another important thing that Nyles has to do in the mornings besides breakfast, radio excercise, Nyles used to do excercise with his parents in the mornings before breakfast. Although he doesn't live with his family anymore, he still does excercise in the mornings. After evolving to Pignite, he moved out and live alone. He thinks that eating breakfast is very important, so he must eats breakfast, and then in a morning, one of his friends had breakfast with him, the breakfast Nyles made was so delicious that his friend suggested Nyles should run a vendor selling breakfast like his parents as well, that's why he sells breakfast in mornings. Doing excercises and selling breakfast, Nyles might have busy mornings, so after selling breakfast, he always has a slow life, He enjoys fishing very much. He has a pet, Tympole, it was caught by fishing . The Tympole loves to eat cucumber, so Nyles gave it a nickname, Kyuri. Nyles also got a nickname "sausage" in the pevious town. One day, he asked his friend a question "Boy, I wonder what is a sausage made from? my parents never told me..." after 4.99 seconds of silence, his friend laughed, "...Why don't you ask someone in Pokette Town? I bet they know the true answer," said his friend. After this, Nyles decided to move to Pokette Town for the true answer...
- HOBBY: Fishing, making sandwiches.
- JOB: He sells breakfast sandwiches in mornings.
- FAVORITE FOOD: tuna melt
- FAVORITE BERRY: Pinap Berry
- CATCHPHRASE: boy
- ACCESSORIES: A blue striped shirt.
SORRY FOR BAD ENGLISH >
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Comments: 57
You wouldn't get banned for this. in fact, your english is quite alright. As long as people can understand you, and in which case we can, you'll be alright. c:
I'd take Shade's advice and add a little more to his history, but it's alright for the most part! He looks great~
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Oh!! Really? Thank you very much!!
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ah~ so you finally did it~ I'd suggest having a bit more history than you currently have, about his life before Pokette and [perhaps some events that might have helped shape his personality?], but so far it looks alright. You do have several months time though, so no rush ahaha.
and your english looks good enough, I think you're good enough to get in, good luck in the spring~
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