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Master-Kankuro — analytic sheet of Ryu

Published: 2008-09-26 09:26:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 7180; Favourites: 74; Downloads: 58
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Description Huzzah!!!
I planned that a while ago, but I realized it now!!!
To draw an analytic sheet of my beloved master-piece: THE DRAGON-PUPPET!!!!

PLEASE READ MY COMMENT, IF U WANT TO UNDERSTAND MY DRAWING!!!

Ans sorry if there are TONS of grammer and spelling-mistakes. I don´t like critics, but it´s better if u can report me of some, so I can edit it.


Name: Ryu (woah...how CREATIVE!!!

Master: Midoriryu no Lori
Creator: The Midoriryu-Clan

Height: 10 meters

Lenght: around 22 meters (Yeah...the tail is VERY long)

Weight: heavy (unable to carry without a scroll but able to FLY with help of the master)

Abilities: (I sepereated them into the bodyparts)

Head: Yeah, for shure it can breath fire like a REAL dragon. But the user can choose poisoned needles too for shooting. To hide or poison the opponent, the normal smoke/posioned smoke comes out from the nose. So there is no need for bombs. A speacila feature is the head-blade.
It can used as a battering ram (VEEERY destructice!!!) or as a huge metal-boomerang, which ALWAYS returns to the original place.

Torso: (The "opened-cracked" part, which I´ve drawn here is just becuase the door-shape isn´t biig enough to showw all details.)
This huge part can used as a shelter for around 4 or 5 people. But the VERY speacial meaning is only suitable for the Mídori-Ryu-Clan! U can see a weird symbol on the ground. (It SHOULD be the japanese symbol of "Heart"..I HOPE it´s right. )
When a clan´s member sits on the "Heart´s place" and activade the "Ryu-gan" he/she can "melt" the soul with the puppet´s body and "bring the puppet to life". So the user controlls the dragon-puppet from the interior. It´s a huge advantage for the user, because the puppet CAN´T feel any pain.
U can see how it looks like. Green chakra forms a shell, which doesn´t let the user leave the place
, if he/she DOESN´T want. The user in the Chakra-shell sits crossed-legged and holds a smaller chakra-bullet with strings coming from their hands. The bullet also shows the symbol of "heart"...so it IS the heart from that puppet.
The eyes changes too. Instead of beeing expressionless and white, they become green and show expressions.
When THIS way of controlling thsis puppet happens, NO ONE can enter the torso too for using it as a shelter!
But thus part can protect the usee from the exterior too. Iron blades can move out from each "stripe-like" slot.
The schema on the right side, shows where and HOW they look like.
So a body-slam WITH these blades is VERY dangerous for the victim.

Wings: Although they look oo short and the puppet looks to heavy, they´re ABLE to let it fly!!

Arms, legs and claws: Each claw has a tiny pipe over it, from where the poison can drop out. The claw-hands also can be used as hands. (grapping, trowing...)
The upper parts (arms and legs) have hidden long spikes. (which are poisoned too). Two are even and two are rought.

Tail: The tail also has many hidden spikes and blades. So it´s pretty effective to hit/stab with that tail WITH all these poisoned weapons.

Other abilities: There aren´t none, but a normal puppeteer can use it from the exterior. He7she normally sits on the "furry-part" of the throat. To "ride" and conroll it.
Only the Mídori-Ryu clan-members can use it from the interior. And he/she don´t need to be a puppeteer before. The "dragonish-instinct" leads the user how to controll it from the interior side. The only thing, which a clan´s member needs to practise is how to "feel" that big puppet-body .


Weakpoints: Normally this puppet ISN´T destrucable by NORMAL weapons or force.
That´s because the material is speacial-hardenet by the clan´s dragons. U can distinguish these materials from others, by holding it in the light. A faint metallic shine of green (for EACH metal part) and red (for EACH wooden part) is visitable on it.
But there one (ONLY ONE!) way to defeat it. It´s damage able by the SELFMADE weapons OR the clan´s dragons themselves. So if someones conrolls it from the interior, a stab through the "hearts-place" is MORE than fatal. For both. (The dragon and the user).

The scrool: U also can see the original size of the sealing scroll of this puppet.
I allow to submit THIS picture following clubs:
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Comments: 169

GNGTNT105 In reply to ??? [2008-09-27 00:40:47 +0000 UTC]

so freaken sweet! Maybe I should be Kankuro next year! I WILL MAKE MY OWN HAT BECAUSE I WON'T WEAR AN ALTURED SKI MASK!
nice I like dragon puppets!

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Master-Kankuro In reply to GNGTNT105 [2008-09-27 11:48:22 +0000 UTC]

Thx for all..and yeah..I can imagine taht your ski mask is pretty hot for your head. Good luck.

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ShikuroxKanno In reply to ??? [2008-09-26 22:32:44 +0000 UTC]

now i know much more, very useful! but i'm still sticking to my word that Ryu isn't going to help so muich when Caral shows her true-self
(that's without her medicien)

errors again, that i found.


"beloved master-pice" should be "beloved master-piece"

"So no needing of bombs." should be "There's no need for bombs." -OR- "Bombs aren't needed"


"which don´t let the user leave the place" should be "which doesn´t let the user leave the place"


"if he/she DON´T want" should be "if he/she DOESN´T want"

"Chrakra-shell sit´s crossed-legged", you don't need Sit's, sits is better. Sit is a verb and a verb can't have ownership.

"NONE can enter the torso too" should be "NO ONE can enter the torso too "

"The tail also have many hidden spikes" should be "The tail also has many hidden spikes"

"To are even and two are rought." should be "Two are even and two are rough."

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Master-Kankuro In reply to ShikuroxKanno [2008-09-27 11:55:23 +0000 UTC]

OMG!! SOO many mistakes!!!
U saved me from a big embarressing disaster.
And yeah...I HATE that third-person form...
Thank u agagin.
Yeah..I KNOW that u made Cararl "resist" agains 99,9% enemies/traps/puppets or ANYTHING ELSE..TT__TT
But I still wanted to make clear how my dragon puppet works.

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ShikuroxKanno In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-27 13:20:47 +0000 UTC]

yes many is the corerect word. i think i missed one or two but i read it over again just in case
and now....
time to read ur other devations for errors!
....that's going to take a while
understandable, but caral is not invincible

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Master-Kankuro In reply to ShikuroxKanno [2008-09-27 17:18:37 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!!! "Mistake-scanning by is now in process...please wait a bit..."

That´s really-really kind from you.
I know it means some "reveals" of embarressing mistakes, but u take much time for doing that...and I appreaciate that VERY much.

Ahh good that u understood me AND make shure that she´s NOT invincible.

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ShikuroxKanno In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-27 17:38:54 +0000 UTC]


it's my pleasure to help since you help me with german.
no OC or cannon should be invincible, no, that's not fun

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Master-Kankuro In reply to ShikuroxKanno [2008-09-27 19:43:08 +0000 UTC]

Shure thing, espeacially because of your "speacial" connection with Germany and your mom/family.
Yeah and that´s ABSOLUTELY true my dear.
But I´m still curious if there will be a scene where Caral, Pein and Madara Uchia shows that they´re weak agaginst something.

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ShikuroxKanno In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-27 19:46:49 +0000 UTC]

well, in my next NUS chapter, you might get a little 'something'

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Master-Kankuro In reply to ShikuroxKanno [2008-09-27 19:49:02 +0000 UTC]

UHHH!! That sounds interesting!!!

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ShikuroxKanno In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-27 19:51:27 +0000 UTC]

by tommorrow i'll be done
i'm checking it today

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Master-Kankuro In reply to ShikuroxKanno [2008-09-27 19:57:41 +0000 UTC]

U must have a LOT time AND u´re bored or...
But I KNOW u want to help me..THAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANKS!!!

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ShikuroxKanno In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-27 19:59:18 +0000 UTC]

no to the 1st and 2nd
but to the 3rd, i do want to help ^_^

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Master-Kankuro In reply to ShikuroxKanno [2008-09-27 21:39:07 +0000 UTC]

Awww!!!! Sooo über-kawaii!!!
After that all, I´m in dept to you...what can I do for u????

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ShikuroxKanno In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-27 21:47:12 +0000 UTC]

hmm....well my anniversavry is coming up and a gift from u would be very sweet and thoughtful.
or a piccy of Caral (ur version) in action with Gaara.

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Master-Kankuro In reply to ShikuroxKanno [2008-09-27 22:18:49 +0000 UTC]

COOL!!! One day before Naruto´s B-Day???
YOSH...I´ll do that.
I HOPE I´ll done untill that..I HAVE to do that!!!!

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ShikuroxKanno In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-27 22:26:01 +0000 UTC]

yep, u can surprise me but i would like to have one of the two that i ask
or both,
which ever you like

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Master-Kankuro In reply to ShikuroxKanno [2008-09-27 22:47:24 +0000 UTC]

A surprise sounds COOL!!! :thumsup: Be prepared!!!

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ShikuroxKanno In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-27 22:54:18 +0000 UTC]

i will

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Master-Kankuro In reply to ShikuroxKanno [2008-09-27 23:06:54 +0000 UTC]

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R-Trooper In reply to ??? [2008-09-26 21:55:39 +0000 UTC]

wow thats complicated... lol

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Master-Kankuro In reply to R-Trooper [2008-09-27 11:57:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank u.

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R-Trooper In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-27 12:40:35 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure

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Master-Kankuro In reply to R-Trooper [2008-09-27 17:21:57 +0000 UTC]

:3

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chemisis In reply to ??? [2008-09-26 16:25:27 +0000 UTC]

This is great sensai ^-^

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Master-Kankuro In reply to chemisis [2008-09-26 16:30:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank my dear.

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chemisis In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-26 16:39:55 +0000 UTC]

np ^-^

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Master-Kankuro In reply to chemisis [2008-09-26 17:22:21 +0000 UTC]

^^

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chemisis In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-26 20:29:35 +0000 UTC]

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Bekkalada In reply to ??? [2008-09-26 12:51:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow really awesome! 8D

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Master-Kankuro In reply to Bekkalada [2008-09-26 15:36:27 +0000 UTC]


I wonder how Kankuro will react???....D´OH!!! I already HAD drawn it.
Thank u a lot.

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Bekkalada In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-27 02:16:28 +0000 UTC]

Kankuro's reaction would be somethng like:
haha

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Master-Kankuro In reply to Bekkalada [2008-09-27 12:10:25 +0000 UTC]

YEAH!! Indeed!! That´s EXACTLY what I imagine!!! CUUUTE!!!

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Bekkalada In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-27 14:10:48 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Master-Kankuro In reply to Bekkalada [2008-09-27 17:14:17 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Bekkalada In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-28 01:44:07 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Master-Kankuro In reply to Bekkalada [2008-09-28 11:41:15 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Bekkalada In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-28 12:08:12 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Master-Kankuro In reply to Bekkalada [2008-09-28 12:31:59 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Bekkalada In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-28 12:53:03 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Master-Kankuro In reply to Bekkalada [2008-09-28 13:00:21 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Bekkalada In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-28 13:08:35 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Master-Kankuro In reply to Bekkalada [2008-09-28 14:44:41 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Bekkalada In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-29 00:48:02 +0000 UTC]

Awesome ^_^ I think you both have great story lines

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Master-Kankuro In reply to Bekkalada [2008-09-29 12:31:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. That´s why I´m still glad, that we work together on that comic. ^^

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Bekkalada In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-30 02:23:13 +0000 UTC]

yeah

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Master-Kankuro In reply to Bekkalada [2008-09-30 15:14:59 +0000 UTC]

^^

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MaayanBarak In reply to ??? [2008-09-26 10:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh goodies ^^
It looks awesome, the dragon puppet looks cool i see he is equiped with weapons all over his body
and i really liked the idea of controlling him from the inside
Good job, you can have this piece of cheese .

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Master-Kankuro In reply to MaayanBarak [2008-09-26 12:01:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank u for the "cheese of honor"!!!
Yeah..I thought: "This is a HUGE puppet, so there is a LOOT of space for weapons. "

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MaayanBarak In reply to Master-Kankuro [2008-09-26 13:13:46 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^^ always glad to hand the cheese of honor to people who deserve it ^^
Yeah it sure is huge seems quite dangerous wouldnt wanna make him angry

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