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Thanks to translate this part2 ^^Thanks to
to offer their help and also to send their translations
(use the translation of Toniasis, being the first who sent him (not that the other translations will be ill) .. remember that not very good English XD)
use la traduccion de Toniasis, por ser la primera que lo envio (no por que las demas traducciones estarian mal) ..recuerden que no se muy bien el ingles XD
end of chapter 1
here special halloween: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
here the introduction: fav.me/d5gq1b1
MLP1 part 1 here: fav.me/d5m5n26
MLP1 part 2 here: fav.me/d5onjh7
MLP2 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 6 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 7 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 1 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 2 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 6 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 7 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
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Comments: 1038
Ghosthole In reply to mauroz [2012-12-23 17:09:54 +0000 UTC]
Thunderlane is best pony. Remember that, everypony.
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Freilaclanbarin In reply to ??? [2012-12-22 03:00:47 +0000 UTC]
Interesting. 1st of all let me say I've been enjoying this quiet a bit! ^.^
I also have been loving the art work... however at times I feel like your work gets a little wordy. I don't really have any authority on this type of work but... I feel like less is more in terms of words for this type of stuff. I think the best point I could use as an example of less words was in the last page when Pikie's attention was caught by the light out of Twi's window. You did a wonderful job showing her attention being caught out the window by your art work and didn't need the narration bit. You do good art work! Trust that you're getting the idea across a bit more! ^.^
Asides from that "less is more bit" ...I'm really enjoying this! I loved the Twilight/Pinkie Pie moments you had... like Pinkie Pie drooling on Twilight!
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mauroz In reply to Freilaclanbarin [2012-12-23 04:41:42 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much and most of all for your constructive criticism to help me and take into account ^^
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Freilaclanbarin In reply to mauroz [2012-12-26 22:17:45 +0000 UTC]
No problem! Hope to continue to see good work from ya!
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Centaur71 In reply to ??? [2012-12-22 01:32:55 +0000 UTC]
so THAT'S how (Manga) Queen Chrysalis was created!
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spritefan10 In reply to ??? [2012-12-22 00:58:57 +0000 UTC]
Let's keep anime AWAY from ponies, please?
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mauroz In reply to spritefan10 [2012-12-23 04:37:34 +0000 UTC]
quiet. has the right not to see XD
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cheshcat2 In reply to spritefan10 [2012-12-22 03:21:42 +0000 UTC]
screw you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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happygnome034 In reply to ??? [2012-12-22 00:30:30 +0000 UTC]
woo hoo another one. these are great cant wait for more. 8)
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EmmyMay00 In reply to mauroz [2012-12-24 13:43:06 +0000 UTC]
Ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh. Must be a changling. *i blush* Silly me!
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church2550 In reply to ??? [2012-12-21 18:33:19 +0000 UTC]
Red:....a changeling....that makes sense....somehow
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galapin In reply to ??? [2012-12-21 16:39:02 +0000 UTC]
Nextnextnextnextplizplizplizplizplizpliz
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Firedancer1233 In reply to ??? [2012-12-21 16:14:09 +0000 UTC]
give us the next one !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >
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VegemiteGuzzler In reply to ??? [2012-12-21 15:52:03 +0000 UTC]
woo, this is turning out great!
but awww....
Discord's missing his goatee...
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martofski In reply to ??? [2012-12-21 15:51:05 +0000 UTC]
OMG rule 63 Crysalis o_O this is getting more epic with each strip. Keep it up!
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martofski In reply to martofski [2012-12-24 13:25:30 +0000 UTC]
Not gonna trick me, nuh-uh. It's Crysalis shapeshifted into a male!
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TheJokeKing33 In reply to martofski [2012-12-21 16:16:24 +0000 UTC]
It's a changeling, not Crystalis.
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shinybob606 In reply to ??? [2012-12-21 15:26:16 +0000 UTC]
I gotta say im really loving your artwork in these... Its probably some of the best ive seen in the fandom. The best in terms of comic artwork by far.
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av1art In reply to ??? [2012-12-21 15:23:24 +0000 UTC]
[Looks at 6th panel...]
....
Twilight Sparkle's Jewish?
On a completely unrelated note- This is awesome! Looking forward for the next part!
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thewickedrainbow In reply to ??? [2012-12-21 14:53:01 +0000 UTC]
holy shit i think im in love with Celestia 0.0
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Konrax In reply to ??? [2012-12-21 13:13:17 +0000 UTC]
Pinkie pie using her powers that easy is like when Goku did the Kamehameha for the first time by seeing master roshi do his. That was the SAME face twilight did that master roshi did
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mauroz In reply to Konrax [2012-12-23 04:28:14 +0000 UTC]
XD now that you say you are quite right
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Masdragonflare In reply to ??? [2012-12-21 11:34:07 +0000 UTC]
what
the
buuuuuuuuuck
Nice man °O°
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