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DCarrier In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 02:40:33 +0000 UTC]

I don't think the translation was very good this time.

Are we going to see more Octavia, Vinyl, and Derpy? More humanized background ponies in general?

I wonder what Lyra will be like.

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mauroz In reply to DCarrier [2013-02-05 15:35:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks .. yeah. all appear occasionally

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Sceptilianblade In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 02:39:50 +0000 UTC]

Hoo, boy. The grammar here could use some touching up. Perhaps I could extend my assistance in the future?

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mauroz In reply to Sceptilianblade [2013-02-05 15:34:22 +0000 UTC]

please any help is welcome ^^

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Sceptilianblade In reply to mauroz [2013-02-05 16:10:05 +0000 UTC]

Cool. Just have Riokenng send me the translated script and I'll make any changes that may be necessary.

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GreaterGood03 In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 02:37:26 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic art as always tho I wish the translation was better.

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mauroz In reply to GreaterGood03 [2013-02-05 15:33:34 +0000 UTC]

sorry I do not understand English well -_-

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Lastunusedname In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 02:35:57 +0000 UTC]

A good page of a good story, as usual. Very nice use of clothes as wings and tails!

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mauroz In reply to Lastunusedname [2013-02-05 15:32:35 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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Infinite-Scratch In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 02:35:20 +0000 UTC]

pinkie kicked him in the....NOT COOL PINKIE NOT COOL

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mauroz In reply to Infinite-Scratch [2013-02-05 15:32:13 +0000 UTC]

XDD

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jinjaublood In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 02:34:23 +0000 UTC]

Hoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit

Did you draw all this????

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mauroz In reply to jinjaublood [2013-02-05 15:31:44 +0000 UTC]

XD thanks

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SomeKindaSpy In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 02:33:21 +0000 UTC]

There are a LOT of grammatical errors. Otherwise, this isn't half-bad!

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mauroz In reply to SomeKindaSpy [2013-02-05 15:31:00 +0000 UTC]

thanks already corrected most ^^

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SomeKindaSpy In reply to mauroz [2013-02-05 15:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Cool~

Just remember the difference between "your", and "you're".

^_^

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Darkamerion In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 02:31:01 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwwwwwww octavia :3

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mauroz In reply to Darkamerion [2013-02-05 15:29:33 +0000 UTC]

XDD

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Darkamerion In reply to mauroz [2013-02-05 23:53:10 +0000 UTC]

lo que son octavia , fleur de liz, luna, y derpy las adoro n.n

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cosmicchan In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 02:28:47 +0000 UTC]

oooooh i so love this series.... keep up the awesome work! i really love the character designs... like so much... best humanized ponies ive like ever seen <3

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mauroz In reply to cosmicchan [2013-02-05 15:29:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^

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KenReels In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 02:23:37 +0000 UTC]

I've loved every single panel of this series. You do tell an unbelievable yarn of a story. It also helps that I like the influences that are in it. Anyway can't wait for the second part.

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mauroz In reply to KenReels [2013-02-05 15:28:45 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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JaxsonJaguar In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 02:21:13 +0000 UTC]

I really hope you are able to put these in some kind of book form be it a traditional manga or a comic book. Either way I'd gladly buy one.

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mauroz In reply to JaxsonJaguar [2013-02-05 15:28:10 +0000 UTC]

XD could not because it is based on a Hasbro product

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NovDecJan In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 02:20:06 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome...I wish it was a anime for real, I'd watch it.

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mauroz In reply to NovDecJan [2013-02-05 15:25:36 +0000 UTC]

XD thanks but someone else does .. I do not do animations XD

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WolfRaid In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 02:16:33 +0000 UTC]

some corrections here:
genious -> genius
problems has started -> problems have started
because its -> because, it's

i think that's about all i could find.
asides these errors, this story is really getting interesting!

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mauroz In reply to WolfRaid [2013-02-05 15:24:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks for help in finding these errors ^^

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WolfRaid In reply to mauroz [2013-02-06 01:07:19 +0000 UTC]

no problem!
glad to help!

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RiokennG3 In reply to WolfRaid [2013-02-05 03:08:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for pointing that out, I don't know where my head was, I'll update the translation sheet.

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WolfRaid In reply to RiokennG3 [2013-02-05 03:12:57 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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PaladinBrony In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 02:14:01 +0000 UTC]

I love this! I love how Pinkie has the most basic of logic and it makes the most sense. She kicked a dog in the nuts! That was hilarious! Good comic! Wanting more all the time! Reminds me of Sailor Moon and Ikkitousen! Pinkie totally reminds me of Hakufu Sonsaku. You are

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mauroz In reply to PaladinBrony [2013-02-05 15:23:38 +0000 UTC]

XD thank you very much ^^

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Proncus In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 02:08:27 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome, and Derpy is so cute xD

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mauroz In reply to Proncus [2013-02-05 15:22:46 +0000 UTC]

XD yeah

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Kissy-Fishy In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 02:04:42 +0000 UTC]

Simply gorgeous. I'm so glad you've translated these. Can't wait for more!

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mauroz In reply to Kissy-Fishy [2013-02-05 15:22:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you for watching ^^

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wanderingbishop In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 02:02:24 +0000 UTC]

Various monsters powered by crystals that need to be collected? I think I saw this in Sailor Moon once

Your drawing skill is sharpening up - I can actually see a visible improvement between this chapter and the introduction. The story's also coming along nicely, and it feels just like the first season of one of those episodic animes from the early 90's.

By the way, if I were to go back and do a grammar check on the existing comics and send you a transcript with an edited version of the text, would that be useful? Or would going back and rewriting all the speech bubbles be a massive headache? XD

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mauroz In reply to wanderingbishop [2013-02-05 15:21:54 +0000 UTC]

any help will always be welcome if it helps understand the story better ..thanks ^^

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superpika293 In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 01:58:19 +0000 UTC]

I really liked the other characters that got to appear but you forgot to remove the upside down question mark(forgot what it's called) from Derpy's thought bubble. I also really like how Pinkie gets power over water. Would that mean Rarity gets power over crystals?

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mauroz In reply to superpika293 [2013-02-05 15:19:47 +0000 UTC]

If something but stones thanks ^^

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superpika293 In reply to mauroz [2013-02-06 01:44:42 +0000 UTC]

Are all of the mane six going to have powers like that? As I typed this a picture of Fluttershy breathing fire popped into my head.

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Gariandos In reply to superpika293 [2013-02-26 10:45:47 +0000 UTC]

I could see Applejack having earth manipulation powers.

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superpika293 In reply to Gariandos [2013-02-26 14:27:38 +0000 UTC]

But rarity will probably have crystals, Applejack should have plant life, hence her calling the apples her friends.

PS your icon reminds me of Ed, Edd and Eddy.

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Gariandos In reply to superpika293 [2013-02-26 14:37:53 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, a friend of mine drew my EEnE OC a while back and I've had that face as my avatar ever since.

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superpika293 In reply to Gariandos [2013-02-26 16:00:28 +0000 UTC]

Nice. What did you think about Fluttershy breathing fire? I think it'd be hilarious.

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Gariandos In reply to superpika293 [2013-02-26 16:46:22 +0000 UTC]

I know having the hiccups would be a pain. xP

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superpika293 In reply to Gariandos [2013-02-26 17:30:41 +0000 UTC]

Yes they would.

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Gariandos In reply to superpika293 [2013-02-26 17:32:49 +0000 UTC]

Having an urge to sneeze would probably be worse.

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