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BaselessConclusion In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 23:19:29 +0000 UTC]

Some of the narration is unnecessary. I can see the hole in the fabric of space time and the giant monster, thank you very much. I can figure out Steven has noticed them once he attacks them.

Also, the narration will explain the situation and then Twilight explains it again in previous pages. Redundancy is redundant.

traductor Google (lo siento, no hablo español):
Parte de la narración no es necesario. Puedo ver el agujero en el tejido del espacio-tiempo y el monstruo gigante, muchas gracias. Yo puedo entender Steven ha notado una vez que los ataca. Además, la narración se explicará la situación y después de Crepúsculo explica de nuevo en las páginas anteriores. La redundancia es redundante.

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mauroz In reply to BaselessConclusion [2013-04-07 15:31:23 +0000 UTC]

you are right but I can not help XD .. but a plus is that eh narratives limited XD

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MrSpyNL In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 23:06:15 +0000 UTC]

Haha, love the moustache part. THis should be a tv series

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mauroz In reply to MrSpyNL [2013-04-07 15:29:56 +0000 UTC]

XD thanks

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omgurnub12 In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 22:26:17 +0000 UTC]

!!!! I don't even care about the translation errors this web comic series is fucking amazing.

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mauroz In reply to omgurnub12 [2013-04-07 15:29:48 +0000 UTC]

already corrected and thanks ^^

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Cerony00Z In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 21:05:46 +0000 UTC]

Rarity suffers a bit because of the translation. Her usual grace and formality isn't conveyed very well. (I should have been quicker with that translation )

I had guessed that Rarity's powers would be related to earth considering the trend of how the girls' powers are being demonstrated.

I really like that Steven Magnet was used for Rarity's intro battle.

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mauroz In reply to Cerony00Z [2013-04-07 15:29:14 +0000 UTC]

already corrected, and rarity has control of the land because it gives possibility to attack from a distance (also gives a touch of irony to be someone who does not like getting dirty)...thanks

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Cerony00Z In reply to mauroz [2013-04-08 17:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, earth is obvious and almost perfect for Rarity.

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Fist-of-doom In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 21:01:50 +0000 UTC]

Ha, Steven the River Dragon. Even in this world his mustach can't get a break.

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mauroz In reply to Fist-of-doom [2013-04-07 15:27:49 +0000 UTC]

XD

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foxesdemonica In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 20:38:34 +0000 UTC]

Baby Spike is so cute And I love the chibi Fausticorn!

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mauroz In reply to foxesdemonica [2013-04-07 15:27:20 +0000 UTC]

XD thanks

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foxesdemonica In reply to mauroz [2013-04-08 12:27:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the fabulous comic.

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The-Alien-Entity In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 20:18:09 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! Besides the awkward translation errors, it was very well done! Looking forward to what happens next!

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mauroz In reply to The-Alien-Entity [2013-04-07 15:27:10 +0000 UTC]

already corrected and thanks

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nevwyn18 In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 19:59:41 +0000 UTC]

yayayayyayay!

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mauroz In reply to nevwyn18 [2013-04-07 15:26:36 +0000 UTC]

XDDD

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Backjack-Kitsune In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 19:53:23 +0000 UTC]

wiser words could have not been spoken great work my friend cant wait for the next instalment

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mauroz In reply to Backjack-Kitsune [2013-04-07 15:26:31 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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Backjack-Kitsune In reply to mauroz [2013-04-07 17:34:13 +0000 UTC]

npnp

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pikalax1 In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 19:46:23 +0000 UTC]

It started out good, but the translation got so much worse with each panel. In the future, don't indiscriminately use the first translation you receive; wait for other translations to come in, and between them judge (either yourself, or have an English-speaking friend be the judge) which one is best.

Empezó bien, pero la traducción se puso mucho peor con cada panel. En el futuro, no utilice indiscriminadamente la primera traducción que recibe; espere la llegada de unas otras traducciones, y entre ellas juzgue (ya sea usted mismo o tener un amigo de habla Inglés ser el juez) en que es la mejora.

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mauroz In reply to pikalax1 [2013-04-07 15:26:04 +0000 UTC]

si pero no se ingles por eso no se si esta bien echo ..y espero que las personas que lo lean me lo hagan saber ^^

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pikalax1 In reply to mauroz [2013-04-07 17:29:38 +0000 UTC]

And that's why you need a reader and editor who can correct your grammatical errors. Preferably, someone who knows both languages very well.

Y por eso necesitas un lector y editor que puede reparar los errores de gramática y ortografía. Preferablemente, alguien que sepa muy bien los dos idiomas.

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ImperfectXIII In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 18:35:37 +0000 UTC]

This has all the makings of a mahō shōjo. So much so that it seriously needs an animated adaptation. It's THAT good.

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mauroz In reply to ImperfectXIII [2013-04-07 15:24:35 +0000 UTC]

XDD thanks

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Nightcrawler9990 In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 18:00:28 +0000 UTC]

Twilight is short, or Rarity is very tall. Either way makes sense to me.
Great page

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mauroz In reply to Nightcrawler9990 [2013-04-07 15:24:07 +0000 UTC]

XD thanks

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Nightcrawler9990 In reply to mauroz [2013-04-07 19:15:46 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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tigreanpony In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 17:05:56 +0000 UTC]

Well done though some of the translation was muddled but I love this comic.

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mauroz In reply to tigreanpony [2013-04-07 15:23:32 +0000 UTC]

already corrected and thanks

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SleepyKiks In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 16:39:23 +0000 UTC]

this has to be one of my favourite webcomics. I have been waiting for an update and this has more than met expectations. <3

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mauroz In reply to SleepyKiks [2013-04-07 15:22:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for watching ^^

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RisaKeisu In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 16:23:43 +0000 UTC]

This is so awesome, i wish it was a real series! Damn good job, i want to read more now Hurry hurry and make more

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mauroz In reply to RisaKeisu [2013-04-07 15:21:41 +0000 UTC]

XDD thanks

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TheJokeKing33 In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 16:05:21 +0000 UTC]

Good God, This is awesome! I can't wait to see how they defeat him.

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mauroz In reply to TheJokeKing33 [2013-04-07 15:21:07 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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TheJokeKing33 In reply to mauroz [2013-04-07 15:46:08 +0000 UTC]

Hayseed said some really prolific stuff there and now I can't wait to see what Applejack's power is since Rarity control Earth.

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dinogirl39 In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 15:23:57 +0000 UTC]

i love this comic cant wait to read more

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mauroz In reply to dinogirl39 [2013-04-07 15:21:01 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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LightningCh4ser In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 15:08:27 +0000 UTC]

Yay~ Rarirty
Btw who does the English grammar corrections? they are truly horrible But I read through them

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mauroz In reply to LightningCh4ser [2013-04-07 15:20:52 +0000 UTC]

XD already corrected and thanks

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JumpingKumquat In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 14:58:28 +0000 UTC]

Impressive work as always. I loved the story with Rarity and the homeless man. Keep up the good work!

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mauroz In reply to JumpingKumquat [2013-04-07 15:20:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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JumpingKumquat In reply to mauroz [2013-04-07 23:55:13 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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KenReels In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 14:56:49 +0000 UTC]

Filly fausticorn for the win.

The more strips you do the more excited I am for the next.

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mauroz In reply to KenReels [2013-04-07 15:19:46 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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HAPPY2322 In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 14:38:04 +0000 UTC]

Wait, Twilight is 14 and Rarity is 16 so how old is pinkie???

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mauroz In reply to HAPPY2322 [2013-04-07 15:19:21 +0000 UTC]

pinkie 14-15 (birthday in one episode) XD
FL 14
AJ 15
RD 13 XD

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HAPPY2322 In reply to mauroz [2013-04-07 16:19:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow, RD is so young, she is like only one year older than me XD
So Pinkie is becoming 15 am I right?

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