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Thanks!! (the translation into English) ^^


here special halloween: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…

here the introduction: fav.me/d5gq1b1

MLP1 part 1 here: fav.me/d5m5n26
MLP1 part 2 here: fav.me/d5onjh7

MLP2 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP3 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP3 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…


MLP4 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP4 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP4 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP4 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP4 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP5 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…   
MLP5 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP6 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP7 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP8 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 6 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 7 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP9 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…

MLP10 part 1 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 2 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 6 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 7 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…



second part of the fourth chapter  hope you like it 


merry christmas!!

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Comments: 736

patatachip [2014-01-11 21:42:33 +0000 UTC]

AAHHHH THIS JERNFREKJNGEKJRGJKRENFSER BJGW I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER SAJNDJKASFNJAKN AHHHH YOUR ART IS SO AMAZING THIS SHOULD B E MADE INTO A MOVIE ADKSJFNAIJFBRIBWGERJGWIASJDSKVMKOJKRGNFJEK WHY DONT YOU WRITE FOR MLP!??!?! WHY!?!??!?!?!?!?! YOU SHOULD HAVE YOUR OWN SPIN OFF SERIES THIS IS SO GOOD ITS ALWAYS SO GREAT DSMKFAMGAREFERNJA IM SCREAAMINGGG AHHHHH

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ahenry19 In reply to ??? [2014-01-11 20:49:23 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS AWESOME!! You draw the characters so well, the dialogue is great, and the whole story is so creative and unique. I LOVE IT!!!! When will the next one be out?

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mlpFlaraStardust In reply to ??? [2014-01-11 20:43:36 +0000 UTC]

This is sooo awesome! Just an idea: You should make Twilight an Alicorn princess since she's one in seaon 4.

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NightmareZV In reply to mlpFlaraStardust [2014-01-14 03:51:14 +0000 UTC]

this story goes out of the main idea of the show, would be ok, but at the same time, the show "chronology" (or something like that) is not related to what is happening...

anyway, he can always (if he likes the idea) put her as an alicorn (or add details to her transformation) later as another level of her power, once she dominates that one perfectly or something like that

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mlpFlaraStardust In reply to NightmareZV [2014-01-26 17:16:39 +0000 UTC]

Ok, thanks! I just would like to see her with wings

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NightmareZV In reply to mlpFlaraStardust [2014-01-30 18:25:52 +0000 UTC]

well yes would be cool indeed

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Brony-Poke-Whovan In reply to ??? [2014-01-09 20:35:21 +0000 UTC]

When will the next page come out


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Vol-Jin In reply to ??? [2014-01-09 16:14:21 +0000 UTC]

I do believe the techincal term for this kinda moment is "Shits be gettin' real"

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tammy1a In reply to ??? [2014-01-09 04:37:53 +0000 UTC]

I love these. they really are amazing

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Basinox In reply to ??? [2014-01-08 21:53:50 +0000 UTC]

shit going down fast

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Fighterpilot555 [2014-01-08 03:54:01 +0000 UTC]

Some guy on iFunny was posting these and was kind enough to mention who drew them.

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Hero-of-Timothy In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 21:40:56 +0000 UTC]

I don't usually like fan fictions and such, but this is a great story and excellent art. Each part has me waiting for the next. Keep up the good work. 

Your first language is Spanish, yes? I wish I could comment in Spanish to be polite, but I've only had two years of it and I'm not very good at it. Lo siento.

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JETJK3 In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 10:11:53 +0000 UTC]

I knew he wasn't all bad he looks a little bit like *mumble* it would also explain his other actions in a way.

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Klawzin [2014-01-06 05:43:23 +0000 UTC]

This is really good! Thanks for an awesome read!

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EpicHawk91 In reply to ??? [2014-01-06 03:50:29 +0000 UTC]

Really like this part. Can't wait to see what the next part has in store.

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mechhoof29 In reply to ??? [2014-01-06 02:33:49 +0000 UTC]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I NEEEEEDDDSS THE NEXT PART I NEEEDS IT. anywho this is so awesom

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ThePoeticDragon [2014-01-04 23:56:05 +0000 UTC]

I NEED MOAR!!!!

Lol, but still, this is freaking AWESOME!

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FallenShadow000 [2014-01-04 01:45:08 +0000 UTC]

DAMN!!! NEED MOOOAAAARRR!!!

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Pyro-Cat-F [2014-01-03 21:45:34 +0000 UTC]

Grrrrrr, I am addicted and I ran out of them to read


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mauroz In reply to Pyro-Cat-F [2014-01-04 00:59:36 +0000 UTC]

sorry >. thank you very much ^^

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Pyro-Cat-F In reply to mauroz [2014-01-04 05:12:40 +0000 UTC]

soon?... Not soon enough! It is too good :3


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recee965 In reply to Pyro-Cat-F [2014-01-05 23:27:04 +0000 UTC]

I agree, its to good to stop reading and cliff hangers you really know how to keep peoples attention

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Shiruvira In reply to ??? [2014-01-03 13:54:33 +0000 UTC]

OMG i looove your comics.

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mauroz In reply to Shiruvira [2014-01-04 00:58:56 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^

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SecndLogic In reply to ??? [2014-01-03 05:21:40 +0000 UTC]

Gah!  Pulled in by another great chapter!  It's great to see more of Applejack.  It may seem odd, but I'm sincerely hoping that AJ holds onto some of her reticence.  It really adds a certain sophistication to her character, something not often associated with cowboy/girl types.  It could also be a good trait to go with her honesty.  Speak less, speak true.


Something tells me Applejack has suffered at the hands of some flim-flammers in her past!

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mauroz In reply to SecndLogic [2014-01-04 00:58:36 +0000 UTC]

soon know of his past

and thanks ^^

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Vol-Jin [2014-01-02 23:40:42 +0000 UTC]

Still amazing as ever. This comic is what the magical girl genre should have always been. The animation is beautiful, almost flawless. I would pay to buy edititions of it it is that wonerful. The fight scenes are a tad flawed, but stil lmuch better then about %90  other anime all together. So keep up the good work

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mauroz In reply to Vol-Jin [2014-01-03 00:24:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^

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MorphiusX [2014-01-02 20:56:12 +0000 UTC]

Something 'oughtta happen next!

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mauroz In reply to MorphiusX [2014-01-03 00:23:24 +0000 UTC]

XDDD cool

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kidL [2014-01-02 13:17:30 +0000 UTC]

i feel as if haze and AJ know each other. they see to have history and he is big and built its almost like he's big mac.

so here is what i think big mac got taking over by a discord shard and made havoc on sweet apple acres. Then joined up with Luna.
now that would put AJ in a big mess and make her hate big mac but she cant just hate him because hes family so she terns it on all men.

this is just what i think. Anyway i love your work and can't wait for the next one!
 

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mauroz In reply to kidL [2014-01-03 00:23:13 +0000 UTC]

interesting hypothesis ^^


everything will be known in due time

and thanks ^^

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CadetotheEndFTW [2014-01-02 07:07:32 +0000 UTC]

I don't want to be that guy for saying that or saying something that will offend so here we go: but first, feel free to say what you will for what I am about to say; express your thoughts, whether it is negative or positive.


Okay here we go: 


Towards the end of the chapter, I have a feeling that this might look like an attempt rape scene (even though it doesn't look like it but you get the idea). Because you know, it has that sinister feeling of something that might happen. Not only that but by judging on how AJ felt towards men (even though it might not look like it but you can still sense it) and something must have happen to her in the past. Like I said, just throwing it out there, feel free to speak your mind on it; have any questions or rant for what I said, you can either comment down below, note me, or on my blog cadetotheendftw.deviantart.com…

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mauroz In reply to CadetotheEndFTW [2014-01-03 00:20:21 +0000 UTC]

AJ had a very difficult time but fortunately it was not rape.


however one of the characters in the story if suffered something, but I am still thinking if I should include that in the story

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CadetotheEndFTW In reply to mauroz [2014-01-03 04:25:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh well that's good that AJ was not rape in the past or in this case right now (but was it attempt?) 


Well you could either post something on wether you want to add it or not and we decide OR, however you feel more comfortable. 


On the Pro side, we get to know more about that character's past. On the Con side, it might not sit well with the other readers. (there is more for each side but don't feel like doing that right now )


In my opinion, I would like to know more on what happened to the character and what she suffered through. I know that I am not the only one who feels that way and wants to know. But that's just my opinion, the final decision would be yours. 

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Darentez [2014-01-02 06:54:42 +0000 UTC]

the battle looked like a Saint Seiya battle, I even was expecting a "Pegasus Meteor Punch", it was cool...

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mauroz In reply to Darentez [2014-01-03 00:16:54 +0000 UTC]

XDDD thanks

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Miss-Awesomeness11 In reply to ??? [2014-01-02 04:02:10 +0000 UTC]

MOAR!

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mauroz In reply to Miss-Awesomeness11 [2014-01-03 00:16:28 +0000 UTC]

soon ^^

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Miss-Awesomeness11 In reply to mauroz [2014-01-04 15:08:49 +0000 UTC]

YES!!!!!!

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o0Airheart0o [2014-01-01 23:35:59 +0000 UTC]

I have a feeling that Haze is working with Discord.

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mauroz In reply to o0Airheart0o [2014-01-03 00:16:21 +0000 UTC]

XD all in due time

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o0Airheart0o In reply to ??? [2014-01-01 23:35:12 +0000 UTC]

Dang it, cliffhangers!

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mauroz In reply to o0Airheart0o [2014-01-03 00:15:45 +0000 UTC]

XDDD sorry

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nekochansweet [2014-01-01 20:58:17 +0000 UTC]

omg whats going to happen next.ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 

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mauroz In reply to nekochansweet [2014-01-01 23:14:58 +0000 UTC]

XD sorry...soon

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StonerKid85 In reply to ??? [2014-01-01 19:55:36 +0000 UTC]

Applejack makes fighting in a short skirt look professional. XD

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mauroz In reply to StonerKid85 [2014-01-01 23:14:46 +0000 UTC]

XDDD

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Jlargent [2014-01-01 08:05:34 +0000 UTC]

Round 1...FIGHT!

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mauroz In reply to Jlargent [2014-01-01 23:14:28 +0000 UTC]

XD

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