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Thanks!! (the translation into English)( updated corrections)^^
here special halloween: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
here the introduction: fav.me/d5gq1b1
MLP1 part 1 here: fav.me/d5m5n26
MLP1 part 2 here: fav.me/d5onjh7
MLP2 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 6 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 7 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 1 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 2 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 6 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 7 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
third part of the fourth chapter hope you like it
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Comments: 754
nemaides123 In reply to ??? [2014-02-19 10:37:16 +0000 UTC]
You should consider updating your list on Part 2, some people don't know part 3 is up ......
mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
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NavyCat260 In reply to ??? [2014-02-19 04:16:57 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing! Great job! I love Applejack's personality.
Also, Rainbow and Fluttershy totally remind me of Black Star and Tsubaki from Soul Eater XD
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sweatshirtbrony In reply to ??? [2014-02-18 02:14:08 +0000 UTC]
Now THIS is how Equestria Girls should've been done XD
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MillennialDan In reply to MythicalNine [2014-02-22 15:35:13 +0000 UTC]
Because I liked the movie. I like this too, but I really don't see why people make such a fuss over Equestria Girls. It was fine.
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MythicalNine In reply to MillennialDan [2014-02-23 10:56:19 +0000 UTC]
I had no problem with Equestria Girls, but this had been even better
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spottedstar1123 In reply to ??? [2014-02-18 01:50:43 +0000 UTC]
I love Pinkie in this! And AJ's part in the end
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Bronitz In reply to ??? [2014-02-16 18:12:42 +0000 UTC]
That guy can stop AJ easily!
He'll defeat AJ without any difficulty if he able to get her boots off
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Archangel87-B In reply to ??? [2014-02-16 05:31:02 +0000 UTC]
ARGH~! Why does Haze feel so familiar!? Something's off about him, and I'm going to find out what!
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LuvAllPokemon In reply to ??? [2014-02-15 08:09:34 +0000 UTC]
I'm still confused as to which side Haze is on. But ooh I like Pinkie's personality in this world XD Her and Rarity are so badass!
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crowmagnon In reply to ??? [2014-02-15 04:41:16 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, I'd been entertaining the theory that Haze was Sombra reincarnated, with his own agenda, but that doesn't quite fit with his dialogue here. Still left wondering who he could be, if he isn't a straight-up OC, but I suppose half the fun is finding out in due time.
Also, you're making it realllly hard to figure out which girl I like more, Applejack or Pinkie. I love sexy amazons like AJ, but I also adore Pinkie's personality combined with her absolutely YUMMY figure in this series.
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darkjeppe23 In reply to ??? [2014-02-14 08:24:58 +0000 UTC]
wow is grant i hop you undertand me
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ChiYukiTsuki-Chan In reply to ??? [2014-02-14 00:50:59 +0000 UTC]
Oh dear... Haze knows how to make a girl pissed off, lol; it's getting good!!! I can't wait for the next piece~!!!!!!!
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Mystique84 In reply to ??? [2014-02-13 12:21:52 +0000 UTC]
AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH IT GOT SO FREAKING GOOD!!! I love your art work, it's amazing and the story is thrililing, I am checking my messages everyday for the update and it's like the best day ever when you update this story!! I hope Fluttershy gets there in time and I hope Applejack beats this asshole! Go magical girls!
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Elissiakitty In reply to ??? [2014-02-11 03:27:59 +0000 UTC]
Squee, it's here at last! ^_^
Now I hope we don't have to wait months and months for the next one ;~;
I can see why it took so long, though. You didn't reuse nearly as many frames as usual, or if you did you disguised it well. :3
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Gungelion [2014-02-11 03:23:17 +0000 UTC]
I am going to take a guess and say that is big mac
panty shot!
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DhilieDale In reply to ??? [2014-02-10 11:11:13 +0000 UTC]
Amazing as always dude....this is just....woow...keep up the good work..and also...I reeally reaaally love to see the next chapter I just can't WAIT!!! >_< ( but seriously take your time, don't be too rush ^^ and always be awesome )
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KawaiiRoseHime In reply to ??? [2014-02-10 06:00:03 +0000 UTC]
I can't stop reading this series!
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linksbro1 In reply to ??? [2014-02-10 05:18:06 +0000 UTC]
oooooOOOOOOHHHH MMYYYYYY GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWD!!!!
THIS IS LITERALLY THE MOST EPIC THING EVER
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tehwatcher In reply to ??? [2014-02-10 03:34:27 +0000 UTC]
cool great as ever keep it up my friend hope they win and nice u really have a great imagination good luck in next work
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ThePoeticDragon In reply to ??? [2014-02-09 06:24:23 +0000 UTC]
O_o
I NEED MOAR!!!
Amazing as usual.
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StreamSecret In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 18:42:11 +0000 UTC]
pinkie looks really pretty i wonder what will happen to Aj, Rainbow, and Fluttershy. Is Rainbow going to attack Fluttershy?
please write more!
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JETJK3 In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 07:57:25 +0000 UTC]
Gilda better get in line, Haze is the new Badass
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CrystalHanaHM2013 In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 02:59:57 +0000 UTC]
Pinkie looks better than the other chapters I've read. Rarity it's a bit strange. Twilight looks better in the 3 corner view. AJ I dunno, just have to keep reading and Dash doesn't look amazing as Pinkie. I dunno looking at Pinkie seems to look better than the others cuz she's the easiest to draw so it's easier to draw her. Twilight it's soo hard to make it right (if u know her eyes) amd Fluttershy sorry to be rude but others says she's cute in this comic but to me maybe the form is weird that's why she looks bad..... I soooo sorry but cool AJ n PP they way better right than others.
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heathrin18 [2014-02-07 06:32:44 +0000 UTC]
Haze...hmm...I have a theory about him but I'm almost afraid to share it...would hate to actually figure it out spoil it like I have before...curse my insight! *weeps*
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Mattpwnsall [2014-02-06 21:37:39 +0000 UTC]
Haha, love the even better panty shot
But good point, what is Haze's game? Why's he doing this?
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BladeSquall [2014-02-06 15:45:30 +0000 UTC]
Wow... this has been an amazing ride from the beginning. i really do enjoy this AU, but it's grueling to keep checking back for updates.
Time to watch!
Oh, and by the way, Pinkie flirting with Descent is hilarious, just as her calling Gale old.
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mauroz In reply to BladeSquall [2014-02-06 15:48:34 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much ^^
I can not give date because barely finished, the public
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MorphiusX In reply to ??? [2014-02-06 09:01:27 +0000 UTC]
Oh, forgot to mention, that it'd be a blast if the bearer of harmony all united sooner or later.
Makes me paranoid if they ever separated again under bad terms...
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EchoOfTheWolf [2014-02-06 04:36:44 +0000 UTC]
I can't wait for part 4! This series is easily one of the best MLP fan comics around. I love your original take on the story, and how you've changed things, but kept them still true to the source. Everything about this is amazing! Your reinterpretation of relationship paradigms, your re-imagining of early events in the show, even the origins of the characters... I love this, and would LOVE to see this animated! Seriously, if this were an anime, I'd be it's biggest fan even if it had nothing to do with MLP.
On that note, WHY aren't you doing this professionally?! Your story telling and artwork are mind bogglingly brilliant! Honestly, I hope you can read enough English or have someone that can for you to know how much I appreciate your work. This could easily turn friends of mine that aren't even fans of MLP at all into Bronies, it's THAT great! Keep up the marvelous work!
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mauroz In reply to EchoOfTheWolf [2014-02-06 15:46:01 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much for your expressions of support
I am no expert to publish things professionally u.uU
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EchoOfTheWolf In reply to mauroz [2014-02-07 23:14:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank YOU for an amazing comic! ;D
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Jazz-The-Cabbit [2014-02-06 02:57:24 +0000 UTC]
(Me) : SOOOO MUUUUCH DRAMMAAAA !!! \(>A<)/
Please, keep going ! You haven't got any idea how much it's awesome !
Thanks to you... and for the first time of my life... i'm a fan of MLP !
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mauroz In reply to Jazz-The-Cabbit [2014-02-06 04:01:58 +0000 UTC]
XDDD
thank you very much ^^
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HiveLordLusa [2014-02-06 00:38:05 +0000 UTC]
My goodness, the story is really getting more intense! Fantastic work as usual, Mauroz! I love where the story is going, and can't wait to see what else happens!
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