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SniperTeam4 In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 23:21:05 +0000 UTC]

Good chapter. Totally saw the disaster coming with Rarity's outfit the moment Spike walked in. Loved it.

Absolutely no idea what is going on in the last part with Haze. Don't know any of those people, so I'm excited to see where you're going with them. Your own original characters, or are these perhaps characters that you have managed to disguise so well that I'm missing them?
Theory: Haze is Big Mac, which I'm sure a bunch of other people are already guessing too.

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mauroz In reply to SniperTeam4 [2015-04-05 17:39:29 +0000 UTC]

all in due time XD

if they are characters created for the story

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SkyDragon90 In reply to SniperTeam4 [2015-04-05 00:44:17 +0000 UTC]

Imagine what would have happened if he saw the rip in her dress earlier! XD

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SniperTeam4 In reply to SkyDragon90 [2015-04-05 05:08:40 +0000 UTC]

He would have died. Massive blood loss. From the nose area. :-D

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SkyDragon90 In reply to SniperTeam4 [2015-04-05 11:40:28 +0000 UTC]

All. Over. Rainbow Dash. XD
"Oh, my GOD, what's wrong with you, bleeding on me like that!?!"

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animals10 In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 23:14:22 +0000 UTC]

LOL Spike and Rainbow's fight... their the same height... "you're front is just like me." ????? " You got nothing here... hehehehehehe" BANG!!! " OW!"

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mauroz In reply to animals10 [2015-04-05 17:05:28 +0000 UTC]

XD

thank you very much for watching

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Jmaster99 In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 23:13:10 +0000 UTC]

Like this as much as the other parts. Keep up the good work

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mauroz In reply to Jmaster99 [2015-04-05 17:03:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^

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PaintPalletePony In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 23:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Well I have been keeping up with this story for awhile and I have to say I a enjoying it quite a bit. I like how Spike thinks Rainbow is a guy at first because of her chest size. I also pretty much get the gist of what is going on but the one thing I'm wondering about is Edward. Not only do I not know who he's supposed to be the human version of but I don't understand his familiarity with Apple Jack! I thought he might of somehow been Big Mac but then when he transformed into his true form I wasn't sure anymore.

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mauroz In reply to PaintPalletePony [2015-04-05 17:02:15 +0000 UTC]

all in due time XD 

some characters are characters created for the story

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PaintPalletePony In reply to mauroz [2015-04-05 22:35:08 +0000 UTC]

Okay thank you for making things slightly less confusing. Oh! I just got an idea about who he is. If he recognises AJ but doesn't seem to know her.... I'll keep my theories to myself lol. Anyways when do you think the next update of the comic will happen? I can't wait to see what comes next!

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AJInu-Okami In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 23:01:09 +0000 UTC]

Pinkie Pie: The most sexual repressed/Boy crazed of the group. Can we make that canon? XD Also love how Spike joked around with Rainbow XD

Soooooooooon AJ will come along and we all probably know that she will be the hardest one to get into the group. Wonder how the gang will handle AJ without her trying to donkey kick them.

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mauroz In reply to AJInu-Okami [2015-04-05 16:59:05 +0000 UTC]

XD  all in due time

thank you very much for watching ^^

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AJInu-Okami In reply to mauroz [2015-04-05 20:45:46 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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VKedzie In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 22:59:21 +0000 UTC]

I'm completely outraged by the whole "I like to manipulate and change men" bit. 

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mauroz In reply to VKedzie [2015-04-05 16:57:45 +0000 UTC]

XD  thank you very much for watching

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Henki-Pie In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 22:58:02 +0000 UTC]

This is getting really exciting. 

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mauroz In reply to Henki-Pie [2015-04-05 16:56:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much for watching ^^

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Kenneth9010 In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 22:56:00 +0000 UTC]

Wait, th-th-th-th-th-th-that gem! Did Twilight's Familiar said something about the heart-shaped ruby in chapter 2 page 3?

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mauroz In reply to Kenneth9010 [2015-04-05 16:52:44 +0000 UTC]

XD yes

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benethorpl In reply to Kenneth9010 [2015-04-04 23:06:59 +0000 UTC]

yep...

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dres870 In reply to benethorpl [2015-04-04 23:30:14 +0000 UTC]

is the same from the show he gave rare right?

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CleverMessenger In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 22:32:51 +0000 UTC]

Shit just got real

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mauroz In reply to CleverMessenger [2015-04-04 23:01:27 +0000 UTC]

XD   thank you very much for watching

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CleverMessenger In reply to mauroz [2015-04-05 12:51:54 +0000 UTC]

Np!~
I can't wait for the next page.

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LeonAlmalsy In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 22:31:53 +0000 UTC]

Can this be the Pinkie Pie show? I'm sure she can carry this story all her own, especially with her trollface.

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mauroz In reply to LeonAlmalsy [2015-04-04 23:00:41 +0000 UTC]

XD   thank you very much for watching

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princessarien In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 22:21:55 +0000 UTC]

I have to say, Rainbow is officially my favorite of the bunch She's just so cocky and fun....and powerful too to boot as the last few pages show. For some reason her interactions with Spike in this round of the comic reminds me of Edward Elric in Fullmetal Alchemist I'm loving every minute of this though, never seen the show for My Little Pony, but this comic is absolutely fantastic and well-done in every single possible way imaginable, keep up the great work

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L1ghtningRider In reply to princessarien [2015-04-04 23:55:32 +0000 UTC]

YES! That is correct. I knew she reminded me of someone! It makes so much sense! They're both short and anime and and... I think that's it.   "WHO ARE YOU CALLING SHORT!?" "Yeah! I'm not! Strangely, most mares are the same height, weight, wingspan and horn size except for a select few others. OH NO!!! WHATS GOING ON!!! IM TURNING INTO AN EGGHEAD!!!!"    Lol jk. I know that there are more similarities but you probably already know what they are.

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mauroz In reply to L1ghtningRider [2015-04-05 16:51:02 +0000 UTC]

XDin my story did not want everyone to have the same height  in real life is not so

thanks ^^

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L1ghtningRider In reply to mauroz [2015-04-05 17:41:08 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I know and the heights do make sense, I'm not saying that it's a bad thing. Just the comparison between her and Edward Elric.

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princessarien In reply to L1ghtningRider [2015-04-05 00:52:20 +0000 UTC]

Well they both can be a bit of a hair-trigger temper, though that's much more Ed's thing than Rainbow's, though she has had her moments of it....I think part of it is also the use of the anime faces That's one of the things I love about that Japanese artstyle in manga and anime, they have so much more interesting reaction faces and expressions than in most western/American cartoons/animation/comics.

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L1ghtningRider In reply to princessarien [2015-04-05 09:29:33 +0000 UTC]

That is all completly true. That and they have way more detail than most western cartoons. Sometimes, you can even see a single strand of hair. And people wonder why I'm such a fan of anime. And why I'm learning Japanese.   

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princessarien In reply to L1ghtningRider [2015-04-06 01:07:09 +0000 UTC]

They certainly seem to...the only anime I've actually seen are Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood and a couple series/seasons of Digimon, though I suppose if you wanted to you could technically count both series of Avatar (The Last Airbender/Legend of Aang and Legend of Korra) as anime since it's that kind of artstyle even if both the creators/writers are Americans...

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mauroz In reply to princessarien [2015-04-04 22:59:28 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

that is the idea that people can enjoy this comic without the impulse to watch the series MLP

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princessarien In reply to mauroz [2015-04-05 00:49:04 +0000 UTC]

You're quite welcome and you're certainly doing a really good job at keeping with your intention of having it be accessible to everyone and something that not just the fans of the show will get and enjoy I'm really looking forward to seeing where all this goes.

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Aeon-Silence In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 22:19:33 +0000 UTC]

I wonder who is the real villan?
Chrysalis, Discord, Luna, Tirek, or Sunset?
But I hope Sunset joins the Mane 6 and become the Mane-7.

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mauroz In reply to Aeon-Silence [2015-04-04 22:55:55 +0000 UTC]

will have to wait to find out >.👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Aeon-Silence In reply to mauroz [2015-04-04 23:03:15 +0000 UTC]

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Aeon-Silence In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 22:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Christopher....?
A male version of Chrysalis perhaps.

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mauroz In reply to Aeon-Silence [2015-04-04 22:52:36 +0000 UTC]

all in due time XD

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KairaTheWolf In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 22:17:22 +0000 UTC]

I feel like the 2 girls are Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon maybe.  I hope it's them and not Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom...

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mauroz In reply to KairaTheWolf [2015-04-04 22:52:10 +0000 UTC]

all in due time XD

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RoseDragon1 In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 22:04:57 +0000 UTC]

Nice!! ALL OF THE REFERENCES!!!
Pinkie Pie, you troll face user, you!!
Look before you Sleep!!
Gilda the Brush Off (Pinkie and Rainbow's faces give it away!!)
Pinkie... You're over the top emotions are wonderful; however, I never took you for a Dominatrix!
Pinkie: What's wrong with that?
Me: Nothing, just that... it doesn't seem to fit the same way into your personality... It just seems weird to me.
Pinkie: (shrugs) Can't expect acceptance from everyone.
Mysterious Mare Do Well... funny how people actually like using it when they hate it so much!! It's a perfect use in here though!!
Um... is there an episode (or is it comic) that has Spike questioning Rainbow Dash's gender or something?
Okay... Green color with Slitted eyes? Sombra? And the transformation!!  Luna Eclipsed reference indeed!!
Great job!!
Anything I missed?

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mauroz In reply to RoseDragon1 [2015-04-04 22:51:08 +0000 UTC]

XDDD    thank you very much for watching

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shypegasister10 In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 22:01:39 +0000 UTC]

I think that Applejack acts the way she does because of her parents, whatever happened to them.

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mauroz In reply to shypegasister10 [2015-04-04 22:48:06 +0000 UTC]

all in due time XD

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benethorpl In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 22:00:00 +0000 UTC]

Not a bad episode, but compared to the previous ones it felt kind of rushed, especially the Luna scene, as in Descent and Nightingale were her hirelings, right? So why havent they been summoned to their boss after a failure of this size? Instead we have a "lol, they failed. Meh, I've got a new, powerful toys in the making, that'll do it, ehehehehe" Maybe it's just me, but I'd rather leave either the pajama party or that "meanwhile in Europe" scene for the next episode and give Luna some more character development.

Story: 6/10
Art: 10/10
Translations: 9/10

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mauroz In reply to benethorpl [2015-04-04 22:47:28 +0000 UTC]

There will be episodes where you will know more on moon, but now it is too early

thank you very much for watching ^^

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