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Thanks to those who donate me in patreon ^^ www.patreon.com/mauroz www.paypal.me/maurozFM
Thanks!! (the translation into English)^^
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here the introduction: fav.me/d5gq1b1
MLP1 part 1 here: fav.me/d5m5n26
MLP1 part 2 here: fav.me/d5onjh7
MLP2 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 6 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 7 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 1 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 2 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 6 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 7 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
Chapter 9 hope you like it ^^
sorry for the delay n_nU
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Comments: 252
DanvilleBengal In reply to ??? [2017-10-23 14:27:17 +0000 UTC]
Look at it from his perceptive--apparently girls that are his age are either creepily stalkerish or assholes because of the whole 'eww...cooties!!!' thing. And yes, I understand that they are kids- they are naive and unknowingly of their feelings...so a girl will rather hit (literary hit) a boy of tease them to no end....
...I don't care if they are kids, that's still assholish...I don't blame him for crushing on older girls. Seems like the other girls can care for him even if it's a 'little brother' thing.
.....go ahead. Blame and/or flame me as you wish. It's quite obvious that I've had some bad experiences with it and generally distrust them...I'm aware of how pathetic I am by writing this....
EDIT: I think the day Spike finally gives up Rarity will not just be because of his connection with her, but that finally THAT GIRL (or guy--I don't judge) shows up and show Spike that there are girls out there his own age that would like to hang out with him (and at the same time not make him feel like a shmuck), and no I really don't think it's gonna be one of the Crusaders....as a matter of fact, there has to be a close to 180 on them for me to actually feel decent with Spike going after one of them...
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mauroz In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 18:46:52 +0000 UTC]
yes, although at that age some children first look at the older ones before those of their same age
thank you very much for seeing him ^^
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demongaara105 In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 16:12:13 +0000 UTC]
"What would a 16 year old girl look like dating a 10 year old"
I think the word you're looking for is cradle robber.
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CmacX In reply to demongaara105 [2017-10-12 16:16:29 +0000 UTC]
Exactly. Something like that.
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Hotspot-the-626th In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 15:10:54 +0000 UTC]
Awesome chapter!
Sci-Twi is so cute
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mauroz In reply to Hotspot-the-626th [2017-10-12 18:44:05 +0000 UTC]
XD
thank you very much for seeing him
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eljai25 In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 15:06:10 +0000 UTC]
YAY I WAS WAITING FOR ENGLISH VERSION
-octopus attacks rarity- OMG , my mind is so disturbed cause of hentai that im imaginating another version
GOOD jOB WITH THIS FIRST PART , WAITING FOR THE NEXT ONE
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mauroz In reply to eljai25 [2017-10-12 18:43:54 +0000 UTC]
XD
thank you very much for seeing him ^^
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mauroz In reply to Emersonian [2017-10-12 18:43:23 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much for seeing him ^^
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BladeSquall In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 14:40:34 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that was quite the battle. However, Rarity was severely hurt. And there's that "feeling her pain" thing Spike has when Rarity's heavily injured and Pinkie's berserk button being pressed. And even though Twilight's out of town, her copy is adorable.
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mauroz In reply to BladeSquall [2017-10-12 18:43:08 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much for seeing him ^^
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Isenlyn In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 14:38:24 +0000 UTC]
Don't give Pinkie a living doll ! There are children watching ! XD
I honestly can see Twilight coming back, finding Pinkie doing some kinky stuff with the clone. Pinkie being like "what ? I had question about myself, now at least I sure of it." XD
This chapter went by so fast. I can't wait the next one. Btw when are we gonna learn about Pinkie's past ? I need some backstory !
Great job as always, but I think I can see some improvement, especially on Rainbow's poses. GJ
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mauroz In reply to Isenlyn [2017-10-12 18:40:06 +0000 UTC]
pinkie is just pinkie XD
about pinkie's past, it's too early to show it
and thanks for your constructive criticism ^^
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mauroz In reply to AlienSteel23 [2017-10-12 18:36:20 +0000 UTC]
XD if this is the spike chapter
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lightning116 In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 14:33:10 +0000 UTC]
So wait. Does that also mean that Applebloom is also tsundere?
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mauroz In reply to lightning116 [2017-10-12 18:35:22 +0000 UTC]
XD for nothing, she's just a friend who likes to give advice
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lightning116 In reply to mauroz [2017-10-12 19:51:50 +0000 UTC]
Ah I see. So that punch to the back of Spike's head was just a friendly tap. Emphasis on the word 'tap.'
I mean she is Applejack and Big Mac's little sister.
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Sarahostervig In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 14:18:22 +0000 UTC]
err in the description were is MLP8 part 8? since this is part 9 wheres part 8 link?
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mauroz In reply to Sarahostervig [2017-10-12 18:34:29 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much for letting me know about the error ^^
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ChaosPhantom444 In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 14:14:17 +0000 UTC]
You used the Equestria Girl Twilight as the copy. Nice touch.
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mauroz In reply to ChaosPhantom444 [2017-10-12 18:33:06 +0000 UTC]
XD thank you very much for seeing him
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PowerMaster17 In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 13:58:15 +0000 UTC]
Something tells me that Spikezilla is awakening from his slumber. And it's a bad news too. And hopefully, Twilight get cleansed or controlled her darkness to save her brother and friends in time.
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mauroz In reply to PowerMaster17 [2017-10-12 18:27:09 +0000 UTC]
about spike all in due time XD
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darthrivan In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 13:55:54 +0000 UTC]
Another nice page. And Pinkie has very(x20) odd fetishes. I really want to compliment you on your portrayal of her, though. I'm enjoying her more so than almost any other character with Dash being almost dead even. I could well see this Pinkie holding a story all her own.
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mauroz In reply to darthrivan [2017-10-12 18:25:51 +0000 UTC]
some characters have to let them walk free in history XD
thank you very much for seeing him
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PonyPaladin22 In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 13:47:19 +0000 UTC]
This is getting really good now
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mauroz In reply to Snowdog-zic [2017-10-12 18:23:54 +0000 UTC]
XD just try to get it into reason
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QuatroD In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 13:24:48 +0000 UTC]
And that would be basically easy win if Pinkie just got serious since the begining.
Just noticed: Spike is alone at home while Twi is doing some magic greek tourism. Oh, boy, this chapter gonna end so badly...
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mauroz In reply to QuatroD [2017-10-12 18:22:40 +0000 UTC]
that's his biggest pinkie weakness, he does not take things seriously
XD well spike is not alone, he is with his parents at home
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GUILLE832 In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 13:24:12 +0000 UTC]
Goddamn, shit's hitting the fan now. I love it.
By the way, great job on this one as well; you've come a really long way since you started, specially in the dialogue. It sounds a lot more natural here, and it's sued perfectly to convey whatever emotion the reader is supposed to feel. In that regard, you've improved greatly.
Can't wait for the next part!
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mauroz In reply to GUILLE832 [2017-10-12 18:18:37 +0000 UTC]
thanks ^^
on the translation to English, all merit is from Pred-K-Kaladral ^^
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GUILLE832 In reply to mauroz [2017-10-12 19:18:32 +0000 UTC]
While that is true, someone had to write the dialogue first and thus that credit corresponds you.
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NellzDaBlackKing In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 13:22:40 +0000 UTC]
Another amazing chapter as always. Seeing these always make my day.
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mauroz In reply to NellzDaBlackKing [2017-10-12 18:15:50 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much for seeing him
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FantasyRebirth96 In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 13:22:00 +0000 UTC]
Gosh how brilliant this really looks. I do like this art style of yours~
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FantasyRebirth96 In reply to mauroz [2017-10-13 20:35:21 +0000 UTC]
Your so welcome good person^^ Gosh I'd love to learn more from you really^^ Drawing like you but not really cause I wanna draw my way but I do wanna learn from you cause your totally awesome~
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JohnLee98 In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 13:21:51 +0000 UTC]
Mane 6 is battling the octopus! This music playing: www.google.ca/url?sa=t&rct=j&a…
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