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Published: 2017-06-10 06:05:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 2551; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 57
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i posted the wrong one before. sorry. Also! jemi is not supposed to be the shortest one there. Mo is and shortestRelated content
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TurtleBacon69 [2017-06-10 07:00:50 +0000 UTC]
At some point these characters should get their own unique reference sheets. Being how their currently not up to date with the current art style you are currently using. Plus it could give you a chance to fully flesh out their informations in the descriptions so people would know them fully. This is just my suggestions however, I do enjoy how these characters are & how their stories are unfolding currently I enjoy both Camilla & Claude based on designs. I would also suggest having Luna & Scales more differences with one another I get that their twins but at times it gets rather difficult to tell who is who at times maybe different shades in colors or different outfits to reflect more on their personalities as with the other characters. Some of the characters seem really bland with how they dress & don't show every much personality to them a little more personalities in how they dress would benefit them a lot. I hope I wasn't to harsh on this critique as I normally don't do this sort of thing. I'm just stating my opinion if you wish not to take my advice then I understand completely. Thank you for taking the time to read this & have a lovely day. I wish you the best of luck on your web comic!
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