skyOrange [2001-10-21 02:24:39 +0000 UTC]

it is short and mixed with just the right amount of (body) movement and sound. very lovely..

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MattSpire [2001-09-27 02:54:24 +0000 UTC]

heh.. im listenin to some u2 right now.. (dont laugh at me..) and the lyrics were pretty parallel to this as i read it.. kinda typical whimsical bono-love stuff heh.. ah well yeah ok.. bye bye

-dspayre-
uh oh..

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sanguru [2001-09-26 20:23:38 +0000 UTC]

Nice style in this one. Wonderfully written, I just adore it. keep up the good work, the emotion in this is just raw and hard core. very nice.

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:step-by-step: the dance of life is learned

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inennui [2001-09-26 16:23:26 +0000 UTC]

I will refer to the movie Trainspotting where the violent man dsicovered that his chosen catch for the night was not quite what sHE seemed to be

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keen [2001-09-26 15:28:06 +0000 UTC]

heh... nice... this is spiced with just the right amount of sensuality...

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