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Published: 2001-09-26 00:49:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 24
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:june ends:when my fingers part your lips,
if they ever touch your hair.
the streets of this town are gray
and we're moving in slow motion.
we are wrapped together
like one icicle.
but its always sunny outside
and the motor is always running.
ill sing to the night til the night ends.
and i know ill never reach you.
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Comments: 7
oh, wow.. melting, slowly melting and softly spoken, your words.. the longing. the desire. the pain.
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moly holy
down on the upside am i
wordiful beauty here.
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wow, this one is just makes me speechless. Amazing meggy, just amazing...
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:step-by-step: the dance of life is learned
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The best poems are those that come spontaneously. I love it when you finish a piece and have no idea what it means, then you sit back and start psychoanalysing (for wnat of a better word) it. And the spontaneity shines through in this poem.
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I love deadlines. I love the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.
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hrm. go away. you're starting to sound like me, and that's depressing.
heh anyway.. good poem, i think doomed covered it well..
-dspayre-
uh oh..
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i've been through this desperation... reading about it again made my heart drop and you instantly ruined my day.
haha!
damn man, I specifically like the middle stanza... wrapped together, like being with a person and never able to tell them something.. ie... your feelings for them, etc...
*sigh* memories
great stuff... I like how it's not so literal like alot of the other poems I read.
again.. great.
s.d.i.w.l.w.y.mich ....
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